Teachers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatical, concise and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "keeps in touch", "she always helped me during exam time", "even when she was busy"). Avoid irrelevant age detail unless it matters.

Exemplo: Yes. My favorite teacher is my English teacher because she still keeps in touch with me on WhatsApp and Snapchat. For example, she always helped me with exam preparation by explaining difficult topics and giving extra practice exercises, and she replied quickly even when she was busy.

Sugestão: Clarify your meaning ("food teacher" is unclear—do you mean "home economics" or "cooking teacher"?) and use correct grammar and cohesion. Give one clear reason and a specific example, and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' correctly.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to be a cooking teacher because I enjoy teaching practical skills to disadvantaged students. For example, if I become a teacher I would run free after-school cooking classes to help weaker students build confidence and useful life skills.

Sugestão: Make sentences grammatically correct and concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific memory using linking words ('for instance', 'because'). Replace unclear phrases ("held me in my during exam time") with precise descriptions ("supported me during exams").

Exemplo: Yes. I still remember my English teacher because she keeps in touch with me on WhatsApp and Instagram. For instance, she stayed up late to explain difficult grammar points during exam week, which really helped me improve my scores.

Sugestão: Use correct nouns and tenses ("primary school teachers", "I stay in touch", "they quickly solve problems"). Be specific about how they help and avoid confusing terms like 'family school'. Use one supporting example and linking words for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes. I still stay in touch with some of my primary school teachers on WhatsApp and Facebook. For example, if I have a study problem during exams, I message them and they quickly give advice or explain topics to me.

Sugestão: This answer is unclear and contains many grammar errors. Clearly state one or two ways she helped you, use correct verb forms, and avoid contradictory phrases (you said you "cannot feel comfortable" but meant you "felt comfortable"). Use linking words like 'for example' to add a concrete instance.

Exemplo: She helped me mainly by answering my questions and giving feedback on practice tests. For example, during exams she would message me study tips and explain mistakes in my essays, which made me feel more confident.

Sugestão: Be precise and grammatical. Explain one clear reason why you prefer primary teachers, using linking words and a specific example. Replace unclear phrases ("had me in law to manage something") with concrete actions ("looked after me"). Keep it concise and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I prefer my primary school teachers because they were very caring. For example, during lunchtime they would open my lunchbox and bring me water if I needed it, so I always felt safe and comfortable at school.

× she was a 45 years old and still in my touch with the WhatsApp or Snapchat and she always helped me a lot in my exam time.

✓ She was 45 years old and still in touch with me on WhatsApp or Snapchat, and she always helped me a lot during exam time.

Use of articles and adjective forms: 'a 45 years old' is incorrect; correct form is '45 years old' or 'a 45-year-old'. 'in my touch with the WhatsApp' is wrong word order and preposition; correct is 'in touch with me on WhatsApp'. 'in my exam time' is awkward; use 'during exam time'. Suggestions: remove the unnecessary article before age, place 'with me' after 'in touch', and use 'on' for platforms like WhatsApp or Snapchat.

× Even if she is busy she always attend to me.

✓ Even if she is busy, she always attends to me.

Subject-verb agreement and adverb placement: The verb should agree with the third-person singular subject 'she' (attends). Also add a comma after the subordinate clause for clarity. Suggestion: use 'attends to me' or more natural 'helps me'.

× I want to become a food teacher in the future because I have a lot of interest to teach poor student.

✓ I want to become a home-economics (or food) teacher in the future because I am very interested in teaching poor students.

Word choice and adjective form: 'have a lot of interest to teach' is unnatural; use 'am very interested in teaching'. 'poor student' needs plural 'students'. Also 'food teacher' is unclear; 'home-economics teacher' or 'food technology teacher' may be intended. Suggestion: use 'interested in' + gerund and match noun number.

× For example, if I get a chance to become a teacher, then I definitely to help students who are weak in a subject so I really love.

✓ For example, if I get a chance to become a teacher, I will definitely help students who are weak in a subject because I really love doing that.

