Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答要用時態一致並更具體。現在用過去時描述童年活動，用一句主題句回應，再補充具體細節（如活動類型、頻率、感受）。同時避免簡短重複。範例中句子不宜超過5句。

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks with my parents when I was a child. We often visited the local park every Sunday where I enjoyed feeding ducks and playing on the swings. Those outings were a special family routine that made me feel happy and relaxed.

Sugestão: 注意時態與用詞（應用現在時表示現在習慣），並提供更多細節，如去公園做的活動或頻率。使用連接詞使句子更連貫。避免語法錯誤（例如冠詞和介詞）。

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks nowadays. I usually go with my classmates at weekends to play volleyball or have a picnic, and we try to meet there once or twice a month.

Sugestão: 句子結構和語序需調整，避免中式英語。用一個清晰的主題句回答，然後用連接詞給出兩個具體理由，注意主語和動詞一致以及冠詞使用。用更自然的表達代替直譯。

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they can improve air quality and provide pleasant places for relaxation. More parks would also offer residents more options for exercise and family outings.

Sugestão: 回答需更完整，先直接回應，再補充具體原因或計畫（例如為何想去、何時去、那裡有何特色）。注意語法（動詞不定式需完整：want to go），並使用連接詞或細節使答案豐富。

Exemplo: Yes, I want to visit Sudos Yuan Lin in the future because I’ve heard it has beautiful traditional gardens and historic architecture. I hope to go there next spring when the weather is pleasant and the flowers are in bloom.

× Yes I did. I always go to the park with my parents.

✓ Yes, I did. I always went to the park with my parents.

句子时态不一致。考官问的是过去喜不喜欢去公园（过去式），学生开头用“Yes I did.”是过去时，但后面用“I always go”是一般现在时，应改为过去时“I always went”。建议：描述过去习惯时用过去时，如“used to”或“always + past tense”。

× Yes I did. I always go to the park with my classmates in the weekend.

✓ Yes, I do. I always go to the park with my classmates on weekends.

时态和时间短语使用不准确。考官问现在是否仍然喜欢（现在时），学生回答开头应使用现在时“Yes, I do.”；此外英语中用介词'on weekends'或'on the weekend'，更自然为复数形式表示经常性活动。建议：现在习惯用现在时，时间短语用'on weekends'。

× Yes, I like to see more parks in our city. That's not only can help improve the environment, but also I have more beautiful park to go.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in our city. Not only can that help improve the environment, but it would also give me more beautiful parks to go to.

连词短语结构错误和句子逻辑不清。“That's not only can help... , but also I have...”中 not only...but also 用法位置不当，且时态和句子礼貌性不够。应把“not only”后接助动词+主语，第二部分保持并列结构；另外“have more beautiful park to go”名词复数与不定式短语错误，应为“more beautiful parks to go to”。建议：使用礼貌表达“would like”，把并列结构对齐，并修正复数与不定式位置。

× Yes, I want go to the Sudos Yuan Lin.

✓ Yes, I want to go to Sudos Yuan Lin.

句子缺少不定式to。动词want后需要接不定式结构want to do sth。建议：在want与动词之间加上“to”，形成正确的“want to + 动词”结构。