Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevabınızı geçmiş zaman ve kişisel nedenleri açıkça kullanarak düzeltin. Kısa cümleler kurarken dilbilgisi hatalarına dikkat edin (ör. "didn't like", "when I was young"). Ayrıca nedenlerinizi daha spesifik yapın ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın. Önerilen yapı: konu cümlesi (geçmiş zaman), bir veya iki destekleyici neden ve kısa örnek.

Exemplo: I didn't like going to parks when I was a child because I preferred indoor activities. For example, I enjoyed reading and playing video games more than team sports, and I often felt shy about meeting other children.

Sugestão: Cevabınızı şimdiki zamana uygun ve daha akıcı ifadelerle verin. Zaman zarflarını doğru kullanın (ör. "now", "these days") ve cümlelerinizi mantıklı bağlaçlarla birleştirin. Kısa ve net nedenler verin, dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (ör. "I am learning English", "I study for exams").

Exemplo: I don't go to parks much these days because I'm very busy. For instance, I often study English and prepare for exams, and I usually exercise at home instead of going to a park.

Sugestão: Soruya doğrudan ve kibar şekilde cevap verin; kişisel hoşlanmama konusunda daha doğal ifadeler kullanın ve dilbilgisi hatalarını giderin. "See more parks" yerine "have more parks" kullanın. Ayrıca sebebi belirtirken daha belirgin ve uygun kelimeler seçin (ör. "noisy" yerine "speaking").

Exemplo: I don't think I would benefit much from more parks in my city because I prefer quieter places. Many parks can be noisy and crowded, which makes them less enjoyable for me.

Sugestão: Cevabınızı net bir konu cümlesiyle başlayıp bir veya iki detayla genişletin. Gelecek zaman yapısını düzgün kullanın ("I want to go" veya "I would like to visit") ve spesifik bir park veya aktivite adı verin. Gereksiz duraksama ve belirsizliklerden kaçının.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Central Park in the future because it is famous and there are many walking paths. I want to go there to relax and take photographs.

× No, I don't like going to parks as a child because I'm young and I lo like those sports, doing sports because I don't like meet children.

✓ No, I didn't like going to parks as a child because I was young and I didn't like those sports or meeting other children.

The sentence mixes present tense with past context. Use past tense when talking about childhood ('didn't like', 'was'). Also correct verb forms: 'like' -> 'didn't like', 'lo like' appears to be 'didn't like', and 'meet children' should be 'meeting other children'. Use conjunctions to connect ideas clearly.

× No, I don't still like going to parks now because I don't have much time. I'm busy and I learn English. I doing sports I. Study for exam.

✓ No, I still don't like going to parks because I don't have much time. I'm busy studying English and preparing for exams, so I don't do sports.

The response refers to current habits so use present simple correctly: 'still don't like', 'I study' or better 'I'm busy studying'. Fix word order and verb forms: 'I doing sports I.' is incorrect; use 'I don't do sports' or 'I don't have time for sports'. 'Study for exam' needs 'preparing for exams'.

× No, I don't see a more parks in my state because I don't like children. Umm, because they are very speaking.

✓ No, I don't want to see more parks in my state because I don't like children; they are very noisy.

'a more parks' is incorrect—use 'more parks' without an article. 'don't see' is unnatural here; 'don't want to see' fits meaning. 'very speaking' is wrong adjective; likely intended 'noisy' or 'talkative'. Adjust sentence structure and punctuation.

× Yeah, I want go to in the future, uh.

✓ Yeah, I want to go in the future.

After 'want' use the infinitive 'to go', not bare 'go'. Remove filler 'uh'. Keep 'in the future' to indicate future intent; this is a simple present expressing future plan.