Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid hesitations and repetitive phrases; correct simple grammar (e.g., "it helps me style my hair" instead of "do makeover nice hairs").

Exemplo: I like wearing party dresses because they make me feel elegant and feminine. For example, at my birthday I usually choose a fitted dress and match it with simple jewelry and styled hair to complete the look.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence and follow with specific reasons using linking words. Remove filler words and repetition. Use correct grammar (e.g., "comfortable clothes because they are easy and suitable for the weather").

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable clothes because they are easy to wear and suit the weather. For instance, I often wear breathable cotton tops and loose trousers when it is hot so I can stay relaxed all day.

Sugestão: Answer directly, avoid redundant words, and use one clear reason with an example. Fix grammar ("I prefer wearing T-shirts because I can pair them with joggers"). Keep answer within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I prefer wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I often pair a plain T-shirt with joggers for a casual look when I study or meet friends.

Sugestão: This is a good direct answer—make it more fluent by using linking words and correcting minor grammar. Give one clear contrast between everyday choices and special occasions.

Exemplo: It depends on the occasion. Generally I wear T-shirts and joggers because they are quick and comfortable, but for parties I spend more time picking a dress, accessories, and shoes to create a complete outfit.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and then a linked contrast with specific examples. Remove fillers and correct grammar ("comfortable clothes" not "comfortable wears").

Exemplo: I choose clothes based on activities rather than the day. For example, I wear party dresses for events to look feminine, but on weekdays I usually wear comfortable jeans and a T-shirt for work or classes.

Sugestão: Give a clear reason and specific examples. Avoid repetition and finish your thought (name a few colours). Use concise phrasing ("I prefer dark shades because they suit my skin tone").

Exemplo: I prefer dark shades because they complement my skin tone. For example, I often choose black, navy, and deep green because they bring out my complexion and look elegant.

× I particularly prefer putting on party dresses because of how lovely and how Princess like it looks on me.

✓ I particularly prefer putting on party dresses because they look lovely and princess-like on me.

The sentence uses incorrect adjective/adverb forms and word order. 'How lovely and how Princess like it looks on me' is awkward. Use the plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'party dresses' and 'princess-like' as a compound adjective. Remove redundant 'how' and reorder for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'they look lovely and princess-like on me.'

× It's also helps me do makeover nice hairs.

✓ It also helps me do nice makeovers and style my hair.

The original mixes incorrect verb forms and noun phrases: 'It's also helps' is ungrammatical (extra auxiliary). 'do makeover nice hairs' misorders adjectives and nouns. Use 'helps me do nice makeovers' or 'helps me style my hair.' Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'It helps' or 'They help.'

× Umm knowing full fully well that I need a complete accessories to put them on, for example during my birthday.

✓ Umm, knowing full well that I need complete accessories to put on, for example for my birthday.

'A complete accessories' is incorrect: 'accessories' is plural so 'a' and 'complete' placement is wrong. Use 'complete accessories' without 'a' and 'to put on' is the correct particle. 'During my birthday' is better as 'for my birthday.' Also remove repeated 'fully.'

× I prefer wearing comfortable.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable clothes.

'Comfortable' is an adjective and needs the noun 'clothes' to complete the idea. Also the verb+ing 'prefer wearing' is acceptable; just include the object. Suggestion: Say 'I prefer wearing comfortable clothes.'

× I most definitely I prefer putting on comfortable clothes cause of how easy and friendly it is on my body.

✓ I most definitely prefer putting on comfortable clothes because they are easy and comfortable on my body.

Redundant 'I' and informal 'cause' should be replaced with 'because.' 'Friendly' is not the right adjective for clothes; use 'comfortable.' Match plural 'they' with 'clothes.' Remove repeated phrases. Suggestion: 'I most definitely prefer putting on comfortable clothes because they are comfortable on my body.'

× Especially the one that fits into the weather.

✓ Especially those that fit the weather.

'The one' mismatches with 'clothes' (plural). Use plural pronoun 'those' and simpler preposition 'fit the weather.'

× Umm they make me more relaxing, undisturbed and for example.

