Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific examples for different occasions, and use linking words (for example, whereas, or). Avoid vague phrases and grammatical errors. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I usually choose clothes depending on the occasion. For casual days I prefer comfortable items like jeans, shorts or simple skirts, whereas for social occasions I like dresses or crop tops to look more fashionable. For example, I wear jeans to run errands but a floral dress for a dinner with friends.

Sugestão: Give a concise answer that directly states your preference and then support it with a clear reason and a linking phrase. Avoid repeating and fix grammar (use 'depending on the occasion'). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: It depends on the occasion: I usually wear casual clothes for everyday activities because they are comfortable, but I choose smart clothes for formal events to look more polished. For instance, I wear sweatpants at home but a blazer to interviews.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer (Yes/No) and then explain briefly why. Avoid confusing or irrelevant details (mentioning 'glasses' is unclear). Use 2–3 coherent sentences with specific reasons and an example.

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are very comfortable and easy to pair with jeans or skirts. For example, I often wear a plain T‑shirt on weekends when I meet friends or run errands.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a clear reason with an example. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because...'). Avoid unclear phrases like 'made an event' or 'teaching books'. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look appropriate and confident at events. For example, before a party I try on several outfits to make sure I look formal and presentable.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear reason and give a brief contrast if relevant. Avoid repetitive phrasing. Use linking words (however, because) and be specific about what 'same style' means. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Not really — my style stays quite consistent because most of my wardrobe is casual and simple. However, on weekends I might choose slightly more relaxed or colourful outfits compared to weekday work clothes.

Sugestão: State preferences clearly and give reasons and a brief example. Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing ('as a girl' is fine but avoid excess). Use linking words like 'because' once and be specific about what you like about the colours.

Exemplo: I prefer pastel colours such as pink and white because they look soft and feminine. For example, I often choose a pastel pink blouse for casual outings because it makes me feel cheerful and elegant.

× Well it depends on the occasion.

✓ Well, it depends on the occasion.

This sentence is correctly using the present simple tense to state a general fact. The only issue was missing punctuation and a needed comma after Well for natural spoken-to-written transition. Add a comma after introductory adverb 'Well'.

× If it's casual I want to wear these and pants or even shorts or skirts.

✓ If it is casual, I want to wear tees and pants or even shorts or skirts.

The speaker likely meant 'tees' (short for T-shirts) rather than 'these'. Also add a comma after the conditional clause. Ensure noun forms are correct: use 'pants', 'shorts', 'skirts'.

× While when I'm going out with someone or with my friends I prefer dresses or crop tops.

✓ When I go out with someone or with my friends, I prefer dresses or crop tops.

Combine 'while when' is redundant. Use the simple present 'I go' for habitual actions. Add comma after the introductory clause for clarity.

× As what I said earlier, I prefer any clothes, whether it's comfortable casual or smart clothes depends on any occasion I used to or I want to wear comfortable casual clothes when it's everything used, while smart clothes when I want to look more fashionable and form and class.

✓ As I said earlier, it depends on the occasion: I wear comfortable casual clothes for everyday use, and smart clothes when I want to look more fashionable and formal.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. Fix by simplifying structure: 'As I said earlier' is the correct phrase. Use 'it depends on the occasion' to express dependence. Use parallel structure 'comfortable casual clothes for everyday use' and 'smart clothes when I want to look more fashionable and formal'. Replace 'form and class' with 'formal' or 'elegant' and remove redundant phrases.

× As what I said earlier, I prefer any clothes, whether it's comfortable casual or smart clothes depends on any occasion I used to or I want to wear comfortable casual clothes when it's everything used, while smart clothes when I want to look more fashionable and form and class.

✓ As I said earlier, I prefer different clothes depending on the occasion: comfortable clothes for everyday use and smart clothes when I want to look more fashionable and formal.

Alternative clearer wording: use 'depending on the occasion' and maintain parallelism. Ensure verbs agree with subjects and tense remains present for habitual preference.

× Well, I don't directly say that I like wearing these shirts because I really, as a girl, I really wanted to wear glasses.

✓ Well, I wouldn't say that I like wearing T-shirts because, as a girl, I really want to wear dresses.

Pronoun and noun choices were inconsistent: 'these shirts' is awkward; 'T-shirts' is clearer. 'Don't directly say' is better as 'wouldn't say'. Tense: use present 'want' for current preference. 'Glasses' seems wrong in context; likely 'dresses' fits. Clarify pronoun placement and punctuation.

× However, it's not very convenient anyway, while I can wear T-shirts whenever I want it because it's so comfortable and it's very.

✓ However, they are not very convenient for me; I can wear T-shirts whenever I want because they are very comfortable.

Pronoun agreement: refer consistently to 'T-shirts' with 'they'. Remove redundant 'anyway' and incorrect trailing 'it's very'. Use clear clause separation with a semicolon or period. Ensure adjective 'comfortable' modifies the shirts and sentence ends properly.

× Well, yes, that's why I'm always made an event that I attend to.

✓ Well, yes, that's why I always prepare for events that I attend.

Original 'I'm always made an event' is ungrammatical. Use active verb 'prepare for events' to express intention. Keep present simple for habitual action: 'I always prepare'.

× Not that I brag about it, but yeah, I spend a lot of time teaching books because I wanted to be more formal and look impressive when I'm when I'm meeting others or when I'm going out.

✓ Not that I am bragging, but I spend a lot of time choosing outfits because I want to be more formal and look impressive when I meet others or go out.

'Teaching books' is incorrect; likely 'choosing clothes' or 'choosing outfits'. Maintain present tense for habitual actions: 'I spend', 'I want', 'when I meet'. Remove duplicate 'when I'm'. Use gerund 'choosing' correctly.

× Definitely not because I don't have much clothes to wear.

✓ Definitely not, because I don't have many clothes to wear.

Count noun 'clothes' is plural and requires 'many' instead of 'much'. Keep negative response simple and add comma.

× Not that I don't have anything. It's just like I have, I have clothes, but it's very, it's the same style. So it's very, it's very, it's always.

✓ It's not that I don't have anything. I do have clothes, but they are mostly the same style, so my outfits always look similar.

Original has repetition and incomplete clauses. Use clear pronoun agreement: 'they are mostly the same style'. Combine ideas into coherent sentences and remove fillers.

× I really wanted pink, white, or anything that is pastel in colors because as a girl, I've always wanted those those color because because it embraces femininity.

✓ I really like pink, white, or any pastel colors because, as a girl, I have always liked those colors since they embrace femininity.

Use present tense 'like' for preference. Correct plural 'colors' and remove duplicated words. Use 'those colors' not 'color'. Use 'since' or 'because' once; avoid repetition. Ensure subject-verb agreement and consistent tense.