Music— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and clear: state your preference in a simple topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition. For example, explain why sad music appeals to you (mood, lyrics, emotional release) and give a short example.

Exemplo: I prefer sad music because it helps me reflect on my feelings and tells meaningful stories. For instance, when I'm stressed I listen to slow ballads because their lyrics and melodies calm me and make it easier to think.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence, then contrast situations using linking words like 'sometimes' or 'usually'. Give one specific example of when happy music makes you excited and when it just makes you feel good. Keep sentences concise and avoid filler words.

Exemplo: Sometimes happy music makes me feel excited, especially when the tempo is fast and upbeat. However, other times it just lifts my mood without much energy — for example, I enjoy mellow pop when I'm relaxing at home.

Sugestão: Provide a full sentence answer and add a brief supporting detail or alternative. If you haven't taken classes, mention how you learned music or whether you would like to take classes in the future. Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' if adding contrast.

Exemplo: No, I haven't taken any formal music classes, but I taught myself to play the guitar by watching online tutorials. I would like to take lessons in the future to improve my technique.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence and then give specific examples of activities during which you listen to music, using linking words like 'for example' or 'such as'. Explain briefly how music affects those activities (helps focus, relaxes you, etc.).

Exemplo: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other things. For example, I listen to instrumental tracks when I work because they help me concentrate, and I play relaxing songs when I clean or cook to make the tasks more enjoyable.

× I like sad music because something listen to the sad music either imagine is more than happy music.

✓ I like sad music because when I listen to it I imagine more than when I listen to happy music.

The original sentence has multiple structure and word-choice problems (Grammar Problem Type 26). 'something listen to the sad music either imagine is more than happy music' is ungrammatical and confusing. Rephrase to a clear clause: 'when I listen to it I imagine more than when I listen to happy music.' This keeps the intended meaning and corrects word order and missing conjunctions. Suggestion: break long ideas into smaller clauses and use clear connectors like 'when' and 'than'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× Sometimes the happy music, uh, make me feel excited, but sometime I listen to the happy music it filled feel good. So I like to listen to music, uh, listen to.

✓ Sometimes happy music makes me feel excited, but sometimes when I listen to happy music it makes me feel good. So I like to listen to music.

There are subject-verb agreement errors and verb form issues (Grammar Problem Type 2 and 6). 'music ... make' should be 'music makes' because music is singular. 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency). 'it filled feel good' is incorrect; use 'it makes me feel good' to express present habitual response. Also remove redundant words. Suggestion: ensure the singular subject takes the -s form in present simple and use correct adverbs (sometimes) and simple present 'make/makes' for habitual feelings. Grammar Problem Type ID: 2

× I don't have that.

✓ I haven't taken any music classes.

The original reply is vague and unidiomatic (Grammar Problem Type 12 and 26). The question asks 'Have you taken any music classes?' A natural and clear answer is 'I haven't taken any music classes.' This fixes pronoun/placeholder 'that' and uses correct present perfect form to match the question. Suggestion: answer directly using the same verb tense as the question when appropriate. Grammar Problem Type ID: 12

× Yes, I like to listen music and do something when I listen that, such as work such as think something.

✓ Yes, I like to listen to music while I do other things, such as work or think.

Problems include missing preposition 'to' after 'listen' and awkward phrasing 'do something when I listen that' (Grammar Problem Types 11 and 26). Use 'listen to music' and 'while I do other things' to show simultaneous actions. Replace 'such as work such as think something' with 'such as work or think' for natural examples. Suggestion: remember the verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' and use 'while' for simultaneous actions; list examples with 'such as' and separate items with 'or' or commas. Grammar Problem Type ID: 11