Music— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then briefly explain why using a linking word. Avoid redundancy and keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: I usually prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me stay positive. For example, when I’m stressed I play upbeat songs to feel more energized and focused.

Sugestão: Be careful with grammar and repetition. Use one or two concise sentences: state the effect, give a specific reason or brief example, and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: Yes, it motivates me because the tempo and lyrics energize me, so I feel more focused and capable of tackling tasks.

Sugestão: Answer directly but expand slightly to add relevant detail. Use one extra sentence to explain why or what you do instead of classes to show more content and vocabulary.

Exemplo: No, I haven’t taken any music classes. Instead, I learn songs by listening online and practicing on my own.

Sugestão: Organize your answer into a clear topic sentence and a specific supporting detail. Avoid vague phrases and unclear endings. Use linking words such as 'because' and give a concrete example of activities you do while listening.

Exemplo: Yes, I often listen to music while studying or cleaning because it makes time pass more quickly. For instance, when I study with background music I feel less bored and finish my work faster.

× Actually it depends on my mood whether it's sad or happy, because I listen to music a lot, but mainly I listen to happy music.

✓ Actually, it depends on my mood whether I prefer sad or happy music, because I listen to music a lot, but mainly I listen to happy music.

The original sentence has awkward reference 'whether it's sad or happy' which is vague; replace with 'whether I prefer sad or happy music' to match the speaker's choice. Also add a comma after 'Actually' for natural cadence. This keeps the present tense consistent and clarifies the subject of preference.

× Yes, it actually motivate me so much and make make me feel happy that that gives me a feeling, a way that I can do more than I could.

✓ Yes, it actually motivates me so much and makes me feel happy; that gives me a sense that I can do more than I could before.

Subject 'it' requires third person singular verbs 'motivates' and 'makes'. Remove duplicated words ('make make', 'that that'). Replace vague phrase 'gives me a feeling, a way' with 'gives me a sense' and add 'before' to complete the comparison. Use a semicolon to join related clauses for clarity.

× Yes, I love to listen music when I do other things because it makes me think that the other things that take time can have less time.

✓ Yes, I love to listen to music when I do other things because it makes me feel like those time-consuming tasks take less time.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' (listen to music). The clause was awkward: 'makes me think that the other things that take time can have less time' is ungrammatical. Rephrase to 'makes me feel like those time-consuming tasks take less time' which uses correct gerund phrase and clearer meaning.

× As you go with the flow of the music, the time runs and you just forget about what you're doing and you make you.

✓ As you go with the flow of the music, time flies and you just forget about what you're doing and lose yourself.

'The time runs' is unnatural; use the idiom 'time flies'. 'You make you' is incorrect pronoun/reflexive use; use 'lose yourself' to express becoming absorbed. This corrects pronoun usage and provides a natural English expression.