Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak more fluently and clearly: remove filler words (uh), use correct verb forms, and give a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because, and) to connect ideas. Keep answers to no more than 4–5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they offered many activities and lots of green space. For example, I used to play on the swings and have picnics with my family, which made me feel relaxed and happy. These memories are why I enjoyed visiting parks so much.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and precision: use correct verb patterns (I still like going), accurate prepositions (in/around), and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence and add one concrete detail or recent example to support it.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I feel relaxed when I am surrounded by trees. For example, I often go for a short walk in the local park after work to clear my mind and get some fresh air.

Sugestão: Be specific and use correct vocabulary: replace vague phrases (two and three bars) with clear information (only two or three parks). Use linking words to give a reason and one consequence. Avoid filler words and correct tense/word choice.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks because our city only has two small parks. If there were more, families could relax locally and people could have better places for exercise on weekends.

Sugestão: Clarify meaning and give a specific plan: avoid confusing phrases (many kind of bugs) unless relevant. Give a clear topic sentence about a specific park or type of park you want to visit and explain why with one or two precise reasons or plans.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit large botanical gardens in the future because I enjoy seeing different plant species and peaceful landscapes. For instance, I hope to visit the city’s new botanical garden next year to take photos and learn about native plants.

× Yes, I would like to go parks, uh, because, uh, in the way we have uh, most of the activities and we found peace and enjoy a lot of greenery. So from my perspective, I like to go parks whenever I was joined.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks, because there we had most of the activities and found peace and enjoyed a lot of greenery. From my perspective, I liked going to parks whenever I was allowed to join.

The sentence contains multiple errors: 'would like to go parks' mixes modal 'would like' with an incorrect object form; 'go parks' needs the preposition 'to' or the gerund 'going to parks'; tense consistency is wrong for a past habit (use past simple or 'used to'/'liked'). 'We have' should be past 'we had'. 'We found' is correct past but 'enjoy' should be past 'enjoyed'. 'Whenever I was joined' is incorrect passive and unclear; 'allowed to join' or 'I could go' expresses the intended meaning. Suggest using consistent past tense for childhood habits and correct verb forms and prepositions.

× Yes, I still like to going to parks because I feel very comfortable in a round of greenery and most of the things in parks. So I really enjoy there. And from my perspective I really enjoy to going parts.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks because I feel very comfortable around greenery and with the things in parks. I really enjoy being there. From my perspective, I really enjoy going to parks.

Incorrect mix of infinitive and gerund: 'like to going' and 'enjoy to going' should use gerund forms 'like going' and 'enjoy going'. 'in a round of greenery' is incorrect preposition and phrase; use 'around greenery'. 'I really enjoy there' lacks correct verb or preposition; use 'I really enjoy being there'. Also 'parts' is a misspelling of 'parks'. Suggest using gerunds after 'like' and 'enjoy' and correct prepositions ('around', 'being there').

× Yes, I also like to see more parks in my city because it has uh now just two and three bars. But I need more parks in my city. So then we moved uh, at weekend to go the parks and enjoy. So I need more.

✓ Yes, I would also like to see more parks in my city because it now has only two or three parks. I need more parks in my city. Then we move at the weekend to go to the parks and enjoy them, so I need more.

Several issues: 'like to see' is acceptable but 'would like to see' sounds more natural. 'it has uh now just two and three bars' likely means 'it now has only two or three parks' — 'only' and 'or' are correct quantifier and conjunction. 'Moved' should be present or habitual 'move' to match context; 'at weekend' needs article 'at the weekend' (British English) and 'go the parks' requires preposition 'to' and plural object; 'enjoy' should have an object 'enjoy them'. Suggest using correct quantifiers ('only', 'two or three'), articles ('the weekend'), and prepositions ('to the parks').

× Yes, there are many kind of bugs. I would like to go in my future because now I feel really enjoyable and comfortable around the greenery and beautiful views, so I would like to go most of the parks.

✓ Yes, there are many kinds of bugs. I would like to go in the future because I now feel very happy and comfortable around the greenery and beautiful views, so I would like to visit most of the parks.

Errors include 'many kind of bugs' which should be plural 'many kinds of bugs' or 'many kinds of insects'. 'Go in my future' is unnatural; use 'go in the future'. 'Feel really enjoyable' is incorrect; 'enjoyable' describes things, not feelings — use 'feel very happy' or 'enjoy myself'. 'Go most of the parks' needs verb 'visit' and preposition 'to' or 'visit most of the parks'. Suggest correcting noun plurality, preposition use, choice of adjectives versus verbs, and verb choice for 'visit'.