Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答は意味が伝わるが文法と自然さに改善が必要です。まず時制に注意し、過去形で一貫させること（I liked）。冗長な前置き（Oh that is a good question）は避け、主題文を最初に述べてから1〜2文の具体例や理由を付け加えてください。例えば、いつ誰と行ったか、何をして楽しかったかを短く述べると効果的です。語彙は「park」より「parks」を使い、形容詞や活動名（play, picnic, feed ducks）を加えて具体性を増しましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. I often went there with my family on weekends and enjoyed playing on the swings and feeding the ducks, which made those visits very memorable.

Sugestão: 文法的な誤りと語彙の選択ミス（Perth vs park）が目立ちます。現在の好みを述べる際は現在形を使い、活動の頻度や理由を具体的に述べてください（I usually go to the park to play volleyball and soccer because…）。時制の一致に注意し、現在の習慣は現在形（I enjoy practicing sports）にしてください。また、冗長な表現は避け、1〜2の具体的な理由や頻度を示すと良いです。

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually go there twice a week to play volleyball and soccer with my friends because exercising outdoors helps me relax and stay fit.

Sugestão: 文法と語順の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。まず助動詞と不定詞（I would like to see…）を正しく使い、単数・複数（parks）を一致させてください。理由は具体的に述べ、子どもや地域社会への利益（play space, fresh air, safe areas）を挙げてください。接続詞（because, so）や比較表現を使って論理的に展開すると良いです。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide children with safe places to play and give residents more space for exercise and relaxation.

Sugestão: 回答は簡潔ですがやや繰り返しがあり、時制の不一致（want to go / I played）があります。未来の予定について話すときは、will/would likeやbe going toを使い、具体的な公園名や理由・期待（facilities, events, scenery）を加えると説得力が増します。活動については現在形か未来形で統一してください。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit a larger park with good sports facilities in the future. I plan to play volleyball and soccer there with my friends because the fields are well maintained and there is plenty of space.

× Oh that is a good question. I like going to park as a child.

✓ Oh, that is a good question. I liked going to parks as a child.

The student is referring to a past habitual action (going to parks when they were a child), so the past tense 'liked' should be used rather than present 'like'. Also 'park' as a countable noun should be plural 'parks' or use 'the park' with an article. Suggestion: use past tense for childhood habits and pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally.

× Yeah, yes, I still like going to Perth now. I always go to Perth, play volleyball and soccer. I enjoyed practice sports.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks now. I always go to parks to play volleyball and soccer. I enjoy practicing sports.

Several tense and word-choice issues: 'still like' is present and correct, but 'Perth' (a city) is incorrect context; likely meant 'parks' so use plural. Use 'go to parks to play' to show purpose. 'I enjoyed practice sports' mixes past 'enjoyed' with present habit; use present 'enjoy' and the gerund 'practicing' after 'enjoy'. Suggestion: keep consistent present tense for current habits and use 'to' + verb or gerund appropriately.

× I would to see more park in my country. I think increase the increase the park children enjoyed more.

✓ I would like to see more parks in my country. I think increasing the number of parks would make children enjoy them more.

The modal expression 'would like' requires 'like' after 'would'. 'Park' should be plural 'parks' for general suggestion. The second sentence has structure and tense problems: use the gerund 'increasing' as the subject and 'would make' as conditional, and 'enjoy them more' clarifies the object. Suggestion: use 'would like' for polite wishes and form conditional sentences with 'would' + base verb; pluralize general countable nouns.

× Yes, I want to go to the park in the future. It is because I like the sports, so I played volleyball and soccer in the park.

✓ Yes, I want to go to parks in the future. It is because I like sports, so I will play volleyball and soccer in the parks.

The first sentence is fine aside from singular/plural choice; for general future intention use plural 'parks' or 'the park' if specific. The second part mixes present reason with past tense 'played' while referring to future plans. Use future tense 'will play' to match 'in the future'. Also 'the sports' is unnatural; use 'sports' without 'the'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (use future for future plans) and avoid unnecessary articles with general nouns.