Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevap daha doğal ve açık olmalı. Konuya doğrudan yanıt verin (evet/hayır), ardından kısa bir açıklama ve 1–2 özgül detay ekleyin. Dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (ör. geçmiş zaman kullanımı: “I liked going to parks”). Ayrıca gereksiz veya anlaşılması güç ifadelerden kaçının. Cümle sayısını 2–3 arasında tutun ve bağlaçlarla akışı sağlayın (for example, because).

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. For example, I used to visit Wick Park every weekend with my family, and I enjoyed playing on the swings and having picnics there.

Sugestão: Cevap kısa ve dilbilgisi hatalı; daha doğal ve özgül bir yanıt verin. Konuya doğrudan cevap verip, nedenini veya sıklığını belirten bir destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Zaman uyumuna dikkat edin (present simple: “I go”), ve bağlaçlarla akışı sağlayın (because, so).

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually go to a nearby park once or twice a week because I like walking and relaxing outdoors.

Sugestão: Cevap karışık ve anlam belirsiz; net bir görüş bildirin ve gerekçelendirin. ‘Would you like’ sorusuna doğrudan cevap verin (Yes, I would/No, I wouldn't), sonra nedenini açıklayın ve örnek veya öneri verin. Çocuklarla ilgili gözlemi varsa bunu açık ve doğru gramerle ifade edin.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because many neighbourhoods lack green spaces. For instance, new parks could provide safe play areas for children who currently have nowhere suitable to play.

Sugestão: Cevap doğal ve anlaşılır; iyi bir konu cümlesi ve sebep içeriyor. Ancak daha özgül detay veya bir plan ekleyerek zenginleştirebilirsiniz (ne zaman, kimle, ne yapmak istiyorsunuz). Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri bağlayın ve uzunluğu 2–3 cümlede sınırlayın.

Exemplo: I'd like to visit Central Park in New York City because it's famous and very peaceful. When I go, I'd love to rent a bike and explore the paths, and maybe have a picnic with friends.

× Yes, I have going to. Four days in Wick, a park going to child.

✓ Yes, I used to go. I went to Wick Park every day when I was a child.

The original sentences have incorrect structure and verb forms. 'I have going to' is ungrammatical; use 'I used to go' to describe past habitual actions (Grammar problem type 26). 'Four days in Wick, a park going to child' is a fragmented sequence of words without proper order or verbs. Combine ideas into coherent sentences: 'I used to go' (past habitual) and 'I went to Wick Park every day when I was a child' (simple past for specific past habit). Suggestions: use 'used to + base verb' for past habits and ensure subject-verb-object order (subject + verb + object/time phrase).

× Yes, I going to park at sometimes.

✓ Yes, I go to the park sometimes.

The sentence uses an incorrect verb form 'I going' without an auxiliary. For habitual present actions use the simple present 'I go' (Grammar problem type 6). Also 'at sometimes' is wrong; correct adverb placement is 'sometimes' after the verb or at the beginning. Suggestion: use 'I go to the park sometimes' or 'Sometimes I go to the park.'

× Yes I see more parks in city but child's not coming in the park.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in the city, but children do not come to the park.

Multiple issues: missing auxiliary/modal for desire ('I would like'), missing article before 'city' ('the city'), incorrect contraction/possessive 'child's' used instead of plural noun 'children', and wrong verb form 'not coming' for general present negative (use 'do not come') (Grammar problem type 12). Suggestion: use 'I would like to see', include definite article 'the city' for a specific city, use plural 'children' and simple present negative 'do not come'.

× I'd like to visit Central Park in New York City because it's a famous and very relaxed place.

✓ I'd like to visit Central Park in New York City because it's a famous and very relaxing place.

The original sentence is mostly correct but 'very relaxed place' is awkward because 'relaxed' describes people or atmosphere; 'relaxing' is the adjective describing a place that relaxes visitors (Grammar problem type 13). Suggestion: use 'relaxing' for places or things that produce relaxation.