Music— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence, correct word choice and concise reasoning. Avoid errors like “impress my mood” (incorrect collocation) and keep to 1–2 supporting sentences. Use a linking word to connect reason.

Exemplo: I prefer happy music. It lifts my spirits and helps me stay motivated when I’m working or exercising.

Sugestão: Provide a complete, grammatically correct response and add a brief explanation. Use present tense for general statements and a linking word to expand your answer naturally.

Exemplo: Yes, it does. Happy songs usually put me in a better mood and make me feel more energetic, especially if they have a fast tempo.

Sugestão: Good content and relevant detail. Improve grammar and conciseness: use past simple consistently and reduce repetition. Add a linking word to connect the time and the effect.

Exemplo: Yes, I took guitar lessons for about two years in high school. As a result, playing guitar made me feel energetic and excited, and it helped me enjoy performing for friends.

Sugestão: Use more natural phrasing and correct prepositions. Replace informal ‘yeah’ with ‘yes’ in the test and say ‘during my commute’ not ‘communicate between my home to school’. Keep it concise and use a linking word to explain the benefit.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually listen to music during my commute to school because it helps me relax and clear my mind before classes.

× I absolutely prefer happy music because I need the music to help me impress my mood.

✓ I absolutely prefer happy music because I need music to improve my mood.

The phrase 'impress my mood' is incorrect collocation; 'improve my mood' is the appropriate verb phrase. Also 'the music' is unnecessary; use the general noun 'music'. This fits present tense and expresses purpose. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Of course, happy music made me more.

✓ Of course, happy music makes me feel more excited.

The original uses past tense 'made' which conflicts with the general statement question about music's effect; present simple 'makes' is correct. 'More' is vague; add 'feel more excited' to clarify the effect. Grammar problem type ID:6

× In fact, when I was in high school, I learned guitar for about two years and I think when I was playing guitar it made me feel energetic and excited.

✓ In fact, when I was in high school, I learned to play the guitar for about two years, and I think when I played guitar it made me feel energetic and excited.

Use 'learned to play the guitar' (correct verb construction and article use). For past habitual action, use simple past 'played' rather than 'was playing'. The rest correctly uses past tense 'made' for past feelings. Also add commas for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Yeah, when I communicate between my home to school, I usually listen to music because it can help me to relax and take a breath.

✓ Yeah, when I commute from my home to school, I usually listen to music because it helps me relax and take a breath.

The verb 'communicate' is incorrect; use 'commute' for traveling between home and school. The prepositions should be 'from my home to school'. Use 'helps me relax' instead of 'can help me to relax' for natural present simple habit. Remove 'to' after 'help' and use 'relax' not 'to relax'. Grammar problem type ID:11