Teachers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific example using a linking word. Avoid repetition and correct tense/word choice (e.g., 'especially', 'gives me advice', 'which encourages me').

Exemplo: Yes — my favorite teacher is my English teacher. She is very encouraging and always gives me practical advice when I struggle; for example, she helped me improve my writing by giving detailed feedback every week.

Sugestão: Make the response more natural by using a topic sentence followed by two specific reasons connected with linking words (e.g., 'because' and 'so'). Correct grammar and word order: 'teachers are overworked', 'do not earn enough salary', 'I would not want to become a teacher soon'.

Exemplo: No, I don't want to be a teacher in the future. This is because teachers in my country often work long hours and do not earn enough, so I would prefer a job with better pay and more work–life balance.

Sugestão: Simplify and correct grammar. Use a clear topic sentence and one or two specific memories with linking words ('for example', 'because'). Avoid repetition and supply precise details (what she did, how she treated students).

Exemplo: Yes, I still remember my primary school teacher because she was very kind and supportive. For example, she always listened to our problems and treated every student fairly, so no one felt left out.

Sugestão: Give a concise direct answer and then one or two clear reasons with correct grammar and chronological phrases (e.g., 'after I transferred schools', 'since we graduated'). Avoid unclear details like '55th grade'.

Exemplo: No, I am not. After I transferred to another school and we graduated, she started teaching a new class and we lost contact, so we stopped keeping in touch.

Sugestão: Organize the answer: begin with a topic sentence summarizing help received, then give two specific examples with linking words. Correct expressions ('don't judge people', 'be passionate', 'work hard', 'you will achieve your goals'). Avoid unclear phrases like 'they covers' or 'get your fries'.

Exemplo: She helped me develop good values and study habits. For instance, she always told us not to judge others and to be passionate, and she encouraged hard work by giving extra exercises so we could improve our grades.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion and then explain two reasons using linking phrases ('because', 'so', 'for example'). Fix grammar ('in primary school one teacher taught most subjects', 'they taught us both lessons and life skills'). Be specific about what you appreciated.

Exemplo: Yes, I prefer my primary school teachers. This is because one teacher often taught most subjects and also taught us life skills, so we built a closer relationship and learned more holistically.

× She always encourages me with her kindness and supportiveness.

✓ She always encourages me with her kindness and support.

The noun 'supportiveness' is uncommon and awkward here; 'support' is the correct noun. Replace with 'support' for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× When I'm in trouble, I always got advice from her which is which encourages.

✓ When I'm in trouble, I always get advice from her, which encourages me.

Tense and verb form are incorrect: 'got' is past but context is present habitual so use 'get'. Also relative clause was malformed; use 'which encourages me.' Grammar problem type ID: 9

× I don't think so because I find a teacher's job is quite tough for me because in my country they always overworked long hours but didn't get enough salary so I wouldn't want to be become teacher in near future.

✓ I don't think so because I find a teacher's job quite tough for me: in my country teachers always work long hours and don't get enough pay, so I wouldn't want to become a teacher in the near future.

Multiple tense and structure issues: 'find a teacher's job is' is unidiomatic—use 'find a teacher's job quite tough' or 'find that a teacher's job is quite tough'. 'They always overworked long hours' mixes past and progressive; correct to 'teachers always work long hours'. 'Didn't get' should be present 'don't get'. 'Be become teacher' is wrong—use 'become a teacher'. Add article 'the' before 'near future.' Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I still I still remember my primary school teacher because in my memory she always been support me and she was really kind for everyone.

✓ I still remember my primary school teacher because, in my memory, she has always supported me and she was really kind to everyone.

Remove duplicate 'I still'. Use present perfect 'has always supported' for past actions continuing to influence present. 'Been support me' is wrong form; use 'supported me'. Use 'kind to everyone' not 'kind for everyone.' Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I did didn't see any discrimination around them.

✓ I didn't see any discrimination around them.

Double auxiliary 'did didn't' is incorrect; use a single 'didn't'. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× She always talk talk.

✓ She always talked to us.

Repetition 'talk talk' is incorrect. Use past 'talked' if referring to past habit, and add 'to us' or specify the audience. Choose tense consistent with context (past or present). Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I would say no because after transferred another school when I graduate 55th grade our connection is cut because she get new class and we graduated and start new life so that's why our connection is lost.

✓ I would say no because after I transferred to another school when I graduated fifth grade our connection was cut: she got a new class, and we graduated and started a new life, so our connection was lost.

Many tense and form errors: add subject 'I transferred', use 'to another school'. 'Graduate 55th grade' is likely 'graduated fifth grade'. Use past tense consistently: 'graduated', 'was cut', 'she got', 'started'. 'Get' should be 'got'. Grammar problem type ID: 9

× She taught me a lot of things such as don't judge people they covers and have to be passionate, have to be. Have to hard work and if you hard work you will get your fries and taught me a lot of things I still.

✓ She taught me a lot of things, such as not to judge people, to be passionate, and to work hard; if you work hard you will get rewards. She taught me many lessons that I still remember.

Original has mixed structures and fragments. Use infinitive 'not to judge', parallel forms 'to be passionate' and 'to work hard'. 'If you hard work' should be 'if you work hard'. 'Fries' is incorrect word—likely 'fruits' or 'rewards'; use 'rewards'. Finish with a clear clause 'I still remember.' Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Absolutely because in prime in high school every subjects will talk by different teachers but in primary school it all lessons will talk by 1 teacher and that primary school teacher taught us a lot of things such as lessons and likes.

✓ Absolutely, because in high school every subject is taught by different teachers, but in primary school all lessons are taught by one teacher, and that primary school teacher taught us many things such as lessons and values.

Use 'high school' not 'prime in high school'. 'Every subjects' should be 'every subject'. Use passive 'is taught' rather than 'will talk by'. Spell out 'one' or use digit appropriately. 'Likes' is unclear; likely 'values' or 'likes and dislikes'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct passive structure. Grammar problem type ID: 13