Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện phát âm và ngữ pháp cơ bản; trả lời rõ ràng với câu chủ đề, dùng thì quá khứ nhất quán và nối các ý bằng liên từ. Hạn chế tiếng lắp, sửa từ sai (ví dụ: "past" → "parks", "slice" unclear). Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ trò chơi, kỷ niệm) và giữ không quá 4-5 câu.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. I often played on the swings and climbed trees with my friends, and my parents frequently took us for picnics. Those outings helped me make friends and feel more confident outdoors.

Sugestão: Sử dụng thì hiện tại phù hợp và sửa cấu trúc câu phủ định; dùng từ vựng chính xác (ví dụ: "bugs" có lẽ là "parks" hoặc "plants"), tránh câu dài không cần thiết. Thêm một lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ để làm rõ quan điểm.

Exemplo: Not really. I rarely visit parks now because my schedule is very busy, so I prefer indoor activities like reading and browsing the internet. Also, I feel many parks in my area are less well-maintained than before, so they are less attractive.

Sugestão: Trả lời ngắn gọn nhưng tự nhiên; dùng cấu trúc ngữ pháp đúng (ví dụ: "I am not motivated" hoặc "I don't have time"). Nên dùng liên từ để nối với câu trước và cung cấp một lý do cụ thể hoặc điều kiện thay đổi quan điểm.

Exemplo: At the moment, no. As I mentioned, I don't have time to visit parks because of my busy schedule, and I prefer indoor hobbies. However, I would appreciate more parks if they offered facilities for evening activities.

Sugestão: Loại bỏ tiếng ngập ngừng, sử dụng thì hiện tại/điều kiện phù hợp và miêu tả cụ thể hơn về lý do muốn đến đó. Nói rõ nguồn thông tin bằng cách dùng cấu trúc chính xác ("I heard about it on TikTok and from a relative").

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Riverland in Nakhon in the future. I heard about it on TikTok and my relative who visited last year said it has beautiful riverside walks and interesting food stalls.

× Definitely I enjoyed going past as a child.

✓ Definitely I enjoyed going to parks as a child.

The student used 'past' incorrectly; the intended meaning is 'parks'. Also 'enjoyed' is correct past tense. Correct the noun and include 'to' for the verb phrase 'going to parks'. Suggested improvement: use 'going to parks' for habitual childhood activity.

× I remember that I played swings, uh, slice to play with my friends and my parents took me for a picnic.

✓ I remember that I played on swings, slid on slides and played with my friends, and my parents took me on a picnic.

Prepositions and verb forms were incorrect: 'played swings' should be 'played on swings'; 'slice' is likely 'slide' and needs base verb 'slid' or 'slid on slides'; 'play with my friends' should match tense 'played'. Use 'took me on a picnic' instead of 'for a picnic'. Improvement: practice verb + preposition collocations like 'play on', 'slide on', and keep past tense consistent.

× Parks helps me to make new friends and.

✓ Parks helped me make new friends.

Subject-verb agreement and tense: 'Parks' (plural) requires 'help' not 'helps', and context is past so 'helped' is appropriate. Also sentence was incomplete; remove redundant 'to' and trailing conjunction. Improvement: match plural subjects with plural verbs and maintain past tense for childhood statements.

× No, I don't like going back now because of the busy schedule, I usually play indoor activities like reading the books and surfing the Internet.

✓ No, I don't like going back now because of my busy schedule. I usually do indoor activities like reading books and surfing the Internet.

Article and verb usage: 'the busy schedule' should be 'my busy schedule'; 'play indoor activities' is incorrect collocation — use 'do indoor activities'; 'reading the books' should be 'reading books' (no definite article). Improvement: use correct possessive adjectives and common verbs for activities ('do' indoor activities).

× In addition, Bugs is not beautiful than in the past.

✓ In addition, parks are not as beautiful as they were in the past.

Comparison structure was wrong: 'not beautiful than' is incorrect. Use 'not as ... as' to make negative comparisons, and correct noun 'Bugs' to 'parks'. Maintain tense with 'were' for past state. Improvement: learn 'as...as' structure and plural agreement.

× Actually no. As I mentioned, I don't have motivated to see more parks in my city because my schedule is very busy and I like play indoor activities.

✓ Actually no. As I mentioned, I'm not motivated to visit more parks in my city because my schedule is very busy and I like to do indoor activities.

Incorrect verb forms: 'don't have motivated' is ungrammatical; use 'I'm not motivated' or 'I don't feel motivated'. 'See more parks' is better as 'visit more parks'. 'I like play' should be 'I like to do' or 'I like playing'. Improvement: use correct adjective 'motivated' with 'be' verb and use infinitive or gerund correctly after 'like'.

× Uh yes I want to go to the Riverland which is in Nachan in the future.

✓ Yes, I want to go to Riverland in Nachan in the future.

Minor article/use issues: remove filler 'Uh', 'the' before Riverland may be unnecessary if it's a proper name. Sentence fits future intention; 'in the future' is fine but can be kept. Improvement: omit fillers and use place names naturally.

× I heard I hear it through Tiktok and my relative who was experienced.

✓ I heard about it through TikTok and from my relative who has been there.

Tense and verb forms: 'I heard I hear' is redundant and inconsistent. Use 'I heard about it' for past reporting, or 'I have heard' for recent experience. 'My relative who was experienced' is unclear; replace with 'my relative who has been there' or 'who visited it'. Improvement: avoid repeating verbs, use correct reporting verb 'heard about', and clarify relative's experience with present perfect or past simple as appropriate.