Music— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use correct singular/plural and prepositions, and give one or two specific reasons. Use linking words like because or so to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and gives me energy. For example, upbeat songs help me feel motivated in the morning, so I can start my day with more focus and enthusiasm.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct grammar, and use clearer linking phrases. Avoid conflicting statements (excited vs relaxed). Choose one main effect and support with a specific example using linking words (for example, when...).

Exemplo: Yes, happy music does make me feel more excited because it lifts my mood and makes chores more enjoyable. For example, when I clean or study with upbeat music, I feel more energetic and less bored.

Sugestão: Give a clear, well-structured response: start with a direct answer, then briefly explain. Use correct verb forms and reduce repetition. Provide a specific detail about when you sing at home.

Exemplo: No, I have never taken music classes because I am more interested in listening to music than performing. I sometimes sing quietly at home for fun, but I would not take formal lessons.

Sugestão: Answer directly, use correct grammar and concise explanation. Explain how background music helps (e.g., improves focus or motivation) and give a brief example. Use linking words like when or because to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes. I often listen to background music when I study or clean because it helps me concentrate and makes tasks less boring. For instance, playing soft instrumental music helps me focus while I read.

× I prefer happy musics because happy music tells me to release my card just a level.

✓ I prefer happy music because happy music helps me relax a little.

'Musics' is incorrect; 'music' is an uncountable noun and should remain singular. 'tells me to release my card just a level' is unclear and ungrammatical; replace with 'helps me relax a little' to convey the intended meaning clearly. Suggestion: treat 'music' as uncountable and use verbs/phrases that match common collocations (e.g., 'helps me relax', 'cheers me up').

× And when I listen happy music, uh, it fills me, it gives me energy and then I can do some things with full of energy.

✓ And when I listen to happy music, it fills me; it gives me energy, and then I can do things with lots of energy.

Missing preposition: 'listen to' is required. 'with full of energy' is incorrect structure; use 'with lots of energy' or 'full of energy'. Also remove filler 'uh' in formal answers. Suggest practicing collocations: 'listen to', 'gives me energy', 'do things with energy'.

× Yes, happy musics makes me feel relaxed because it is lift my mood and when for example I do cleaning works when I'm studying, I prefer happy musics because that from that you can it's not boring design.

✓ Yes, happy music makes me feel relaxed because it lifts my mood, and for example when I do cleaning or studying, I prefer happy music because it makes those tasks less boring.

'musics' should be 'music' (uncountable). 'makes' agrees with singular 'music' so keep third person singular. 'it is lift my mood' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'it lifts my mood'. 'cleaning works' should be 'cleaning' or 'chores'. 'that from that you can it's not boring design' is unclear; replace with 'it makes those tasks less boring'. Suggestion: use concise clauses and standard collocations: 'lifts my mood', 'do cleaning' -> 'do cleaning' or 'do chores'.

× No, I have never taken music classes because because I have never interested in music but not like singing.

✓ No, I have never taken music classes because I have never been interested in music, and I don't like singing.

Missing auxiliary 'been' with 'interested' when using passive-like construction: 'be interested in'. Duplicate 'because' should be one. 'but not like singing' is incorrect; use 'and I don't like singing' or 'but I don't like singing'. Suggestion: use 'have never been interested' for a past-to-present state and correct negation 'don't like'.

× But I just prefer to listen not sing.

✓ But I prefer to listen rather than sing.

Structure 'prefer to listen not sing' is awkward; use 'prefer to listen rather than sing' or 'prefer listening to singing'. Suggestion: use parallel gerund forms or 'rather than' for contrast.

× But if I'm singing to then I do it at home when nobody is listening so no.

✓ But if I sing, I do it at home when nobody is listening, so no.

'I'm singing to then I do it' is awkward and contains unnecessary 'to'. Use simple present 'I sing' for habitual action. 'so no' is colloquial; better 'so no' can be 'so I don't' or simply 'so no' kept conversational but clearer as 'so no, I don't.' Suggestion: use simple present for habits and remove filler words.

× Yes, because when I do some boring things like cleaning or studying, I like background music because it's helps me to concentrate on my things and to to listening and doing.

✓ Yes, because when I do boring things like cleaning or studying, I like background music because it helps me concentrate on my tasks and to listen while working.

Remove extra 'some' before 'boring things' for conciseness (optional). 'it's helps' is wrong: use 'it helps' (no contraction plus verb). 'concentrate on my things' is vague; use 'concentrate on my tasks' or 'my work'. 'to to listening and doing' has repeated 'to' and wrong form: use 'to listen while working' or 'to listen and work'. Suggestion: use 'helps me concentrate' and correct verb forms, avoid doubled words.