Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and give a complete sentence with a brief reason or example. Keep it to 1–2 sentences, use correct tense and articles (e.g., “the park”), and avoid short fragmented replies.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to the park as a child because I liked playing on the swings and exploring the trees with my friends.

Sugestão: Make the sentence grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., “because”, “so”, “which”). Correct subject-verb agreement and article use (e.g., “parks are”, “their” → “the”) and avoid repetitions.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because the natural surroundings are very calming, and they help me relieve stress when I need a break from work.

Sugestão: Respond with a clear opinion and one specific reason. Use a topic sentence and then a supporting detail connected by linking words (e.g., “because” or “so”). Avoid repetition and fragmented phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide safe places for children to play and for people to exercise, which would improve public health.

Sugestão: Give a clear, complete answer naming the place and one reason or detail about why you want to go. Correct errors and avoid confusing numbers or repetitions. Keep it to one or two sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I'd love to visit the Royal Botanic Gardens in Melbourne in the future because I’ve heard they have beautiful plant collections and peaceful walking paths.

× Yes, I like to go to the park.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child.

The question asked about past habit as a child, so present simple 'I like' is tense-mismatched. Use past tense 'liked' and plural 'parks' to match general childhood habit. Also change infinitive 'to go' to gerund 'going' for habitual activity.'

× Yes, I like to to go to the park now because. Park are their nature are very comfortable for me and the stress will out when I'm in the park.

✓ Yes, I like going to parks now because parks and nature are very comfortable for me and my stress goes away when I'm in the park.

Multiple issues: redundant 'to to' and tense/form problems. Use gerund 'going' for habitual action. 'Park are' is subject-verb agreement error; use plural 'parks' with plural verb 'are'. 'their nature' is incorrect pronoun usage; 'parks and nature' is clearer. 'the stress will out' is ungrammatical; use 'my stress goes away' with present simple for habitual/current reality.'

× Park are their nature are very comfortable for me and the stress will out when I'm in the park.

✓ Parks and nature are very comforting to me, and my stress goes away when I'm in a park.

Subject-verb agreement: 'Park are' should be 'Parks are'. 'Their' incorrectly refers to something unspecified; rephrase to 'parks and nature'. Use adjective 'comforting' or 'comfortable to me'. Use present simple 'goes away' for habitual effect rather than 'will out'.'

× Yeah, I you more, park more, adventure more more. More play.

✓ Yes, I want more parks, more opportunities for adventure, and more places to play.

The original is fragmented and lacks verbs and clear structure. Add verbs ('want') and nouns/phrases to express meaning. Use parallel structure for list items: 'more parks, more opportunities for adventure, and more places to play.'

× Yeah, I'd like to go to Australia Park in Melbourne. I wish I I could go to Australia 11.

✓ Yes, I'd like to go to the Royal Botanic Gardens in Melbourne. I wish I could go to Australia someday.

Repeating 'I' is an error; remove duplication. 'Australia 11' is unclear—likely 'Australia' with 'someday' or a year. Use 'I wish I could' + base verb to express desire; 'someday' clarifies future intention. Also supply a realistic park name if needed. Modal 'could' correctly expresses ability/desire in hypothetical context.'