Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response grammatical, concise, and include a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Use past tense consistently and connect ideas with a linking word. Avoid repetition and keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. However, we rarely visited them because the main parks were in the city and too far from our village, so we only went on special occasions like school trips or family outings.

Sugestão: Start with a direct topic sentence stating your current preference, then explain briefly why, using a linking word to connect the ideas. Be specific about what you prefer now and limit sentences to two or three.

Exemplo: I still like going to parks, but less often than when I was a child because I now prefer places with more activities. For example, I often choose cafes or shopping malls where I can meet friends and try different things.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence about your overall view, then qualify it with one specific reason using a linking word. Use precise vocabulary (prefer, depending on my mood) and avoid informal fillers like 'well'.

Exemplo: I would be happy to have more parks in the city, but it depends on my mood. If I want fresh air and relaxation I prefer parks, whereas if I want shopping or entertainment I choose malls instead.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and provide a brief reason with a specific detail or example. Use complete sentences and avoid sentence fragments. Keep it natural and concise.

Exemplo: Not really — I don't have any particular parks I plan to visit because my interests have changed as I've gotten older. Nowadays I prefer activities like visiting museums or cafes rather than spending time in parks.

× When I was a child, I want to go to park, but it's hard for us to go there because it is far in our province.

✓ When I was a child, I wanted to go to the park, but it was hard for us to go there because it was far in our province.

The sentence mixes past time reference 'When I was a child' with present tense 'want'; use past tense 'wanted' to match. Also 'park' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Use past tense consistently for clarity and correct subject-verb temporal agreement. Suggestion: Maintain consistent past tense for events in the past and include 'the' before singular countable nouns when specific.'

× Parks when I was in when I was a child is located in the city.

✓ The parks I visited when I was a child were located in the city.

Original sentence has redundant phrases and incorrect word order. 'Parks' (plural) requires plural verb 'were'. Simplify to 'The parks I visited when I was a child were located in the city.' Suggestion: Remove repeated fragments and ensure subject-verb agreement and logical word order.'

× I do still like going to parks, but not as I wanted when I was a child because today I even wanted to go somewhere else than parks.

✓ I still like going to parks, but not as much as I did when I was a child, because these days I want to go somewhere other than parks.

Mixes present and past incorrectly: 'not as I wanted when I was a child' should be 'not as much as I did when I was a child' to compare past preference. 'Today I even wanted' incorrectly uses past 'wanted' with 'today'; use present 'want' or 'these days I want'. Also 'somewhere else than parks' is unidiomatic; use 'somewhere other than parks.' Suggestion: Use consistent tense when contrasting past and present and use standard comparative phrasing 'not as much as'.'

× Well, it depends on my mood.

✓ Well, it depends on my mood.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Depends on' correctly uses present tense to state a general truth. No change needed. Suggestion: None.'

× Sometimes I like to see parks in our city, but sometimes I rather go to malls instead of parks.

✓ Sometimes I like to visit parks in our city, but other times I would rather go to malls instead of parks.

'Rather' should be used with 'would rather' when expressing preference. 'See parks' is unnatural; 'visit parks' is better. Also use 'other times' rather than repeating 'sometimes' for style. Suggestion: Use 'would rather' for preferences and 'visit' for going to places.'

× I think no, because as I get older.

✓ I don't think so, because as I get older I prefer not to go to parks.

Original fragment 'I think no, because as I get older.' is incomplete and lacks a main clause connecting preference. 'I don't think so' is the correct negative reply, and the reason should be completed in the same sentence. Combine with the following sentence to form a complete thought. Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments; ensure each sentence has a subject and a verb and connect related ideas.'

× I prefer not to go to parks because it's not my thing now.

✓ I prefer not to go to parks because it's not my thing now.

Sentence is grammatically correct; present tense 'prefer' and 'is' correctly express a current preference. No correction needed. Suggestion: None.'