Teachers— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting details (what she did and how it helped). Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example' and correct grammar (e.g., 'the reason she is my favorite is that...'). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: My favorite teacher is Nidhi, who taught English in my high school. She is kind and patient, and she used interactive activities that made difficult topics easy to understand. Because of her support, my writing and confidence improved a lot.

Sugestão: Reduce hesitations and repeating words. Provide a clear topic sentence, a reason and a brief example. Replace filler sounds ('uh') and correct odd phrasing ('repeated institution' unclear). Keep it to 2–3 sentences with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Exemplo: Yes, I want to be an English teacher. I completed a master's in English because I hope to teach at a reputable school, and I would welcome any opportunity to do so since it has been my childhood dream inspired by my own teacher.

Sugestão: Avoid fillers and repetition. Begin with a direct answer then give specific reasons and a short example of how she helped (e.g., corrected errors, offered extra sessions). Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

Exemplo: I remember many teachers, but my English teacher stands out because she really understood my weaknesses and gave personal feedback. For example, she corrected my essays in detail and offered extra help after class, so my grammar improved significantly.

Sugestão: Be concise and grammatical. State the answer, give one clear reason using linking words like 'because' or 'since', and avoid repetition. One or two sentences are enough.

Exemplo: No, I'm not in touch with my primary school teachers because I moved to another country after graduating. Since they still live in my home country, we lost regular contact.

Sugestão: Give two specific ways she helped and a brief example for each. Avoid repeating phrases and filler words. Use linking words like 'first' and 'also' or 'in addition' to structure your response. Correct phrasing: 'classmates' instead of 'class fellow.'

Exemplo: She helped me overcome the academic problems I had in 10th grade by giving extra tutoring and clear explanations. In addition, she encouraged group activities that helped me build friendships with my classmates.

Sugestão: Answer directly and avoid hesitation. Compare briefly with specific reason(s) and one example. Use linking words such as 'however' or 'because'. Keep to 2–3 sentences and remove repeats.

Exemplo: Both groups were great, but if I must choose, I prefer my high school teachers because they adapted their teaching to students' needs. For example, they used simpler explanations and practical examples so everyone could understand the material.

× The reason why why she is my favorite because her nature is very humble.

✓ The reason why she is my favorite is that her nature is very humble.

This sentence has a pronoun/reference and redundant structure error: 'The reason why why... because' is repetitive and ungrammatical. Also using 'her nature' is acceptable but the sentence needs a main verb linking clause: use 'is that' to connect reason clause. Suggestion: remove the duplicate 'why' and replace 'because' with 'is that' to form a correct reason clause.

× She her the her the way of her teaching her her way of teaching really helped me a lot throughout my school days.

✓ Her way of teaching really helped me a lot throughout my school days.

The original contains repeated words and jumbled word order, making it ungrammatical. Simplify to a clear subject 'Her way of teaching' followed by the past-tense verb 'helped' to match the time frame 'throughout my school days'. Avoid unnecessary repetition.

× I have studied, uh, studied uh, masters in English so that I can become an English teacher in future.

✓ I studied for a master's degree in English so that I could become an English teacher in the future.

The original mixes present perfect with intent and uses informal fillers. Use past simple 'studied' or 'I have studied' consistently; when describing completed education and past intention, past simple with 'could' fits. Also use 'a master's degree' and 'in the future' for correctness.

× So if I get a chance to become a teacher in a repeated institution, I would definitely uh grab the opportunity because it is my childhood dream to become a teacher just like the teacher who I admired in my school.

✓ So if I get a chance to become a teacher at a reputable institution, I would definitely grab the opportunity because it was my childhood dream to become a teacher like the one I admired at my school.

'Repeated institution' is incorrect; likely intended 'reputable institution'. Use correct preposition 'at' for institutions and article 'a reputable institution'. 'It is my childhood dream' should be 'it was my childhood dream' when referring to a long-held desire; also streamline 'teacher who I admired' to 'the one I admired' or 'the teacher I admired'.

× Well, there are many teachers who I remember, uh, from, from the past, but definitely my English teacher was the only one who really understood, uh, me and, uh, helped me a lot to improve my, uh, mistakes.

✓ Well, there are many teachers I remember from the past, but my English teacher was the one who really understood me and helped me a lot to improve my mistakes.

Remove filler words and correct relative clause: 'teachers who I remember' is better as 'teachers I remember'. 'The only one who' implies exclusivity and conflicts with 'many teachers'; 'the one who' is clearer. Keep 'understood me and helped me to improve my mistakes' for clarity.

× Uh, she really shared a very good bond with me as she behaved, uh, as a big sister.

✓ She had a very good relationship with me because she behaved like a big sister.

'Shared a bond' is acceptable but 'as she behaved as a big sister' is redundant with 'as'. Use 'because' to show reason or 'and' to add information. Replace 'behaved, as a big sister' with 'behaved like a big sister' for natural expression.

× Not at all, to be honest. Uh, I haven't seen any of my teacher and haven't talked to any of any of them since I left the school.

✓ Not at all, to be honest. I haven't seen any of my teachers and haven't talked to any of them since I left school.

Use plural 'teachers' when referring to more than one. Remove duplicated 'any of'. 'Left school' is the normal phrase (no 'the'). Present perfect 'haven't seen... since I left' is correct to describe action from past until now.

× The reason behind this is that, uh, I have, I have moved to a different country now. So all my teachers are, are living in my home country at, uh, and this, which is why I don't, I'm not in touch.

✓ The reason is that I have moved to a different country now, so all my teachers are living in my home country, which is why I'm not in touch with them.

Fix preposition and clause order: 'living in my home country' is correct. Remove extra words and place 'which is why' to connect cause and result. Include 'with them' after 'not in touch' to indicate the object.

× My favorite teacher helped me to overcome the problems that I was facing during my, uh, 10th grade, uh, 10th grade, uh, 10th grade, uh, other than that, uh, she also, uh, uh, helped me in, uh, in creating, uh, good bond with other mic, with other class fellow.

✓ My favorite teacher helped me overcome the problems I was facing during tenth grade. She also helped me build good relationships with my classmates.

Remove repetition and fillers. Use 'overcome' without 'to' optionally and keep past tense 'helped' consistent. Use 'tenth grade' or '10th grade' once. 'Create a good bond with other class fellow' is unidiomatic; use 'build good relationships with my classmates'.

× Well, it's a difficult question to answer. Both my primary and high school teachers were very good and nice. But I but I if I have to choose one, I would definitely say my high school teachers were very humble and they always came down to the level of students in order to teach them in, in the way they they could learn the things.

✓ Well, it's a difficult question to answer. Both my primary and high school teachers were very good. If I had to choose one, I would say my high school teachers were very humble, and they always adapted to the students' level to teach in a way that helped them learn.

Remove repeated words and fix conditional phrasing: 'if I have to choose one' should be 'if I had to choose one' (hypothetical). 'Came down to the level of students' is better expressed as 'adapted to the students' level'. Use possessive 'students' and rephrase 'learn the things' to 'helped them learn' for natural English.