✓ Umm, they help me relax and feel undisturbed, for example.

'Make me more relaxing' incorrectly uses 'relaxing' (makes me perform an action) instead of 'help me relax.' 'And for example' is incomplete; move 'for example' to the end and provide an example or remove it. Suggestion: 'They help me relax and feel undisturbed.'

× I most prefer preferably put on T-shirts and this is because I pair it.

✓ I prefer to put on T-shirts because I can pair them easily.

Redundant 'most prefer preferably' should be simplified to 'prefer.' 'I pair it' is vague and uses singular 'it' for 'T-shirts.' Use 'them' and 'pair them' with an adverb if needed. Suggestion: 'I prefer to put on T-shirts because I can pair them easily.'

× I have lots of joggers to pair it with which fits into my style of dressing.

✓ I have lots of joggers to pair them with, which fit my style of dressing.

'Pair it with' uses singular pronoun for plural 'T-shirts.' 'Which fits' should be 'which fit' to agree with plural 'joggers.' Remove unnecessary 'into.'

× T-shirts makes make very comfortable is a very comfortable way for me.

✓ T-shirts make me feel very comfortable; they are a very comfortable option for me.

'T-shirts' is plural so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes.' The original has redundant words 'makes make' and incorrect structure. Rephrase to a clear subject-verb-object structure. Suggestion: 'T-shirts make me feel very comfortable.'

× For example, all through the last.

✓ For example, all through last year.

The fragment 'all through the last' is incomplete. Add the noun (e.g., 'year') to complete the time expression. Suggestion: 'For example, all through last year.'

× It's depends on the occasion.

✓ It depends on the occasion.

'It's depends' is incorrect because 'depends' already has the verb; remove the contraction 'it's.' Use 'It depends.' Suggestion: 'It depends on the occasion.'

× Ordinarily I do more of I wear more of T-shirts and joggers because they fit into my style of dressing, but on party days I spend a lot of time choosing what to wear.

✓ Ordinarily I wear mostly T-shirts and joggers because they fit my style, but on party days I spend a lot of time choosing what to wear.

'Do more of I wear more of' is repetitive and ungrammatical. Use 'wear mostly' or 'mostly wear.' 'Fit into my style of dressing' is wordy; use 'fit my style.' Suggestion: 'Ordinarily I mostly wear T-shirts and joggers because they fit my style.'

× My style of clothes really depends on activities and not the days.

✓ My style of clothes really depends on my activities, not the day of the week.

'Depends on activities and not the days' is unclear. Specify 'my activities' and use 'day of the week' or 'the day' instead of 'the days.' Suggestion: 'My style depends on my activities, not the day.'

× For parties I usually prefer wearing party dresses that makes me look feminine, but on weekdays I do more of comfortable wears instead of umm styles umm.

✓ For parties I usually prefer wearing party dresses that make me look feminine, but on weekdays I usually wear more comfortable clothes instead of styled outfits.

'That makes' should be 'that make' to agree with plural 'dresses.' 'Comfortable wears' is incorrect; use 'comfortable clothes.' 'Instead of umm styles umm' is filler; replace with 'instead of styled outfits.' Suggestion: '...but on weekdays I usually wear more comfortable clothes.'

× I preferably like dark shade colors because of my skin color.

✓ I prefer dark shades of color because of my skin tone.

'Preferably like' is incorrect; use 'prefer.' 'Dark shade colors' is awkward; use 'dark shades' or 'dark colors.' 'Skin color' is better expressed as 'skin tone.' Suggestion: 'I prefer dark shades because of my skin tone.'

× I'm very intentional about putting on dark colors because it brings out my, it brings out my skin color, for example, black and.

✓ I'm very intentional about wearing dark colors because they bring out my skin tone; for example, black and navy.

'It brings out my' is singular and unclear for plural 'colors.' Use 'they bring out my skin tone.' 'Putting on' is acceptable but 'wearing' is more natural. 'Black and' is incomplete; add another color like 'navy.' Suggestion: 'I'm intentional about wearing dark colors because they bring out my skin tone.'