Tidiness— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答要更自然、语法要正确并且句子更完整。可以把主题句和原因分开，并用连词使语句流畅；注意时态和人称一致，避免多余停顿或不完整的结尾。建议句子控制在3-4句内，提供具体例子说明如何整理。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I feel irritated when my space is messy, so I make an effort to organize my belongings every day. For example, I always put my clothes in the wardrobe and keep my desk clear to help me concentrate better.

Sugestão: 回答要更具体并修正语法错误。先直接回答，再用一到两句具体细节解释过去的习惯或原因；使用连接词如 'because' 或 'so' 来增强连贯性，并注意名词复数和从句结构。

Exemplo: Not really, I don't remember being very tidy as a child because I often left my toys everywhere. For instance, I used to draw on the walls and leave my books on the floor until my parents taught me to tidy up.

× Yes definitely, because I'm really feel annoyed if things are messy so I try my best, keep my things tidy and.

✓ Yes, definitely, because I really feel annoyed if things are messy, so I try my best to keep my things tidy.

原句中含有动词形式错误和句子连接问题。"I'm really feel annoyed" 同时使用了进行时态助动词 "am" 和实义动词原形 "feel"，应使用一般现在时 "I really feel annoyed" 或进行时 "I am really annoyed"。此外，句子最后的并列结构不完整，应将短语 "keep my things tidy" 与前面用不定式短语连接："try my best to keep"。建议：去掉多余的助动词或改为正确的形态，使用完整的连接结构（to + 动词原形）。

× Probably not, I can't remember very clearly, but most of child can't understand what means tidy so they just put their belongings everywhere and even drawing on the walls.

✓ Probably not. I can't remember very clearly, but most children didn't understand what "tidy" means, so they just put their belongings everywhere and even drew on the walls.

该句存在多处问题：1) "most of child" 名词复数与数量表达错误，正确形式为 "most children"（参见复数问题/量词使用）；2) 时态不一致：问句关于过去习惯，应使用过去时 "didn't understand" 和 "drew"；3) 从句中 "what means tidy" 语序错误，正确为 "what 'tidy' means" 或更自然的 "what tidy means"；4) 末尾结构不完整，动词形式应与过去时一致（"drew" 而不是 "drawing"）。建议：将名词改为复数，统一使用过去时，并把从句语序调整为正确的主谓结构。