Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid hesitation sounds (umm). Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, "for formal events" or "at home"). Reduce repetitions and keep responses within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I usually wear comfortable clothes, mainly cotton T-shirts and jeans. However, for formal events I prefer smarter outfits such as a shirt and trousers. At home I choose loose, breathable garments for greater comfort.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first, then briefly explain with a specific example. Avoid filler words and grammar errors ("it's depend" → "it depends"). Use a linking word like "because" or "but" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I find them easier to move in. But it depends on the event—for example, I wear smart clothes for interviews or formal dinners.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a specific detail or short example. Correct grammar ("I have multiple kinds of T-shirts"; avoid "like" as a filler). Keep sentences shorter and linked logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts and they make up most of my wardrobe. I own many cotton T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wash for everyday wear.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear yes/no and then give one concise example with correct tense and reduced hesitation. Use linking words like "for example" or "once" to introduce the anecdote, and avoid unnecessary words.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes spend a lot of time choosing clothes. For example, my roommate and I once spent about two hours in a single store because we couldn't decide what to buy.

Sugestão: Answer clearly and separate weekday and weekend habits into two short sentences. Fix grammar ("a black T-shirt", "I choose dresses sometimes"). Use linking words like "whereas" or "on the other hand" to contrast.

Exemplo: On weekdays I usually wear black jeans and a black T-shirt for work because it's simple and practical. On weekends I dress more casually or sometimes wear different styles depending on the event.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence naming the colours, then add one brief reason or example. Avoid unnecessary words like "so" and correct phrasing ("my favorite colours currently are").

Exemplo: My favorite colours are blue, dark blue and black because they are versatile and easy to match. When I shop, I usually find myself drawn to items in black or shades of blue.

× For formal event I prefer smarter outfits like a shirt and trouser, while at home I usually wear loose breathable clothes for comfort.

✓ For formal events I prefer smarter outfits like a shirt and trousers, while at home I usually wear loose, breathable clothes for comfort.

The original sentence has a missing plural marker for 'event' and 'trouser'. Use 'events' when speaking generally and 'trousers' as the correct plural noun for the garment. Also add a comma between coordinate adjectives 'loose' and 'breathable'. Suggestion: Use plural forms for general statements and punctuate adjective lists with a comma.

× I too prefer to wear UMM, but as I mentioned earlier, it's depend upon the situation or what the event is.

✓ I also prefer to wear comfortable clothes, but as I mentioned earlier, it depends on the situation or the type of event.

'It's depend' is incorrect present-tense subject-verb agreement; the correct form is 'it depends'. 'Too' is better as 'also' in this context and 'depend upon' is more naturally 'depends on'. Clarify 'what the event is' to 'the type of event' for fluency. Suggestion: Use 'it depends on' for present-tense conditional statements and choose clearer phrasing.

× I love to wear T-shirts most of the time in my wardrobe I have a multiple kind of T-shirts instead of the shirts or tops.

✓ I love to wear T-shirts most of the time; in my wardrobe I have many kinds of T-shirts rather than shirts or tops.

'a multiple kind of T-shirts' is ungrammatical. Use 'many kinds of T-shirts' or 'a variety of T-shirts'. Also add punctuation to separate clauses. 'Instead of the shirts or tops' is better as 'rather than shirts or tops'. Suggestion: Use 'many kinds of' or 'a variety of' for countable plural items and separate independent clauses with appropriate punctuation.

× Well I do spend a lot of time umm recently me and my roommate went to a mall for shopping and there we didn't realize the time we just spend like 2 hours only in one store.

✓ Well, I do spend a lot of time. Recently my roommate and I went to a mall to shop, and we didn't realize the time; we spent about two hours in one store.

Mixed tense and word order errors: 'me and my roommate' should be 'my roommate and I'; 'for shopping' is better as 'to shop'; 'we just spend' should be past tense 'we spent'; use 'about two hours' instead of 'like 2 hours only'. Also add punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: Keep past events in past tense, use correct subject order ('my roommate and I'), and avoid filler words like 'like' in formal speech.

× Honestly on the weekdays I have my work, so in the work I mostly prefer to wear black jeans with a black T-shirts, but in case of the weekends I love to umm enjoy and at that time I choose the dresses sometime for the weekends and depend upon the what kind of event.

✓ Honestly, on weekdays I have work, so I mostly prefer to wear black jeans with a black T-shirt, but on weekends I like to relax and sometimes choose dresses depending on the type of event.

Subject-verb and article errors: 'a black T-shirts' mixes singular article with plural noun — should be 'a black T-shirt'. 'In the work' is unnatural; use 'I have work' or 'at work'. 'In case of the weekends' should be 'on weekends'. 'Depend upon the what kind of event' should be 'depending on the type of event'. Suggestion: Use consistent singular/plural forms, correct articles with nouns, and standard prepositions 'on weekends' and 'depending on' for conditional choices.

× So my favorite colour at current time is blue, dark blue and black. And even when I went for the shopping my eyes always stop at the black and blue colour.

✓ So my favorite colours at the moment are blue, dark blue and black. Even when I go shopping, my eyes always stop at black and blue items.

Tense and number issues: 'at current time' is better as 'at the moment'; 'colour' list should use plural 'colours' and verb 'is' should be plural 'are'. Second sentence mixes past and habitual present: use present habitual 'when I go shopping' and present simple 'my eyes always stop' (or better 'are always drawn to'). Also 'for the shopping' is unnatural; use 'shopping'. Suggestion: Match subject plurality with verb form, and use present simple for habitual actions (e.g., 'when I go shopping').