Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is missing. For Part 1 you should respond directly with a clear topic sentence and 1–2 supporting details. Speak naturally, avoid long pauses and filler words (uh, um). Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to make your point coherent. Aim for 2–4 short sentences (maximum 5).

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they were safe places to play and meet friends. For example, I used to spend weekends on the swings and play football with my neighbors, which helped me make close friends.

Sugestão: There is no answer given. Provide a direct response (yes/no/occasionally) followed by reasons and a brief example. Keep it concise and avoid hesitation. Use linking words such as 'however' or 'because' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I still enjoy going to parks, mainly for exercise and fresh air. For instance, I go jogging there twice a week because the trails are quiet and well maintained.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but full of hesitation and unclear phrasing. Start with a direct statement (Yes/No/Maybe), then give clear reasons and a brief example. Remove filler words and correct grammar (e.g., 'they don't spend money on this'). Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to organize your response.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in the city because they improve residents' health and provide communal spaces. For example, if the council invested in small neighborhood parks, families would have safer places for children to play.

Sugestão: This reply is incomplete and unclear. Give a specific park name or type, a reason why you want to visit, and a short plan. Use 2–3 sentences and avoid filler words. Include linking words like 'to' or 'so that' to clarify purpose.

Exemplo: I'd like to visit the riverside park that opened recently because it has bike paths and picnic areas. I plan to go next weekend with some friends so we can cycle and have lunch there.

× I think, uh, the government, uh, takes this decision. Uh, don't, uh, they don't spend their money this, uh, part.

✓ I think the government makes that decision. They don't spend money on this area.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronouns and awkward constructions. 'Takes this decision' is a calque from some languages; in English we say 'make a decision' or 'decide'. The phrase 'don't, uh, they don't' is repetitive and the pronoun reference is unclear; replace with 'They' to refer to 'the government'. 'Their money this part' is incorrect word order and choice: use 'spend money on this area' or 'allocate funds to this part'. Also remove filler words ('uh') for clarity. Suggestion: practice linking subject pronouns to their antecedents and use standard verb collocations like 'make a decision' and 'spend money on'.

× I will bring uh.

✓ I will go there in the future.

The original fragment 'I will bring uh' is incomplete and uses 'bring' without an object, making the meaning unclear. The question asked about parks the student wants to go to in the future, so a correct response should use future tense with a verb that matches the action, such as 'go' or 'visit'. Provide a full sentence: 'I will go there in the future.' Avoid filler 'uh' and include the destination to complete the idea.