Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they gave me space to run and play. For example, I often played games with neighborhood kids and sometimes interacted with dogs, which made the visits fun and memorable.

Sugestão: Keep the direct topic sentence and add a brief specific reason using linking words. Use correct tense and small details to make your answer sound natural and complete.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy parks, but at present I’m very busy with work and family commitments, so I don’t visit as often as I used to. When I do go, I usually go for a short walk to relax.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion then support it with specific benefits. Use linking words and correct phrasing; avoid repeating the same idea. Mention one or two concrete effects of more parks.

Exemplo: Yes, I would. Because my city is very hot, more parks would increase green space and provide shade, which can help lower local temperatures and improve air quality.

Sugestão: Be specific about the places and use correct names and vocabulary. Start with a clear statement, then give two concise reasons with linking words. Avoid filler words and incorrect nouns.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit parks in Singapore and the United States. For example, Singapore’s Gardens by the Bay appeals to me for its landscaped gardens and futuristic structures, and many large U.S. parks offer diverse activities like hiking and picnicking among mature trees.

× Yes, I like going to parks as a child because I could running and I could run and play with others and play, play with other dogs and cats.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because I could run and play with others and play with other dogs and cats.

The sentence uses present tense 'like' with the time reference 'as a child' which requires past tense (Present tense issue and Past tense issue). Also 'could running' is incorrect because 'could' must be followed by the base verb, not the -ing form. Suggest using 'liked' for past habit and 'could run' for ability in the past. Keep parallel structure by repeating 'play' only once.

× Yes, but at present I'm very busy with my work and my family, so I don't have any time as before.

✓ Yes, but at present I'm very busy with my work and my family, so I don't have as much time as before.

The phrase 'don't have any time as before' is unidiomatic. Use the comparative structure 'as much time as before' to compare current and past amounts. This is a present tense context (now), so keep 'I'm' and 'don't have' but correct the quantifier phrase for clarity.

× Yes, of course, because my city is very hot and parks will have my city have more green, have more green parts and the temperature will decrease a lot.

✓ Yes, of course, because my city is very hot and parks would give my city more green spaces, and the temperature would decrease considerably.

The original sentence has repeated and incorrect structure 'parks will have my city have more green' and uses 'have more green parts' which is unidiomatic. Use 'give my city more green spaces' or 'increase green areas'. Also use conditional 'would' to express likely result. Replace 'decrease a lot' with 'decrease considerably' for natural adverb use.

× Yes, I want to go to the Singapore and USA sparks because they have very big bucks and uh, there are a lot of activities to do and umm, there are also have lots of uh, trees.

✓ Yes, I want to go to parks in Singapore and the USA because they have very big parks and many activities to do, and they also have lots of trees.

Several errors: 'the Singapore' is wrong—use 'Singapore' without an article; use 'the USA' with 'the'. 'Sparks' and 'bucks' are incorrect words likely meant to be 'parks'. Remove filler words ('uh', 'umm'). Use 'many activities' (countable plural) and correct verb phrase 'they also have lots of trees'. Ensure plural agreement and correct article usage.