Tidiness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Focus on clear grammar and concise organization: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one clear reason with a specific short example. Correct verb forms and word choice (e.g., 'reflect', 'person's characteristics', 'cooperate with them') and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I like to keep things tidy because it reflects a person’s habits and personality. For example, when my desk is organized I feel more focused and others see me as reliable, which makes teamwork easier.

Sugestão: Improve tense consistency and sentence fluency: use past tense for childhood habits, combine short fragments into one or two sentences, and remove filler words. Give a specific detail about what you did and how it helped.

Exemplo: Yes, when I was a child I always kept my room tidy because my mother taught me to do it. This habit made me feel more positive and helped me find my school things quickly.

Sugestão: Be specific and use clear linking: state the method first, then explain when and why you do it. Remove hesitations and improve clarity by giving one or two concrete actions (e.g., decluttering, filing papers, using boxes).

Exemplo: I keep my study space tidy by decluttering every evening and putting papers in labeled folders. If I start feeling distracted, I spend five minutes organizing to clear my mind and get back to work.

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and concise: give a clear opinion, one reason with a specific result, and avoid repetition. Use natural phrasing (e.g., 'reflect a person's personality' and 'appear cooperative').

Exemplo: Yes, I believe being tidy is important because it reflects your personality and makes you appear reliable. As a result, people are more willing to work with you in group projects.

× Yes, I would like to keep things tidy and I think keep things tidy can reflex a person's. Characteristics and personalities.

✓ Yes, I like to keep things tidy, and I think keeping things tidy can reflect a person's characteristics and personality.

Errors: incorrect modal/tense choice 'would like' (unnatural for general habit), missing gerund 'keeping' after 'think', wrong verb 'reflex' should be 'reflect', misplaced period splitting sentence, plural 'personalities' better as singular 'personality' when referring to one person. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits, use gerund after 'think', and correct verb choice and sentence punctuation.

× For example, if a person's everything is messed up and nobody will want to cooperate with it.

✓ For example, if a person's things are all messed up, nobody will want to cooperate with them.

Errors: possessive structure 'a person's everything' is incorrect; use 'a person's things' or 'their things'. Subject-verb agreement: 'things are' instead of 'everything is' if 'things' used. Pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to people/things; use 'them'. Suggestion: Use clear noun phrase 'things' and matching plural verb and pronoun.

× Yes, when I was a child I always make my room tidy, not only because my mom taught me to do that, but also I think that's umm, good habit to make.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I always made my room tidy, not only because my mom taught me to do that, but also because I think it's a good habit.

Error: incorrect verb tense 'make' should be past 'made' to match 'when I was a child'. Awkward phrase 'good habit to make' — use 'a good habit' and include 'because'. Suggestion: Keep past tense for habits in childhood and use natural collocations.

× Make me feel more positive in the life.

✓ It made me feel more positive in life.

Errors: sentence fragment lacking subject 'It' and wrong tense; 'Make' should be past 'made' to match previous clause. 'In the life' is unnatural; use 'in life'. Suggestion: Provide explicit subject and match tense.

× I always keep my workspace or study tidy by the habits I have which when I think my umm my thinking was messed up or I need to adjust I will do that.

✓ I always keep my workspace or study tidy through habits I have developed: when I feel my thinking is confused or I need to refocus, I tidy it.

Errors: awkward structure and tense inconsistency 'which when I think my... was messed up'. Use gerund/noun phrases 'through habits I have developed'. Change 'was messed up' to present 'is confused' for current habitual action, and clarify 'I will do that' to 'I tidy it' or 'I reorganize it'. Suggestion: Simplify sentence, use present tense for habitual actions, and use clear verbs like 'refocus' or 'tidy'.

× Yes, I think to be tidy is necessary because like I said, it could reflect a person's personalities and characteristics and it will make other persons to think you are a person who could collaborate with.

✓ Yes, I think being tidy is necessary because, as I said, it can reflect a person's personality and characteristics, and it will make other people think you are someone who can collaborate well.

Errors: 'to be tidy is necessary' is awkward; use gerund 'being tidy'. 'Could reflect' better as 'can reflect' for general truth. 'Personalities' should be singular 'personality' when referring to one person. 'Other persons' unnatural; use 'other people'. 'Make ... to think' incorrect infinitive structure; use 'make people think'. 'Could collaborate with' is incomplete—collaborate with whom? Better: 'collaborate well' or 'work well with others'. Suggestion: Use gerund for general statements, use 'can' for general truths, correct noun number and clear phrasing for collaboration.