Music— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak more clearly and organize your reply: start with a direct topic sentence saying your preference, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid hesitation words and repetition, and correct awkward phrases (e.g., “feel blue or exhibited” is unclear). Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas and keep the answer to no more than 4–5 sentences.

Exemplo: I enjoy both sad and happy music. For example, I listen to sad songs when I want to reflect and process my emotions, and happy songs when I need energy or to lift my mood. Because music helps me connect with my feelings, I choose the type that fits how I feel at the moment.

Sugestão: Give a clear, concise answer and support it with a specific example. Remove filler phrases like “you know” and hesitations. Use a topic sentence (Yes/No), then one reason and one specific situation (e.g., doing sports) with a linking word such as “for example” or “especially.” Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, happy music definitely makes me feel more excited. I’m easily influenced by upbeat songs, and they give me more energy when I exercise; for example, I always play fast pop music while running because it helps me keep a faster pace.

× You know why I feel blue or exhibited?

✓ You know why I feel blue or excited?

The pronoun 'exhibited' is incorrect here; the speaker likely intended the adjective 'excited'. This is a word choice error rather than a pronoun, but it affects how the sentence refers to the speaker's state. Replace 'exhibited' with 'excited' to correctly name the emotion. Suggestion: learn commonly confused words and check if the chosen word fits the intended meaning.

× I will I I always listen to the sad and happy songs that because it's connected to my feelings.

✓ I always listen to both sad and happy songs because they are connected to my feelings.

The original sentence has repetition ('I will I I'), an unnecessary 'that', and incorrect clause order. It also uses 'it's' (singular) while referring to 'songs' (plural). Correct the structure by removing repetitions, placing 'because' before the reason clause, and matching the noun and pronoun number ('songs' -> 'they are'). Suggestion: say the main clause first, then the reason with 'because', and ensure pronouns agree with their nouns.

× You know, for me, I think it's true.

✓ You know, for me, I think that's true.

Saying 'it is true' is grammatically acceptable, but in spoken English 'that's true' is more natural when referring to the previous question. Use 'that' to point to the idea just mentioned. Suggestion: use demonstrative 'that' to refer back to a specific statement.

× You know, I'm easy to I'm easily affected by these things.

✓ You know, I'm easily affected by these things.

The sentence contains repetition and incorrect phrasing 'easy to I'm'. The correct passive-like expression is 'I'm easily affected'. Ensure subject and verb form remain intact and remove the extra words. Suggestion: avoid repeating fragments and use the correct adverb 'easily' with 'affected'.

× It is feel so good ex especially when I when I, when I doing sports.

✓ It feels so good, especially when I'm doing sports.

Multiple issues: 'It is feel' mixes auxiliary and base verb; the phrase repeats 'when I' and uses incorrect verb form 'doing' without auxiliary. Correct form is 'It feels' (present simple) and 'I'm doing' (present continuous). Remove repetitions. Suggestion: use 'it feels' for sensations and use 'I'm doing' to indicate an action happening at the time.