Missing verb and modal/future form: 'definitely to help' is incorrect; use 'will definitely help'. The ending 'so I really love' is incomplete; clarify with 'because I really love doing that'. Suggestion: use future auxiliary 'will' and complete the clause explaining the reason.

× Yes, my English teacher who still keep in touch on a WhatsApp or Instagram.

✓ Yes, my English teacher who still keeps in touch with me on WhatsApp or Instagram.

Preposition and verb agreement: 'keep in touch on a WhatsApp' is wrong. Use 'keeps in touch with me on WhatsApp or Instagram'. Also remove the article 'a' before WhatsApp. Suggestion: use 'keeps' for third person singular and 'with me' to show contact.

× I also remind some memories which I spent with her because she held me in my during exam time.

✓ I also remember some memories I spent with her because she helped me during exam time.

Wrong verb choice and extra words: 'remind some memories' is wrong; use 'remember some memories' or better 'I have memories of the time I spent with her'. 'held me in my during exam time' is incorrect; likely intended 'helped me during exam time'. Suggestion: use 'remember' and correct verb 'help'.

× Yes, I stay in touch with my family school via WhatsApp or Facebook.

✓ Yes, I stay in touch with my former school via WhatsApp or Facebook.

Pronoun/word choice: 'family school' is unclear; likely 'former school' or 'primary school'. Use the correct noun. Suggestion: choose the precise noun (former/primary) and use 'stay in touch with' correctly.

× Even if I had a problem, then I shared with them and they quickly solve my problem.

✓ If I had a problem, I would share it with them, and they would quickly solve it.

Tense consistency and object missing: Mixing past and present is confusing. Original uses past 'had' then present 'solve'. If speaking about habitual past, use 'I would share' and 'they would quickly solve it', or for present habits use present tense 'If I have a problem, I share it with them and they quickly solve it.' Also include the object 'it'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and include the object.

× For example, during my exam time I often help from my family.

✓ For example, during my exam time I often receive help from my family.

Incorrect verb structure: 'I often help from my family' is ungrammatical. Use passive or correct verb phrase: 'receive help from' or 'get help from'. Suggestion: use 'receive' or 'get' to indicate being helped.

× When my favorite teacher handled me during my exam time, the messages me in duty and solve my problem without any hesitation and I cannot feel comfortable with her because she was very slight and kind hearted.

✓ When my favorite teacher helped me during exam time, she messaged me while on duty and solved my problems without any hesitation, and I felt comfortable with her because she was very gentle and kind-hearted.

Multiple errors: 'handled me' is wrong; use 'helped me'. 'the messages me in duty' is incorrect; likely 'she messaged me while on duty'. Verb tenses must agree: 'solve' -> 'solved'. 'I cannot feel comfortable' inconsistent with past; use 'I felt comfortable'. 'slight' is wrong word for gentle; use 'gentle'. Suggestion: use correct verbs, proper past tense, and accurate adjectives.

× I would remember when I was a child, they often had me in law to manage something.

✓ I remember that when I was a child, they often put me in charge of managing something.

Pronoun and verb choice: 'I would remember' is awkward; 'I remember' is natural. 'they often had me in law to manage something' is incorrect phrasing; likely 'they often put me in charge of managing things'. Suggestion: use 'put me in charge of' for responsibility.

× For example, during lunchtime, they opened my box and give some water to me.

✓ For example, during lunchtime, they opened my lunch box and gave me some water.

Verb tense and word order: Use past tense 'gave' to match 'opened'. 'open my box' should be 'opened my lunch box'. 'give some water to me' more natural as 'gave me some water'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent and use natural object placement.

× So I feel comfortable. Comfortable that time as compared to this.

✓ So I felt more comfortable at that time compared to now.

Tense and comparative phrasing: 'I feel comfortable' conflicts with past narrative; use past 'felt'. Repetition 'Comfortable that time' is ungrammatical; use 'more comfortable at that time compared to now'. Suggestion: use comparative 'more comfortable' and correct time expressions.