Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons with brief examples, and avoid repetition. Replace vague phrase “eco friendly” unless you can explain why. Keep within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer casual clothes because they are comfortable and practical for my daily routine. For example, I often wear jeans and a T‑shirt when I go to class or meet friends because they’re easy to move in and wash.

Sugestão: Organize the response with a clear topic sentence and use accurate vocabulary. Avoid repetition and incorrect words (e.g., “more smarter”, “entry”, “smart glass”). Use linking words to contrast situations and give a brief example of each.

Exemplo: It depends on the occasion: for formal events like job interviews I wear smart clothes, but for college I usually choose casual outfits. For instance, I wear a suit and shirt for interviews, while I prefer jeans and a hoodie for classes.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and add one specific reason for preference. Avoid repeating words (e.g., “summer summer”) and expand slightly to include contexts or examples to reach natural length.

Exemplo: Yes, I wear T‑shirts a lot in summer because they are lightweight and breathable. I also like polo shirts when I want a slightly smarter casual look, for example at casual gatherings.

Sugestão: Clarify your meaning and correct grammar. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No), then explain when and why you spend time choosing clothes with a short example. Avoid fragmented and unclear phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes, especially when shopping for a special occasion. For example, I usually try on several outfits before buying to make sure the colors and fit suit me.

Sugestão: Be more fluent and concise: state the contrast clearly and give specific examples for weekdays and weekends. Reduce hesitations and filler words, and use linking words like “however” or “on weekends” to structure the answer.

Exemplo: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear more professional clothes such as dress shirts and chinos for university or internships. On weekends, however, I prefer casual cotton T‑shirts and polo shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wear.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and explain reasons concisely. Correct grammar (e.g., “I like darker colours because my skin tone is darker”) and list colours without hesitation. You can add a short example of when you wear each colour.

Exemplo: I prefer darker colours because they suit my skin tone; for example, I often wear black and chocolate brown for formal occasions. I also like shades of blue such as baby blue and royal blue for casual wear.

× I usually like to wear casual clothes because it's very easy to wear, very comfortable and very eco friendly.

✓ I usually like to wear casual clothes because they are easy to wear, comfortable, and eco-friendly.

The sentence uses 'it's' which is singular while 'clothes' is plural (subject-verb agreement); adverb 'very' is unnecessary before 'easy to wear' and 'eco friendly' should be hyphenated as 'eco-friendly'. Use 'they are' to match plural noun and parallel structure for the list.

× Well, it depends on the schedule. If you are going to go for an interview, you need to look smart. You need to look more smarter than casual looks. So if you are going for an entry, you need to wear a smart glass. But if you are not. But if you are going to college, university, you need to use casual clothes.

✓ Well, it depends on the situation. If you are going to an interview, you need to look smart. You should look smarter than when you dress casually. If you are going to an entrance interview, you should wear smart clothes. If you are going to college or university, you can wear casual clothes.

Several issues: 'schedule' is better replaced with 'situation' for meaning; 'going to go' is redundant so use 'going to'; 'more smarter' is incorrect because 'smarter' already uses the comparative form (double comparison); 'casual looks' should be 'casual dress' or 'when you dress casually'; 'going for an entry' is unclear—use 'entrance interview' or 'an entry interview'; 'wear a smart glass' is incorrect noun—should be 'wear smart clothes'; split sentences and avoid fragments like 'But if you are not.' for clarity.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts more in summer summer season, but I like polo shirts also.

✓ Yes, I wear T-shirts more in the summer, but I also like polo shirts.

Repeat 'summer' removed; use article 'the' with 'summer' and prefer simple present 'I wear' for habitual actions; place 'also' in correct position ('I also like').

× Will I'm very choose a person inside? It takes a lot of time to choose clothes, especially when I was when I getting some shopping.

✓ Well, I'm very choosy by nature. It takes me a lot of time to choose clothes, especially when I'm shopping.

'Will' should be 'Well'; 'choose a person inside' is incorrect—use 'choosy by nature' or 'a very choosy person'; tense and form errors: 'when I was when I getting some shopping' corrected to present continuous 'when I'm shopping'; include object 'me' after 'takes' for clarity.

× Yes uh, I use different styles, especially on weekdays. I prefer uh, professional clothes and some, uh, weekends like mostly there, uh, cotton T-shirts and polo shirts like, uh, it is very easy for uh, to wear and very comfortable.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles, especially on weekdays. I prefer professional clothes on weekdays, and on weekends I mostly wear cotton T-shirts and polo shirts because they are easy to wear and very comfortable.

Use 'wear' rather than 'use' for clothes; remove filler 'uh'; correct word order 'prefer professional clothes on weekdays'; fix pronoun 'there' and sentence fragments; use 'they are' to refer to shirts and maintain parallel and clear structure.

× Will I like her dark colours Because my skin tone is uh, little bit darker so it suits me a lot when I wear some darker. I like uh, baby blue, royal blue, black and chocolate brown colour.

✓ Well, I like dark colours because my skin tone is a little darker, so they suit me. I like baby blue, royal blue, black, and chocolate-brown colors.

'Will' should be 'Well'; 'I like her dark colours' incorrect pronoun—use 'I like dark colours'; punctuation and capitalization fixed; 'little bit darker' needs article 'a'; 'it suits me a lot when I wear some darker' corrected to 'they suit me' referring to colours; 'chocolate brown colour' use plural 'colors' and hyphenate 'chocolate-brown' for compound adjective.