Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fragments, and combine ideas into one or two coherent sentences. Use linking words if adding details and give a brief reason.

Exemplo: I like both casual and smart clothes, but I usually prefer jeans and T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wear. For example, I often pair dark jeans with a plain T-shirt for a simple, neat look.

Sugestão: Provide a single clear sentence stating your preference, then support it with two specific reasons using linking words. Fix sentence fragments and tense/word order.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they keep me cool in hot weather and are more affordable. For instance, in summer I choose breathable fabrics like cotton to avoid sweating and save money.

Sugestão: Avoid repetition and fragmented time references. Give one clear statement about liking T-shirts and add a concise, specific reason using linking words. Correct habits phrasing (daily/at the institute).

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially to college, because they are breathable and comfortable in summer. For example, I often choose light cotton T-shirts for long days on campus.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific details about what you consider when choosing clothes. Use linking words and correct noun forms (clothes, choosy person).

Exemplo: Yes, I spend quite a bit of time choosing clothes because I care about my personal style and color combinations. For example, I usually plan outfits in advance to ensure the top, trousers, and accessories match well.

Sugestão: Be careful with tense and repetition. Give a clear contrast between weekdays and weekends using linking words (whereas, while), and keep it to two sentences maximum.

Exemplo: Yes, I wear different styles: on weekdays I wear my institute uniform because of the dress code, whereas on weekends I usually wear casual T-shirts for comfort. For example, I switch to jeans and a T-shirt when I relax or meet friends.

Sugestão: This answer is clear but can be slightly expanded with a short reason. Start with the preference sentence, then add one reason using linking words and a brief example.

Exemplo: I'm not a big fan of bright colours; I prefer white and black because they are versatile and easy to match. For instance, a black jacket and white shirt work well for both casual and formal occasions.

× I love wearing jeans with. T-shirts of many colors.

✓ I love wearing jeans with T-shirts of many colors.

There was an unnecessary period splitting the sentence, causing a fragment. Combine the parts so the present participle clause 'wearing' correctly links the objects. Suggestion: remove the extra period and keep the continuous form 'wearing'. Grammar problem type ID: 10

× It makes me feel comfortable.

✓ They make me feel comfortable.

The subject refers to 'jeans and T-shirts' (plural), so the verb should be plural 'make' not singular 'makes'. Adjust subject-verb agreement to match plural subject. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I love to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I feel. Less sweating on these clothes in summer days.

✓ I love to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I sweat less in these clothes on summer days.

The original had a sentence break that produced a fragment and incorrect word order. Correct structure places the subject 'I' + verb 'sweat' and adverb 'less' together. Use 'in these clothes' and 'on summer days' for proper prepositional phrases. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I prefer these clothes most as it is very affordable.

✓ I prefer these clothes the most because they are very affordable.

'These clothes' is plural, so use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are'. Replace 'as' with 'because' for clearer causal connection and add 'the' before 'most'. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I wear them on my daily basis when I want to go to my institute.

✓ I wear them on a daily basis when I go to my institute.

Use the fixed expression 'on a daily basis' and the simple present 'go' for habitual actions; 'when I want to go' is wordy and unnecessary. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× It makes me feel comfortable and more breathable because as it was summer day, it is summer days, so it helps me to stay comfortable.

✓ They make me feel comfortable and more able to breathe because they are suitable for hot summer days, so they help me stay comfortable.

Original mixes tenses and has awkward phrasing. Match plural subject 'they' (T-shirts) with plural verbs, avoid redundant clauses, and use clear reasons: 'suitable for hot summer days' and 'help me stay comfortable'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Yes, I spend a lot of time on choosing clothes as I am very choosy person.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I am a very choosy person.

Do not use 'on' with 'choose' in this context; use the gerund directly after 'spend time'. Include the article 'a' before 'very choosy person' and replace 'as' with 'because' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I love to maintain aesthetic in my life.

✓ I love to maintain an aesthetic in my life.

Use the noun form 'an aesthetic' or 'aesthetic standards' with the indefinite article. Without the article the phrase is ungrammatical. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× I want every cloth as a great combination of colours.

✓ I want every piece of clothing to be a great combination of colours.

Use 'piece of clothing' for countability and correct verb structure 'to be'. 'Cloth' is usually 'cloth' (material), not 'a piece of clothing'. Also adjust word order for natural English. Grammar problem type ID: 18

× On weekdays I wore my institute uniform as it is a dress code there and on weekdays I wear I most probably wear casual T-shirt as it makes me feel comfortable and more breathable.

✓ On weekdays I wear my institute uniform because it is the dress code there, and on weekends I most probably wear a casual T-shirt because it makes me feel comfortable and more breathable.

Tenses and time references were mixed and duplicated. Use present simple 'wear' for habitual actions. Distinguish weekdays/weekends correctly. Add the article 'the' before 'dress code' and 'a' before 'casual T-shirt'. Remove duplicated words. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× To be honest, I'm not much fan of many different colours.

✓ To be honest, I'm not much of a fan of many different colours.

Missing preposition/article: the correct idiom is 'not much of a fan' with 'of a'. Insert 'of a' to form the fixed expression. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× I love wearing white and black clothes.

✓ I love wearing white and black clothes.

Sentence is correct as written; no grammatical correction needed. Grammar problem type ID: 26