Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and simple grammar (e.g., 'When I was six'). Keep it under 5 sentences and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. When I was six, I often went with my parents and played on the swings and slides. I remember running around with neighborhood friends and having picnics on weekends.

Sugestão: Give a clear reason and one specific activity to support your answer. Use linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so') and correct verb forms (e.g., 'I enjoy playing'). Keep sentences concise and logical.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are a great place to relax and meet friends. For example, I often play football or walk with my friends there, and it helps me unwind after a busy day.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give one or two specific reasons or comparisons (e.g., benefit for families, green space). Correct article use and plural forms (’in Dhaka’, ‘many parks nearby’). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve people's health and give children safe places to play. Although Dhaka has several parks nearby, more small neighborhood parks would make them easier to access for families.

Sugestão: Be specific about the place and explain why you want to go with clear reasons. Avoid filler words and unrelated words (e.g., 'mayonnaise' is irrelevant). Use 2–3 concise sentences linking dream, details and planned action.

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit the Keukenhof Tulip Gardens in the Netherlands because of their famous flower displays. It has been my dream to take photos among the tulips and experience the colorful spring landscape.

× Yes, I like going to box and when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park when I was a child.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and word choice. 'going to box' is incorrect; likely meant 'going to the park'. Tense should be past 'liked' to match 'when I was a child'. Also remove the extra conjunction 'and'. Use article 'the' with 'park'. Suggestion: Replace incorrect nouns, use past tense for past habits, and include appropriate articles.

× When I when my age is 6 years, I.

✓ When I was six years old, I used to go to parks.

This sentence is incomplete and has incorrect verb forms. Use 'When I was six years old' for age in the past, and 'used to' or simple past to describe habitual actions. Provide a complete predicate (e.g., 'I used to go to parks'). Suggestion: Complete the sentence and use correct past tense and age expression.

× Yes, I still like going to parks now because it feels maybe sure, I enjoy with my friends in the park.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now because I enjoy being with my friends in the park.

The original mixes unclear phrases and wrong verb forms. 'feels maybe sure' is ungrammatical and should be removed. 'I enjoy with my friends' is incorrect collocation; use 'enjoy being with' or 'enjoy spending time with'. Maintain present simple for current habits. Suggestion: Use clear expressions (enjoy being/spending time with) and present simple for routines.

× I play, playing with my friends.

✓ I play with my friends.

The original repeats verb forms and includes unnecessary gerund. Use either 'I play with my friends' (simple present) or 'I am playing with my friends' for present continuous. For habitual action, simple present is appropriate. Suggestion: Avoid redundant verb forms; choose the correct form for the intended meaning.

× And also time.

✓ We also spend time there.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb. Make it a complete sentence by adding subject and verb, e.g., 'We also spend time there.' Suggestion: Ensure every sentence has a subject and predicate.

× Yes, I see more parts in my city.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

The student likely intended to answer the question about wanting more parks. 'See more parts' is incorrect word choice and tense; use 'would like to see' for preference. Also 'parts' should be 'parks'. Suggestion: Use the correct noun and modal expression for preference.

× I live in a Dhaka so there are many parks in nearby.

✓ I live in Dhaka, so there are many parks nearby.

Do not use the indefinite article 'a' before the proper noun 'Dhaka'. Also 'in nearby' is incorrect; use 'nearby' without 'in' or 'nearby areas'. Add a comma before conjunction. Suggestion: Omit article with city names and use 'nearby' correctly.

× I go many types park there.

✓ I go to many different types of parks there.

Missing preposition 'to', incorrect noun phrase order. Use 'many different types of parks' to describe variety. Suggestion: Use 'go to' and correct noun phrase structure 'many different types of parks'.

× Children enjoy with many type players and.

✓ Children enjoy playing with many types of equipment and other children.

'Enjoy with' is incorrect; use 'enjoy playing with' or 'enjoy' + gerund. 'many type players' is unclear; likely meant 'many types of play equipment' or 'players'. The sentence is also incomplete. Suggestion: Use 'enjoy' + gerund and 'types of' to form correct noun phrases; complete the sentence.

× Yes, I want to go Netherland, uh, Tulip garden.

✓ Yes, I want to go to the Netherlands, to see the tulip gardens.

Country name needs plural form 'the Netherlands' and requires preposition 'to'. 'Tulip garden' should be plural or 'the tulip gardens'. Suggestion: Use correct country name with article and include 'to' before destinations.

× This is a very beautiful place.

✓ This is a very beautiful place.

Sentence is fine; no correction needed. It correctly uses article and adjective to describe the place. Suggestion: Maintain correct structure.

× I my dream is I want to go there and take picture mayonnaise.

✓ My dream is to go there and take pictures.

The original is disfluent and contains the unrelated word 'mayonnaise'. Use infinitive form 'to go' after 'My dream is' and plural 'pictures' for photographs. Remove extraneous words. Suggestion: Use 'My dream is to...' + verb infinitive and correct noun forms.

× This is my dream place. Yeah, that's it.

✓ This is my dream place. That's it.

The sentences are acceptable conversationally; removing 'Yeah,' makes it slightly more formal. Both are grammatically acceptable. Suggestion: For formal responses, avoid filler words like 'yeah'.