Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more grammatical: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler words, and use correct nouns and verb forms. Limit to 2–4 sentences. Add one specific detail to support your preference. Use linking words like 'but' correctly.

Exemplo: I usually prefer casual clothes such as T-shirts and skirts on weekends because they are comfortable. However, when I go to work I wear dresses or more formal outfits to look professional.

Sugestão: Improve grammar (use 'depends', 'go to', 'because they make me comfortable') and avoid repetition. Give one clear reason for each choice and finish the final sentence. Use linking words such as 'when' and 'but'.

Exemplo: It depends on the occasion. For example, when I go to the gym I wear comfortable clothes because they allow me to move freely. But when I meet clients I wear smart clothes to appear professional.

Sugestão: Remove fillers like 'uh' and 'yet'. Use correct verb forms ('when I wear'), correct nouns ('pants'), and be concise. Provide a specific example of styling and use a linking word to show consequence.

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are versatile. For example, I often pair a plain T-shirt with a short skirt or jeans to create very different looks.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and word choice: say 'It depends on the people I will meet that day' and 'choose an outfit'. Use conditional sentences correctly and give a precise example (how much time you spend).

Exemplo: Not really. It depends on who I will meet that day. If I'm staying at home with family, I choose clothes quickly, but if I have an important meeting I might spend 20–30 minutes selecting an outfit.

Sugestão: Use correct sentence structure and vocabulary: say 'My clothes are totally different on weekdays and weekends.' Use specific examples and correct nouns ('pyjamas', 'formal clothes'). Keep it concise and logical with linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, my style changes a lot. On weekends I often wear pyjamas or very casual clothes at home, but on weekdays I wear formal clothes for work.

Sugestão: Correct vocabulary and grammar: say 'I like red because it looks powerful and passionate.' Explain specifically why you choose red (how it affects your mood or appearance). Avoid unclear phrases like 'less patient' and 'late color'.

Exemplo: I like red because it feels powerful and passionate. When I wear red I feel confident and it stands out, and it goes well with black or white accessories.

× I prefer to wear the casual course uh such as the T-shirts and skirt or short on the weekend, but I prefer to wear dress the cutest when I'm go to work or the formal.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes, such as T-shirts and skirts or shorts on the weekend, but I prefer to wear the cutest dresses when I go to work or formal occasions.

Multiple adjective and noun choice errors: 'the casual course' should be 'casual clothes'; 'skirt or short' should be plural and correct word order 'skirts or shorts'; 'wear dress the cutest' should be 'wear the cutest dresses' with correct article and adjective order; 'when I'm go to work' mixes forms, should be 'when I go to work'; 'or the formal' is incomplete, changed to 'or formal occasions'. Suggestion: use correct noun forms (clothes, dresses), place adjectives before nouns, and keep consistent pluralization.

× It's depends on occasion, uh, because when I'm go to the gym, I prefer to wear comfortable coat instead of the smart coat because it's make me comfortable. But when I have to work and meet the client, I always wear the smart coat because.

✓ It depends on the occasion, because when I go to the gym, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes instead of smart ones because they make me comfortable. But when I have to work and meet clients, I always wear smart clothes.

Tense and subject-verb agreement errors: 'It's depends' should be 'It depends' (remove contraction mismatch). 'when I'm go' should be 'when I go' (present simple). Count and article errors: 'comfortable coat' and 'smart coat' are unnatural; use plural 'clothes' or 'a coat'. Pronoun agreement: 'it's make me' should be 'they make me' to match plural 'clothes'. 'the client' should be plural 'clients'. Remove trailing 'because'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions, ensure subject-verb agreement and consistent plurality.

× Yet I like wearing T-shirts because I can have the different style when I wearing T-shirts, uh, I can find short skirt or pen that match with my top and it's make a shower different style instead.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because I can have different styles when I wear T-shirts. I can find a short skirt or pants that match my top and they create a nicer, varied look.

Incorrect use of gerunds and verb forms: 'Yet' is odd here, use 'Yes'. 'when I wearing' should be 'when I wear' (use base verb for present simple). 'the different style' should be 'different styles' (plural) and 'short skirt or pen' should be 'a short skirt or pants'. 'it's make' should be 'they create' to agree with plural subject. 'shower' likely meant 'show' or 'nicer'; corrected to 'nicer, varied look'. Suggestion: use base verb for habitual statements, match singular/plural nouns and pronouns, and choose correct vocabulary.

× Not really. It's depend on the people that I have to meet at that day. If I'm just stay at home and meet only my family, I don't spend a lot of time for choosing the office. But if I have to go outside and meet a lot of people, I spend more time to shoot the outfit.

✓ Not really. It depends on the people I have to meet that day. If I just stay at home and see only my family, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes. But if I have to go out and meet many people, I spend more time selecting an outfit.

Tense and verb form errors: 'It's depend' should be 'It depends'. 'that I have to meet at that day' should be 'I have to meet that day' or 'that day'. 'If I'm just stay' should be 'If I just stay' or better 'If I just stay at home' with base verb 'stay'. 'meet only my family' is fine but simplified. 'choosing the office' is incorrect vocabulary; should be 'choosing clothes'. 'go outside' -> 'go out'. 'spend more time to shoot the outfit' incorrect verb 'shoot'; use 'selecting an outfit' or 'putting together an outfit'. Suggestion: use present simple for general habits, correct verb forms, and choose appropriate vocabulary.

× Yes, there are totally different for wearing the cloth during the weekend and weekday. For me, I can wear everything during the weekend. If I'm not go outside, I can wear the pajama and stay at home. But when I have to go out and work, I always wear the formal court.

✓ Yes, the clothes I wear are totally different on weekends and weekdays. For me, I can wear anything during the weekend. If I don't go out, I can wear pajamas and stay at home. But when I have to go out to work, I always wear formal clothes.

Adjective and noun choice errors and tense: 'there are totally different for wearing the cloth' is ungrammatical; rephrased to 'the clothes I wear are totally different'. 'weekend and weekday' should be 'weekends and weekdays'. 'If I'm not go outside' should be 'If I don't go out' (negative with do). 'the pajama' -> 'pajamas' plural and no article. 'formal court' incorrect word 'court'; should be 'formal clothes'. Suggestion: use correct collocations (wear pajamas, wear formal clothes), correct negative formation, and pluralization for general statements.

× I like red color because late color is less patient about the powerful, passionate and love. When I wear the late color is make me look stunning at that day and the red color is can go well with the black or white.

✓ I like the color red because it represents power, passion, and love. When I wear red, it makes me look stunning that day, and red goes well with black or white.

Multiple adjective and vocabulary errors: 'red color' -> 'the color red'. 'late color is less patient about the powerful' is meaningless; corrected to 'it represents power, passion, and love'. 'When I wear the late color is make me look' has extra subjects and wrong verb forms; corrected to 'When I wear red, it makes me look'. 'at that day' -> 'that day'. 'the red color is can go well' -> 'red goes well' (remove modal and article). Suggestion: use clear expressions for representing qualities, correct subject-verb structure, and simplify collocations.