Tidiness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 答えは直接的で短いですが、文法が誤っており、表現が不自然です。まず肯定・否定の応答を正しく使い（"No, I don't"）、理由を簡潔で具体的に述べる練習をしてください。また冗長性を避け、語順と前置詞（"good at keeping"）を正しく使うことが重要です。例を一つだけ挙げ、リンクワード（"because"）でつなぎましょう。

Exemplo: No, I don't. I find tidying up annoying because it takes time I would rather spend relaxing. For example, I often leave clothes on the chair instead of folding them because it feels quicker.

Sugestão: 時制と語順の誤りがあります（過去習慣は "used to"、"Yes, I did" など）。また、理由や状況説明が曖昧で文が途中で切れています。過去の習慣を述べた後、具体例や頻度を示すとよいです。接続詞（"but" の代わりに "although" 等）や完結した文で説明しましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child I used to keep my room tidy because my parents always reminded me, although sometimes I was too tired to clean properly.

Sugestão: 方法は述べていますが、語彙や表現が不正確（"stationary"→"stationery"等）、発話の途切れ（"uh"）が目立ちます。論理的な流れと具体性（どの箱、いつ片付けるか）を加え、接続詞（"so"、"then"）で整理手順をつなげましょう。語彙は正しい単語を使ってください。

Exemplo: I usually tidy up after I finish work. First, I put my laptop and stationery into a storage box, then I stack my books on a shelf, so my desk is clear for the next day.

Sugestão: 意見は明確ですが、理由や具体例が不足しています。"but I can't" の説明（なぜできないのか）を付け加え、代わりの対処法や頻度を示すと説得力が増します。時制と語順（"anytime"→"anytime" は不自然、"all the time"等）も注意してください。

Exemplo: To be honest, I think being tidy is important because it helps me focus. However, I often procrastinate cleaning, so my new room is messy most of the time; I'm trying to set a weekly routine to improve it.

× Nor I don't because it is annoying for me.

✓ No, I don't because it's annoying for me.

The student used 'Nor' incorrectly; 'No' is the appropriate response to a yes/no question. Also contract 'it is' to 'it's' for natural speech. Use 'No, I don't' to clearly negate. Replace 'for me' with 'to me' for slight improvement but 'for me' is acceptable.

× For example, I'm not good toward needing my room.

✓ For example, I'm not good at keeping my room tidy.

The phrase 'good toward needing' is incorrect. Use the adjective 'good at' followed by a gerund 'keeping' to express ability. 'My room tidy' completes the idea; 'keeping my room tidy' is the correct collocation.

× Yes, I do. When I was a child, every time my parents complained to me but I couldn't.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child, my parents complained to me all the time, but I couldn't keep it tidy.

Question asked about past habit so use past tense 'did' not 'do'. The clause 'every time my parents complained to me but I couldn't' is incomplete and needs a main verb. Use 'complained to me all the time' and 'I couldn't keep it tidy' to complete the thought and maintain past tense consistency.

× I prepare the uh books because after working I put my PC and the stationary and N into the box.

✓ I tidy the books because after working I put my PC and the stationery into a box.

'Prepare the uh books' is awkward; 'tidy the books' or 'put the books away' is clearer. 'Stationary' is a misspelling of 'stationery'. 'The' before 'stationery' and 'PC' is unnecessary; use 'a box' instead of no article. Remove the extraneous 'and N' which has no meaning.

× It is easy way for me.

✓ It is an easy way for me.

Missing article 'an' before 'easy way' is required. Alternatively say 'It's an easy method for me' or 'It's easy for me.' Ensure appropriate article usage.

× To be honest, I think it is necessary to be tidy, but I can't.

✓ To be honest, I think it is necessary to be tidy, but I can't do it.

'I can't' is incomplete; add a verb to show what you cannot do: 'do it' (keep tidy). Maintain present tense 'think' and 'is' consistency.

× That's why my new room is messy anytime.

✓ That's why my new room is messy all the time.

Use the idiomatic adverb phrase 'all the time' instead of 'anytime' to mean 'constantly'. 'Anytime' is typically used in questions or conditional contexts, not for continuous state.