Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the sentence structures grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and over-explaining.

Exemplo: I usually wear skirts and blouses because they are comfortable and allow me to move freely. For example, I prefer skirts over jeans since jeans make me look shorter, so skirts help me feel more proportionate.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence and then support with a brief reason and an exception. Use linking words (however, although, for example) to make the contrast clear and correct verb forms.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes for daily life because I value ease and relaxation. However, I wear smart clothes for special events or job interviews to look professional.

Sugestão: Avoid filler phrases and repetition. Give a precise reason and one brief example. Keep sentences varied and grammatically correct.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts, especially at home or on weekends, because they are comfortable and easy to move in. For example, I usually wear a cotton T-shirt when I relax or run errands.

Sugestão: Organize your answer: state the main point, give one reason and a brief example. Fix grammar and clarity (use present simple/continuous correctly). Remove vague phrases like "I don't know what's wrong with me."

Exemplo: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want to look appropriate for the occasion. For example, before an event I try on several outfits to see which one fits best.

Sugestão: Clarify the contrast clearly: use correct labels (workwear vs. weekend wear) and avoid contradicting words (casual vs formal). Provide one specific detail and a linking word to contrast.

Exemplo: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. For work I wear smart-casual outfits, such as blouses and tailored trousers, whereas on weekends I prefer comfortable clothes like T-shirts and shorts.

Sugestão: Use correct plural/singular and concise phrasing. Give a clear topic sentence and one reason with a brief example of how you wear these colours.

Exemplo: I like black and white clothes because they look elegant and are easy to match. For instance, I often pair a white blouse with black trousers for a simple, classy outfit.

× The clothes I like to wear is a skirt and a shirt on top.

✓ The clothes I like to wear are a skirt and a shirt on top.

Subject 'The clothes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Use plural verb agreement: 'clothes... are'. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs (they/are).

× I like it because it's comfortable and gives me freedom to do anything I want.

✓ I like them because they're comfortable and give me the freedom to do anything I want.

Pronoun 'it' refers to 'clothes' which is plural, so use 'them'. Also 'gives' must agree with plural subject, so use 'give'. Add article 'the' before 'freedom' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: ensure pronouns and verbs agree with the noun number and include necessary articles.

× And since I am a short girl I avoid using jeans or anything that makes me smaller.

✓ And since I am a short girl, I avoid wearing jeans or anything that makes me look smaller.

Use 'wear' instead of 'using' for clothing. Also 'look smaller' is the natural collocation when describing appearance. Add a comma after the introductory clause. Suggestion: use collocations for clothes (wear) and verbs that describe appearance (look).

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I am a homey girl and I normally use smart clothes when I will join some events or an interview.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I am a homey girl, and I normally wear smart clothes when I attend events or an interview.

Do not use 'will' with routine actions; use present simple 'attend' for scheduled or habitual events. Use 'wear' instead of 'use' for clothes. Add a comma before 'and' to separate clauses. Suggestion: use present simple for habits and correct verbs for clothing.

× But for my day, everyday lives, I wear comfortable clothes.

✓ But for my everyday life, I wear comfortable clothes.

Phrase 'everyday lives' is incorrect here; use singular 'everyday life' to refer to daily routine. Remove redundant comma and fix word order. Suggestion: use 'everyday life' for general daily routines.

× Yes, I like to wear T-shirt, especially when I am at home, like doing nothing or or during weekends I'll just wear T-shirt.

✓ Yes, I like to wear T-shirts, especially when I am at home, doing nothing, or during weekends I'll just wear a T-shirt.

Use plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. Remove duplicate 'or'. For a specific occasion (weekends) use 'a T-shirt'. Add commas for clarity. Suggestion: use plural for general statements and 'a' for one item on specific occasions.

× It's comforting and it gives me freedom to do the things I want to do because it's just a plain shirt, nothing but simple.

✓ It's comfortable and it gives me the freedom to do the things I want because it's just a plain, simple shirt.

Use adjective 'comfortable' not 'comforting' for clothing comfort. 'Give me the freedom' needs 'the'. 'Nothing but simple' is awkward; use 'plain, simple shirt' and avoid repeating 'to do'. Suggestion: choose correct adjectives for sensations and simplify phrases.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing my clothes.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing my clothes.

This sentence is correct; present tense 'spend' correctly describes a habitual action. Suggestion: no change needed.

× I don't know what's wrong with me, but every time I will go somewhere or there is an event I will be joining.

✓ I don't know what's wrong with me, but every time I go somewhere or there is an event I will be joining,

Do not use 'will' in subordinate time clauses for routines or future events; use present simple 'go'. Keep 'will be joining' only for the main future clause; here the structure is clearer with 'I go' for when-clause. Suggestion: use present simple in time clauses (when/every time) instead of 'will'.

× It really give me and I need much time to wear which one fits or which one I don't need to use.

✓ It really stresses me, and I need a lot of time to decide which one fits or which one I do not need to wear.

Verb 'give' should agree with subject 'It' -> 'gives', but the sentence was rephrased for clarity. 'Need much time' is unnatural; use 'need a lot of time'. Use 'decide' to express choice and 'wear' for clothes. Ensure parallel structure and correct negation 'do not'. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('need a lot of time', 'decide which fits') and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I wear different style of clothes during weekdays.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes during weekdays.

'Style' should be plural 'styles' to match 'different'. Suggestion: use plural nouns after 'different'.

× Since I am working I am wearing casual clothes to go to the office, to look formal and of course to go to work.

✓ Since I work, I wear casual clothes to go to the office, to look formal, and of course to go to work.

Use simple present 'work' for habitual action instead of continuous 'am working' unless emphasizing temporary. 'Am wearing' should be 'wear' for habits. Maintain parallel infinitive structure and add commas. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual routines and maintain parallelism.

× But during weekends I just do and wear something comfortable like shirts and shorts.

✓ But during weekends I just wear something comfortable like shirts and shorts.

Remove 'do' which is unnecessary. Use 'wear' to state clothing choice. Sentence describes habitual action, present simple is correct. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary verbs and keep concise.

× The color clothes I like are whites and black.

✓ The colors I like are white and black.

Use 'colors' not 'color clothes'. Color names should be singular adjectives 'white and black'. Do not pluralize color words here. Suggestion: say 'the colors I like are...' and use color adjectives.

× There are really good fit together and especially if if you want to have matchy yet elegant color, white and black, it's really good fit.

✓ They really fit well together, and especially if you want a matching yet elegant color combination, white and black are a good fit.

Use 'fit well together' not 'are really good fit together'. Remove duplicate 'if'. Use 'matching' instead of 'matchy' (informal), and 'color combination' for clarity. Use plural verb 'are' to agree with 'white and black'. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('fit well together'), avoid duplicated words, and prefer 'matching'.

× So I choose that color.

✓ So I choose those colors.

Refer back to plural 'white and black' with plural pronoun 'those colors' and present simple 'choose' is fine. Suggestion: ensure pronoun/ determiner agrees in number with the noun it replaces.