Teachers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, correct pronoun gender and tense, reduce hesitations, and use one or two clear supporting details with a linking word. Aim for 2–3 sentences and choose accurate vocabulary (e.g., "explain" instead of "make").

Exemplo: Yes. My favorite teacher is my biology teacher because she was passionate about the subject and explained difficult topics clearly. For example, she used simple diagrams and real-life examples to help us understand complex concepts.

Sugestão: Clarify meaning, avoid odd word choices ("witch", "whether near medicine"), remove filler words, and give a clear reason with a linked idea. Keep to 1–2 sentences that directly answer the question.

Exemplo: No, I don't want to be a teacher because I prefer to pursue a career in veterinary medicine. However, I might teach some related courses in the future to share my knowledge.

Sugestão: Reduce hesitations and grammar errors ("sympathy" → "sympathetic"); combine ideas with linking words (e.g., "and"/"also") and give one specific memory or example to make the answer more vivid.

Exemplo: Yes, I remember my primary school teacher very well. She was kind and sympathetic and always encouraged us to explore science by organizing simple experiments in class.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct contradictions and pronoun use, avoid long confusing sentences. Use linking words to explain frequency and mode of contact, and give a clear example of how you interact (e.g., say hello, send a card).

Exemplo: Not really. One of my teachers lives in my neighborhood, so occasionally I see her and say hello; sometimes I also send her a postcard on special occasions.

Sugestão: Fix grammar and word choice ("well restrictive" unclear), use linking words ("because"/"so") and provide one concrete way the teacher helped (e.g., extra tutorials, advice). Keep answer to 2–3 coherent sentences.

Exemplo: My biology teacher encouraged me to study seriously because she offered extra tutorials and practical examples. As a result, I became interested in veterinary medicine and chose it as my career path.

Sugestão: Be concise and avoid repetition. Use comparative language correctly and add a brief specific reason or example of how high school teachers supported you (e.g., detailed feedback, challenging assignments).

Exemplo: I prefer my high school teachers because they spent more time explaining difficult concepts and gave challenging assignments that helped me improve.

× Uh yes, I have favorite teacher uh, who is passionate about her subject also and he had a great, umm, interesting way to make complicated, difficult content and topics, uh, very simple and easy to understand.

✓ Uh yes, I have a favorite teacher who is passionate about her subject and she has a great, interesting way of making complicated topics very simple and easy to understand.

The student mixed pronouns 'her' and 'he' for the same teacher; use a single consistent pronoun (she). Add the article 'a' before 'favorite teacher'. Use present tense 'has' to match ongoing qualities. Use 'way of making' for correct verb phrase and simplify redundant adjectives ('complicated' and 'difficult' -> 'complicated' or just 'complicated topics').

× I don't think so because I prefer to uh, have my own career as a witch, but uh, I am so fond of our subjects and maybe in the future teach some subjects about whether near medicine.

✓ I don't think so because I would prefer to have my own career as a veterinarian, but I am very fond of our subjects and maybe in the future I will teach some subjects about veterinary medicine.

'Prefer' is better expressed with 'would prefer' for hypothetical future preference. 'Witch' is likely incorrect; context suggests 'veterinarian' or similar—replaced with 'veterinarian'. 'Whether near medicine' is incorrect word choice and structure; use 'veterinary medicine'. Add subject 'I' and future auxiliary 'will' for 'teach'.

× Yes, definitely. I had teacher, uh, when I was, umm, in primary school. Uh, she was uh, very kind and uh, sympathy and passionate about subjects. Also ** *** always encouraged us to, uh, be interested in the science.

✓ Yes, definitely. I had a teacher when I was in primary school. She was very kind, sympathetic and passionate about the subjects. She also always encouraged us to be interested in science.

Missing article: use 'a teacher'. 'Sympathy' is a noun; use adjective 'sympathetic' to describe a person. Add 'the' before 'subjects' to specify school subjects. Remove unnecessary fillers and ensure subject 'She' starts the second sentence. 'Be interested in science' does not need 'the'.

× Uh, not really, but one of my teachers living in our neighborhood, uh, we don't have any relationship and we are not even keeping in touch, but sometimes I, uh, see her and, uh, say hello to her and sometimes I say and to him. Postal cards.

✓ Not really, but one of my teachers lives in our neighborhood. We don't have a relationship and we don't keep in touch, but sometimes I see her and say hello to her, and sometimes I send postal cards to him.

Use present tense 'lives' for habitual location. 'We don't have any relationship' -> 'we don't have a relationship'. 'Keeping in touch' -> 'keep in touch' for habitual. Pronouns inconsistent: 'her' then 'him'—identify whether teacher is female; original earlier said female, so use 'her' consistently. If referring to two different teachers, clarify. 'Postal cards' should be part of the sentence as 'send postal cards to her'.

× I had biology teacher she I thought she was well restrictive, but she helped me and encouraged me to take more serious my subjects and lessons and also help me to become interested in veterinary medicine and choose this career.

✓ I had a biology teacher. I thought she was quite strict, but she helped and encouraged me to take my subjects and lessons more seriously and also helped me become interested in veterinary medicine and choose this career.

Missing article: 'a biology teacher'. 'Well restrictive' is incorrect collocation; use 'quite strict'. 'Take more serious my subjects' incorrect word order and form: use 'take my subjects more seriously'. Use past tense 'helped' to match narrative. 'Help me to become' -> 'helped me become'.

× I like my high school teachers more than my primary school because, uh, I think they put all of their efforts, uh, and time to teach us tough concepts, but in primary school lessons were, were more easier.

✓ I like my high school teachers more than my primary school teachers because I think they put all of their effort and time into teaching us difficult concepts, but primary school lessons were easier.

Missing noun after 'primary school' — add 'teachers'. Use 'effort' (uncountable) not 'efforts' here. Use 'into teaching' rather than 'to teach us'. 'Tough' -> 'difficult' is more natural. 'More easier' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'easier'.