Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and complete your sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with examples. Avoid unclear phrases like "tattoo feelings" and finish your thoughts. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer wearing contemporary fashion brands because I like their modern designs and higher-quality fabrics. For example, I often buy shirts from a local brand because their cotton feels softer and lasts longer, so I feel comfortable and confident when I wear them.

Sugestão: Make your reasoning clearer and correct awkward phrases. Begin with a direct statement, then explain why with specific details and use linking words (because, so). Avoid unclear expressions like "full moves" and incorrect comparisons.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they suit my everyday routine. Since I work Monday to Friday, I usually choose relaxed trousers and a neat T-shirt because they allow me to move freely and stay comfortable throughout the day.

Sugestão: Answer directly and avoid hesitation. Give a concise reason and a specific example of when you wear T-shirts. Use correct grammar (e.g., "T-shirts are convenient") and linking words like "because" or "for example."

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are versatile and easy to match with other clothes. For example, I often pair a plain T-shirt with jeans and a jacket for a casual, put-together look.

Sugestão: Be more precise and correct vocabulary ("clairs" -> "clothes", "mashing" -> "matching"). Keep it within 2–3 sentences: a direct answer, a reason, and a brief example. Use linking words like "because" and "so."

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy choosing and matching my clothes because putting together a good outfit improves my mood and confidence, so I feel more productive at work.

Sugestão: Finish your answer and avoid vague terms like "thermals" if you mean professional clothes. Give a clear contrast using linking words (for example, whereas/on the other hand). Provide one specific weekday and one weekend outfit.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. On weekdays I wear smart casual clothes, such as chinos and a button-down shirt, because I want to look professional. On weekends, however, I prefer jeans and a hoodie so I can relax and feel comfortable.

Sugestão: Speak in a single clear sentence to start, then give a specific reason and a brief personal example. Correct grammar ("pink is a colour that makes me feel calm and a bit feminine") and avoid hesitations. Use linking words such as "because" or "because it reminds me of..."

Exemplo: I particularly like pink because it makes me feel calm and slightly feminine. For example, wearing a soft pink sweater reminds me of my teenage years and lifts my mood.

× I like to wear fresh fashion brands because I just simply like the designs and the tattoo feelings.

✓ I like to wear fresh fashion brands because I simply like the designs and the tattoo-like feel.

Redundant adverb 'just simply' should be reduced to 'simply'. 'Tattoo feelings' is unnatural; use adjective phrase 'tattoo-like feel' to describe the sensation or style. Keep modifiers concise and use correct adjective forms.

× They usually have better quality, so when you touch the fabric, the.

✓ They usually have better quality, so when you touch the fabric, you can feel it.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main clause after the subordinate clause 'when you touch the fabric'. Add a verb phrase 'you can feel it' to complete the sentence and convey the intended meaning.

× I usually work from Monday to Friday and wearing something a little bit full moves feel like I am a professor.

✓ I usually work from Monday to Friday, and wearing something a little formal makes me feel like I am a professor.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: use 'wearing... makes me feel' rather than 'wearing... feel'. 'a little bit full moves' is incorrect phrase; replace with 'a little formal' to match register. Ensure main verb 'makes' agrees with gerund subject 'wearing'.

× Umm, yes, definitely T-shirt is something very convenient when you think of the ideal how to fit, how to make a set of clothes matching together, T-shirt would definitely is a good choice.

✓ Umm, yes, definitely a T-shirt is very convenient when you think about how to fit and how to match a set of clothes; a T-shirt would definitely be a good choice.

Article needed: 'a T-shirt'. Use 'think about' rather than 'think of the ideal how to'. Remove redundant 'is' after 'would definitely'. Use parallel gerund structures 'how to fit and how to match' for clarity.

× You know they provide.

✓ You know they provide comfort and versatility.

Original sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Add objects 'comfort and versatility' to complete meaning and clarify what 'they' provide.

× I will say yes, I enjoy the processes of picking clairs, mashing them together which will make my day.

✓ I would say yes; I enjoy the process of picking clothes and matching them together because they make my day.

Modal 'will' is inappropriate for this habitual statement; 'would' or simple present is better. 'processes' should be singular 'process' and 'clairs' is a typo for 'clothes'. Use 'matching' not 'mashing'. Use 'because they make my day' to explain result.

× I mean having good clothes will make me look beautiful and it give me the confidence in working throughout the day.

✓ I mean having good clothes will make me look good and give me confidence while working throughout the day.

Subject-verb agreement: 'it give' should be 'give' with subject 'having good clothes' or remove 'it'. 'Look beautiful' is odd for a male speaker; 'look good' is neutral. Use 'while working' for natural adverbial phrase.

× Yes I do for example like during the weekdays I work so I wear thermals to make me look professional and give me the energetic of working throughout the days.

✓ Yes I do; for example, during the weekdays I work, so I wear formal clothes to make me look professional and give me the energy to work throughout the day.

Pronoun and noun choice: 'thermals' is likely wrong for professional wear; 'formal clothes' fits context. 'make me look professional and give me the energetic' is incorrect; use 'give me the energy'. Plural/singular consistency: 'days' -> 'day' or keep 'throughout the days' less natural.

× Umm on the other hand during the weekends I like to.

✓ Umm, on the other hand, during the weekends I like to dress more casually.

Original sentence is incomplete. Add a verb phrase to finish the thought: 'dress more casually' clarifies how weekends differ.

× I particularly like pink is like a color of being calm and the same time you feel a little bit like girly, making me remember my yeah, my teenager generation.

✓ I particularly like pink; it is a calm color and at the same time makes you feel a little girly, reminding me of my teenage years.

Run-on and awkward phrasing: separate into two clauses. Use 'it is' to introduce the color description. Replace 'like girly' with 'a little girly'. 'Making me remember my yeah, my teenager generation' should be 'reminding me of my teenage years' for natural English.