Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and use correct tense and concise phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense (‘Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child.’), then add one or two specific supporting details (where you went, what you liked). Keep to under five sentences and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. I often went with my family to a small neighborhood park where I loved playing on the swings and feeding ducks in the pond.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use present tense; explain reasons briefly with logical linking words. Correct word choice ('parks' not 'pass') and avoid conflicting statements (saying you don't like parks then saying you go to turf with friends is confusing). Use one linking word like 'because' or 'however'.

Exemplo: Not really — I don't go to parks much nowadays because I am very busy with work and studies. However, I sometimes meet friends at a nearby sports turf for exercise on weekends.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion and support it with two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., 'because' and 'for example'). Fix small grammar issues (plural forms and articles). Be concise and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I would. More parks would improve air quality because trees absorb pollutants, and they would give children safe places to play — for example, kids could ride bicycles or play football instead of staying glued to their phones.

Sugestão: Be specific and concise: name the park if possible or give a clear description and reason. Use present/future tense correctly and avoid filler words. Provide one or two vivid details to make the answer memorable.

Exemplo: I would like to visit a famous park in Haryana called (if you know the name) or a large botanical garden there. I’ve heard it has diverse flowerbeds and many mature trees, which would be wonderful for photography and peaceful walks.

× Yes, I'd like to go to parks when I was a when I was a child, but currently I'm not going to anyone.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child, but currently I don't go to any.

The sentence mixes present conditional 'I'd like' with past time reference 'when I was a child' causing tense mismatch (present vs past). Use past simple 'liked' for a habitual action in childhood. 'I'm not going to anyone' is incorrect: 'anyone' refers to people; use 'any' with countable noun omitted as 'go to any (park)' or simply 'don't go to any'. Also remove duplicated phrase 'when I was a'. Suggestion: 'I liked going to parks when I was a child, but currently I don't go to any.'

× No, I'm not very fond of going to pass because today I'm staying very busy and it's very hard to manage and still have the time to go to the park.

✓ No, I'm not very fond of going to parks because these days I'm very busy and it's hard to find time to go to the park.

'Going to pass' is incorrect; likely meant 'going to parks'. 'Today I'm staying very busy' is awkward and mixes present continuous with general situation; use 'these days' or 'currently' and simple present 'I'm very busy'. Also 'it's very hard to manage and still have the time' is wordy; use 'it's hard to find time'. Adjusted to match present habitual context.

× I usually go with my friends to the turf.

✓ I usually go with my friends to the turf/the field.

The word 'turf' is uncommon in this context; 'the turf' may be acceptable but 'the field' or 'the park' is more natural. Preposition 'to' is correct; main issue is word choice. If referring to a sports ground, 'the field' or 'the turf field' clarifies meaning.

× Guess I would think that parks would be very much better for my city because, uh, because they will reduce pollution and the children's will be much more likely to go to the parks and play rather than being glued to their phones.

✓ I think parks would be much better for my city because they would reduce pollution and children would be more likely to go to parks and play rather than being glued to their phones.

Original uses unnecessary 'Guess I would think' and mixes modals 'would' and 'will'. Use 'I think' for opinion and consistent conditional 'would' for hypothetical benefits. 'the children's' is incorrect possessive; use plural noun 'children'. Remove extra 'the' before 'parks'. Ensure parallel structure: 'would be likely to go to parks and play.'

× Uh, well, the park I want to go in the future is, I think in Haryana, but I don't know its name because it's a very good park and the environment is very good and they have different kinds of flowers and trees, which are just amazing and breathtaking.

✓ Well, the park I want to go to in the future is, I think, in Haryana, but I don't know its name. It's a very nice park with a beautiful environment and many kinds of flowers and trees, which are amazing and breathtaking.

Fix preposition: 'go to in the future' (move 'to' next to 'go'). Break long sentence into two for clarity. Use 'I think' with commas. Replace repetitive 'very good' with varied adjectives 'very nice' and 'beautiful'. 'They have' referring to the park is acceptable but better to say 'it has' because 'park' is singular. Maintain future intent by using 'want to go to in the future' which is appropriate.