Music— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and directly addresses the question, but it is slightly wordy and contains minor grammar issues (‘most of the times’ → ‘most of the time’). To improve, shorten the response to one clear topic sentence, correct small grammar errors, and add one specific reason or example using a linking word (e.g., ‘because’). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer happy music because it lifts my mood and helps me relax. For instance, I often play upbeat pop when I’m getting ready in the morning because it makes me feel energetic and optimistic.

Sugestão: The answer is enthusiastic and natural but repetitive. Reduce redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to make it coherent (for example, ‘so’ or ‘therefore’). Vary verbs and include a concise specific image or brief example to support the statement.

Exemplo: Yes, happy music definitely makes me more excited; I start tapping my feet and often dance around the room. For example, when a lively song comes on I usually sing along and move energetically, which lifts my spirits.

Sugestão: The response answers the question but is brief and contains grammatical mistakes (‘music class’ → ‘music classes’ or ‘a music class’; ‘when I was small’ → ‘when I was young’). Improve by giving one short reason for dropping the class and adding a linking word to make the answer more informative and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I took music classes when I was young, but I stopped after a few years because I was busy with schoolwork. However, I still enjoy singing and listening to music in my free time.

Sugestão: The answer is relevant but contains awkward phrasing (‘requires my full time lot of time’) and could be more specific. Use clearer phrasing and add a concrete example of the activity and the type of music you choose, linked by ‘for example’ or ‘so’.

Exemplo: Yes, I often listen to music while doing other tasks. For example, when I’m doing repetitive homework or cleaning the house I usually play mellow pop or instrumental tracks to stay focused and make the work feel less tedious.

× But most of the times it's happy music because I want to be happy and lightheaded and feel good.

✓ But most of the time it's happy music because I want to be happy, lightheaded, and feel good.

Use 'most of the time' (singular) rather than 'most of the times'. Also add commas in a list for clarity. Suggestion: use 'most of the time' to refer to frequency and separate list items with commas.

× I am moving to the songs, I am dancing, I am turning and I am definitely not walking in a straight line.

✓ I move to the songs, I dance, I turn, and I am definitely not walking in a straight line.

In general descriptions of repeated or habitual actions use the simple present (I move, I dance, I turn) rather than continuous present (I am moving) unless emphasizing an action happening right now. Keep 'I am definitely not walking in a straight line' if referring to a current action. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual behavior.

× I actually have taken music class when I was small but then for some reason I dropped it.

✓ I actually took a music class when I was small, but then for some reason I dropped it.

Use the indefinite article 'a' before 'music class'. Also use simple past 'took' rather than present perfect 'have taken' because a specific past time ('when I was small') is given. Add a comma before 'but' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'took a music class' for a completed past event.

× For example when I am doing any tedious work which requires my full time lot of time I do listen to music.

✓ For example, when I am doing tedious work that requires a lot of my time, I listen to music.

The phrase 'full time lot of time' is incorrect. Use 'a lot of my time' or 'a lot of time'. Also 'which' is better replaced by 'that' in defining clauses. Use commas to set off the introductory phrase. Suggestion: 'when I am doing tedious work that requires a lot of my time, I listen to music.'

× I actually prefer happy music but I do listen to sad music whenever I am upset and I want to feel the emotion fully.

✓ I actually prefer happy music, but I do listen to sad music whenever I am upset because I want to feel the emotion fully.

Add a comma before 'but' and use 'because' to connect reason clearly. Tenses are acceptable, but sentence flow and conjunction usage need correction. Suggestion: use punctuation and 'because' to show cause.