Music— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words to explain why. Also correct plural and verb forms, and limit to 2–4 sentences. Provide a specific example to support your reason.

Exemplo: I prefer sad music because it helps me reflect on my feelings. For example, slow piano songs with honest lyrics often make me think about past experiences and motivate me to write in my journal.

Sugestão: Answer directly then give one or two specific effects using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid generic claims without personal connection. Use singular/plural agreement and smoother transitions.

Exemplo: Yes, happy music often makes me feel more energetic and positive. For instance, upbeat pop songs lift my mood and give me extra energy when I go for a run, which helps me exercise longer.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer, then briefly explain context with correct tense and subject-verb agreement. Keep it short and add one specific detail about that class to enrich the answer.

Exemplo: No, I haven't taken formal music lessons, except for a mandatory music class in high school. In that class we learned basic music theory and sang in a choir, which gave me a simple foundation.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and then one or two clear reasons with examples. Avoid redundancy (e.g., “for me”). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and ensure smooth sentence structure.

Exemplo: Yes, I often listen to music while studying and exercising because it helps me concentrate and stay motivated. For example, instrumental tracks help me focus during revision, while fast-tempo songs boost my energy at the gym.

× I prefer listening to sad musics more because I find them quite endearing, I mean enchanting because how they how the rhythms and lyrics are conveys in those kind of songs help me to become reflective and introspective about myself.

✓ I prefer listening to sad music more because I find it quite endearing, even enchanting, because the way the rhythms and lyrics are conveyed in those kinds of songs helps me to become reflective and introspective about myself.

Use uncountable noun 'music' not 'musics'; match 'it' to singular uncountable noun; 'those kind of' should be 'those kinds of' or better 'those kinds of songs' but here 'those kinds of songs' -> 'those kinds of songs' or 'that kind of song'; subject-verb agreement: plural subject 'songs' requires 'help' but phrasing 'the way ... is conveyed' makes singular subject so use 'helps'. Also remove duplicated words and fix word order for clarity.

× I prefer listening to sad musics more because I find them quite endearing, I mean enchanting because how they how the rhythms and lyrics are conveys in those kind of songs help me to become reflective and introspective about myself.

✓ I prefer listening to sad music more because I find it quite endearing, even enchanting, because the way the rhythms and lyrics are conveyed in those kinds of songs helps me to become reflective and introspective about myself.

The verb must agree with its subject: 'lyrics are conveyed' is correct but 'is conveyed' refers to 'the way' which is singular and takes 'helps'. Also 'conveys' was wrongly formed; use passive 'are conveyed' or rephrase as 'the way ... is conveyed'. This ensures correct subject-verb agreement.

× I prefer listening to sad musics more because I find them quite endearing, I mean enchanting because how they how the rhythms and lyrics are conveys in those kind of songs help me to become reflective and introspective about myself.

✓ I prefer listening to sad music more because I find it quite endearing, even enchanting, because the way the rhythms and lyrics are conveyed in those kinds of songs helps me to become reflective and introspective about myself.

Pronoun 'them' refers to 'musics' which is incorrect because 'music' is uncountable and should be referred to as 'it'. Also avoid redundant pronouns and ensure pronoun agrees in number with its antecedent.

× In my opinion, I find happy music have many advantages to our health, both physically and mentally.

✓ In my opinion, I find happy music has many advantages for our health, both physically and mentally.

Use singular verb 'has' with singular/uncountable noun 'music' instead of 'have'. Also use 'advantages for our health' rather than 'to our health' for natural collocation.

× In my opinion, I find happy music have many advantages to our health, both physically and mentally.

✓ In my opinion, I find happy music has many advantages for our health, both physically and mentally.

The verb should agree with the subject; replace 'have' with 'has' because 'music' is singular/uncountable. Also 'to our health' is less natural than 'for our health'.

× For example, they help to lighten up our mood when we are feeling down.

✓ For example, it helps to lighten our mood when we are feeling down.

Refer to 'happy music' with singular pronoun 'it' not 'they'. Also 'lighten up our mood' is wordy; 'lighten our mood' is more natural.

× Or you can listen to it when exercising.

✓ You can also listen to it while exercising.

Beginning a sentence with 'Or' is informal and awkward here; use 'also' and 'while' to indicate simultaneous action for clearer sentence structure.

× I have never taken any music classes before except for the one that I took during my high school period because it was included in mandatory classes that every student have had to take one.

✓ I have never taken any music classes before except for the one that I took during high school because it was included among the mandatory classes that every student had to take.

Use 'had' for past perfect context with 'every student had to take' or keep present perfect simple; 'high school period' is awkward—use 'high school'; remove unnecessary 'one' after 'take' and correct subject-verb agreement 'have had' to 'had'.

× I have never taken any music classes before except for the one that I took during my high school period because it was included in mandatory classes that every student have had to take one.

✓ I have never taken any music classes before except for the one that I took during high school because it was included among the mandatory classes that every student had to take.

Avoid redundant 'one' at the end; use 'among the mandatory classes' rather than 'in mandatory classes'; ensure quantifier and determiners are correct and not repeated.

× I occasionally play music during my study session as well as when I'm exercising.

✓ I occasionally play music during my study sessions as well as when I'm exercising.

Pluralize 'study sessions' to match general habitual action. Present participle 'exercising' is fine; ensure consistent plurality for regular activities.

× I find it quite beneficial for me to keep me focused on my work as well as uplift my mood when I'm stressed out.

✓ I find it quite beneficial for keeping me focused on my work as well as uplifting my mood when I'm stressed out.

Avoid repeating 'me' after 'beneficial for'; use gerunds 'keeping' and 'uplifting' after 'beneficial for'. This corrects pronoun redundancy and maintains parallel structure.