Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is short and contradictory (saying "Yes" then "I don't like"). Give a clear direct response (yes or no), a brief reason, and one short supporting detail. Use correct tense for past habits (e.g., "I liked"). Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child because my parents often took me there to play. For example, I used to feed the ducks and play on the swings with my friends.

Sugestão: Your answer says you like parks but is unclear and contains awkward phrases ("naturally really glowing", "Express yours"). Give a clear topic sentence (I still enjoy parks), then one specific reason with a linking word (because/so) and a brief example. Use natural vocabulary (peaceful, fresh air, greenery).

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they are peaceful and full of greenery. For example, I often go for a walk there to relax and breathe fresh air after work.

Sugestão: Your reply is short and grammatically weak. Answer directly (Yes, I would), provide a reason why more parks are desirable, and add a specific benefit or example using a linking word (because/so). Keep it concise and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide places for people to exercise. For instance, a new park near my neighborhood would be great for morning jogs.

Sugestão: The answer is unclear and ungrammatical. Specify a concrete place (e.g., parks in Paris), correct word order, and give a short reason and a detail. Use linking words (because/for example) and avoid placeholders (*******).

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit the parks in Paris in the future, especially the Luxembourg Gardens, because they are famous for beautiful flowers and historic statues. For example, I want to stroll there and take photos of the landscaping.

× Yes, I don't like.

✓ No, I didn't.

The student intended to say they liked going to parks as a child. The original 'Yes, I don't like.' mixes a positive response 'Yes' with a present negative 'I don't like', which is contradictory and the tense is wrong for a past habit. Use a past tense negative 'No, I didn't.' or a past positive 'Yes, I did.' depending on meaning. Suggestion: choose 'Yes, I did.' if they liked parks, or 'No, I didn't.' if they did not. Use auxiliary 'did' for past simple negatives and short answers.

× Yes, I do like because when I go to the park it's naturally really glowing. Express yours, it's very cool.

✓ Yes, I do like going to parks because when I go to a park it feels very natural and peaceful; the atmosphere is really nice.

The original has awkward clause order and vocabulary mistakes: 'I do like because when I go to the park it's naturally really glowing' combines emphatic present ('I do like') with an unclear reason and adjective 'glowing' inappropriately. Also 'Express yours' is incorrect and unclear. Correct by using 'I do like going to parks because...' and a clear, appropriate description (e.g. 'feels very natural and peaceful' or 'the atmosphere is really nice'). Keep tense consistent (present simple for general preference) and place adverbs appropriately before adjectives (e.g. 'really nice').

× Yes, of course I like.

✓ Yes, of course I do.

Short answers to 'Would you like...' use 'would' in the question; however the examiner asked 'Would you like to see more parks...?' A natural short affirmative reply is 'Yes, of course I would' or 'Yes, of course I would like that.' The original 'Yes, of course I like.' incorrectly uses 'like' instead of the conditional/modal 'would'. Keep structure consistent with the question's modal verb.

× Yes, it is all ******* Paris. I want to go Paris in my future.

✓ Yes, all of them are in Paris. I want to go to Paris in the future.

The original mixes pronouns and prepositions incorrectly: 'Yes, it is all ******* Paris' is ungrammatical; use 'all of them are in Paris' to refer to parks. Also 'I want to go Paris in my future' is missing the preposition 'to' and uses 'my future' awkwardly. Use 'I want to go to Paris in the future' or 'I want to visit Paris someday.' Ensure correct preposition 'to' with 'go' and natural phrase 'in the future.'