Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and finish the sentence fully.

Exemplo: I prefer wearing western formal and classic clothes because they make me feel confident and attractive. For example, a tailored blazer and dress trousers help me look professional at work, and I feel more self-assured when attending meetings.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer, then briefly explain with one specific reason. Use linking words like because or so to connect ideas and avoid repeated phrases.

Exemplo: I prefer to wear smart clothes because they boost my confidence and energy. For instance, wearing a neat shirt and chinos to work helps me focus and feel motivated throughout the day.

Sugestão: Clarify vocabulary (Tissot is a watch brand) and correct grammar. Answer directly (yes/no), then explain with clear, specific reasons. Reduce fillers and correct verb forms.

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts at home because they are loose and comfortable. For example, a soft cotton T-shirt lets me relax and move freely when I am studying or doing chores.

Sugestão: Provide a clear, grammatically correct response: state whether you spend time, then give a concise reason with an example. Avoid contradictory phrases and restructure sentences for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I am picky and look for unique items. For example, I often compare several stores and try different sizes to find the right fit and style.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give one or two specific contrasting examples using linking words like whereas or while. Keep sentences short and correct grammar.

Exemplo: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear formal clothes for work, whereas on weekends I prefer comfortable casual outfits. For instance, I wear shirts and trousers to the office but jeans and a T-shirt when I relax at home or meet friends.

Sugestão: Be specific and use precise vocabulary. Start with a clear statement about your color preference, then give brief reasons and examples. Avoid vague phrases and list colours clearly.

Exemplo: I prefer neutral and monochrome colours such as black, white, grey, and brown because they are easy to mix and look elegant. For example, I often pair a black coat with grey trousers since it creates a simple, professional look.

× I personally prefer to wear western formal classic wear which give me more confident and beautiful as well.

✓ I personally prefer to wear western formal classic clothing which gives me more confidence and makes me feel beautiful as well.

Subject-verb agreement and word choice: 'wear' as noun is better 'clothing'; 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular 'clothing'; 'confident' is an adjective but needs the noun 'confidence'; add 'makes me feel' to link 'beautiful' correctly. Suggestion: use 'gives me more confidence' and 'makes me feel beautiful'.

× And when I wear that dress I feel more attractive and.

✓ When I wear that dress, I feel more attractive.

Incomplete sentence: trailing 'and' leaves the sentence unfinished. Remove the extra conjunction and add a comma after the subordinate clause for clarity. Suggestion: finish thoughts fully, e.g., 'I feel more attractive' or add another clause after 'and'.

× I prefer to wear smart clothes which give me more confident and as well as feel more energetic if I wear good outfits which make me more and more confident and like super.

✓ I prefer to wear smart clothes which give me more confidence and make me feel more energetic when I wear good outfits that increase my confidence.

Word choice and redundancy: 'give me more confident' should be 'give me more confidence'; 'as well as feel' is incorrect structure — use 'and make me feel'; avoid repetition 'more and more confident' and informal 'like super'. Suggestion: simplify and use correct noun forms and parallel verb structures.

× Yes, I like to wear Tissot as well.

✓ Yes, I like to wear T-shirts as well.

Word choice/spelling: 'Tissot' is a watch brand; likely meant 'T-shirt(s)'. Use plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use accurate vocabulary and plural for general preference.

× Uh, when I stay at home, I like to work disorder because it's really uh, gave me comfortable and it's really loose and it's flexible.

✓ When I stay at home, I like to wear casual clothes because they are comfortable, loose, and flexible.

Multiple issues simplified: 'work disorder' is incorrect — likely 'wear casual clothes'; tense/agreement: 'gave me comfortable' is wrong; use 'they are comfortable'. Use plural pronoun 'they' for 'clothes'. Suggestion: name the clothing and use present simple for descriptions.

× So it's give me more relax.

✓ So they make me more relaxed.

Subject-verb agreement and word form: 'it's give' is incorrect; 'make me more relaxed' uses correct verb and adjective form. Also use 'they' to refer to clothes. Suggestion: use 'make me relaxed' or 'help me relax'.

× Yes, I don't easily like some clothes because I'm so much choosy while during the buying outfits because I like to wear extra unique outfit that's why not.

✓ No, I don't like most clothes easily because I'm very choosy when buying outfits; I prefer extra unique outfits, so I often don't buy the first thing I see.

Tense and phrasing: 'I don't easily like some clothes' is awkward; 'I'm so much choosy' should be 'I'm very choosy'; 'while during' is redundant. Rephrase for clarity and correct adverb/adjective usage. Suggestion: use 'choosy' with 'very' and clean sentence structure.

× Yes, of course I wear different kind of clothes in daily basis like if today is or Sunday I like to wear comfortable and whenever I like to go outside and office I like to wear formal wear which make me give more confident and beautiful.

✓ Yes, of course I wear different kinds of clothes on a daily basis. On Sundays I like to wear comfortable clothes, and when I go out or to the office I wear formal clothes that make me feel more confident and look nicer.

Pronoun and article issues: 'different kind' should be 'different kinds'; 'in daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis'; fragmented clauses and verb agreement: 'which make me give more confident' should be 'that make me feel more confident'. Suggestion: split into two sentences, use correct preposition 'on' and 'feel' with 'confident'.

× I usually don't like colours while buying clothes because I only like to wear black and white clothes, like a monochromatic bar, neutral clothes, neutral kind of tones.

✓ I usually don't care much about colors when buying clothes because I prefer to wear black and white — a monochromatic, neutral palette.

Word choice and redundancy: 'don't like colours while buying clothes' is unclear; 'like a monochromatic bar' is incorrect. Use 'prefer' and 'palette' and combine 'monochromatic' with 'neutral' appropriately. Suggestion: use concise phrases like 'a monochromatic, neutral palette'.

× It's also proper because it's grey, brown and that's kind of clothes.

✓ I also wear grey and brown; those are the kinds of clothes I like.

Pronoun and article issues: 'It's also proper because it's grey, brown' is ungrammatical. Clarify by naming colors and using plural noun 'clothes' or 'kinds of clothes'. Suggestion: say 'I also wear grey and brown; those are the kinds of clothes I like.'