Tidiness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, use linking words for coherence, and include one or two specific reasons or examples. Keep the answer concise (max 4–5 sentences) and use more natural phrasing.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I always try to keep my home and room tidy because a clean environment helps me concentrate and feel relaxed. For example, I tidy my desk every evening so I can start work fresh the next day.

Sugestão: Answer directly, avoid filler words, and use past tense consistently. Give a brief specific example of what you did as a child to show rather than repeat the same idea. Use linking words to connect reason and example.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My father insisted on tidiness, so I always made my bed and put toys away after playing. Because of that habit, I learned discipline and stayed organized at school later on.

Sugestão: Provide a clear routine with specific actions and avoid hesitations like 'you know' or 'uh'. Use linking words to list steps and be concrete about frequency and methods (e.g., daily/weekly, filing, wiping surfaces).

Exemplo: I maintain my study space by organizing papers into folders and wiping the desk every evening. Additionally, I do a deeper clean and sort books every Sunday to keep everything in order.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion with two concise reasons and support them with a brief example. Avoid repeating 'important' and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe being tidy is necessary because it promotes good habits and better health. For instance, keeping workspaces clean reduces stress and prevents germs, which helps you stay productive and well.

× As I like to keep things tidy because I have always been a clean person and I like to keep my place clean and on my room also clean place where it makes me look or discipline man and genuine person and a fresh person so I like to keep things tidy.

✓ I like to keep things tidy because I have always been a clean person; I keep my place and my room clean because it makes me look disciplined, genuine, and fresh.

Multiple issues: run-on sentence and incorrect conjunctions creating unclear meaning. Use a semicolon or split into shorter sentences, replace 'on my room' with 'my room', and use adjectives in correct forms ('disciplined' not 'discipline man'). Keep parallel structure for list of qualities. Grammar problem type ID:16

× As I used to keep my room tidy as a child because my father always told me to keep the room tidy because it makes also discipline and great behavior that will be used in future.

✓ I used to keep my room tidy as a child because my father always told me to do so; he said it would help me develop discipline and good behavior for the future.

Mix of tenses and awkward phrasing. Use 'used to' for past habitual action and 'told me to do so'. 'Makes also discipline' is incorrect — use 'help me develop discipline'. Ensure future reference as 'for the future'. Grammar problem type ID:5

× So, uh, from my childhood, I, I like to keep room and home tight.

✓ Since childhood, I have liked to keep my room and home tidy.

Awkward structure and incorrect adjective 'tight' for tidy. Use present perfect 'have liked' to show a preference from past to present, and 'tidy' instead of 'tight'. Remove filler repetition. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I keep my work or study space tidy, like cleaning it, you know, weekends or uh, clean them in a whenever I'm free and makes them proper way.

✓ I keep my work or study space tidy by cleaning it on weekends or whenever I'm free and making sure it is organized properly.

Incorrect prepositions and pronouns: use 'on weekends' and 'whenever I'm free'. 'Makes them proper way' is ungrammatical; use 'making sure it is organized properly'. Maintain subject-verb consistency. Grammar problem type ID:11

× That's why I keep specialty.

✓ That's why I am especially careful about tidiness.

'Keep specialty' is incorrect. Use 'especially' (adverb) and an appropriate verb phrase 'am careful about tidiness' to express the intended meaning. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Yes, I think it is necessary to be tidy because it is important. It is important for our future or make a discipline, it helps to us our great behaviour towards some place or to be a hygiene person.

✓ Yes, I think it is necessary to be tidy because it helps us develop discipline and good behavior and maintain personal hygiene, which is important for our future.

Run-on sentences and incorrect phrases: 'make a discipline' should be 'develop discipline'; 'helps to us our great behaviour towards some place' is unclear — replace with 'helps us develop good behavior'; 'to be a hygiene person' should be 'maintain personal hygiene'. Combine ideas into a clear, grammatical sentence. Grammar problem type ID:26

× So I it is necessary for us.

✓ So, it is necessary for us.

Typographical and word order error: remove the extra 'I' and ensure correct subject 'it' begins the clause for natural word order. Grammar problem type ID:26