Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cümle yapınızı daha akıcı ve doğal hale getirmeye odaklanın. Tekrarlayan kelimeleri ve gereksiz duraklamaları (ör. "I, I", "uh") azaltın. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayan kısa bir konu cümlesi kurun, ardından bağlaçlarla birkaç detay ekleyin (kimlerle gittiğiniz, ne yaptığınız gibi). Örneğin: "Evet, çocukken parklara gitmeyi çok severdim. Genellikle kuzenim ve kız kardeşlerimle gider, salıncakta oynar ve piknik yapardık."

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my cousins and sisters, and we would play on the swings and have small picnics together.

Sugestão: Net ve doğru cevap verin; kısa konu cümlesiyle başlayın ve gerekçeyi mantıklı bağlaçlarla açıklayın. Dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (örn. "I don't like to parks" → "I don't like parks"). Plaj tercih ettiğinizi belirtirken nedenini somut örneklerle destekleyin (sosyal aktivite, manzara vb.).

Exemplo: No, I don't like parks much now. I find them a bit boring, so I usually go to the beach with my friends because we can swim, play games, and enjoy the view.

Sugestão: Cümledeki gereksiz tekrarları ve kelime hatalarını gidermelisiniz ("products" yanlış; doğru kelime "parks"). Direkt cevap verip nedenlerini açıkça sıralayın ve bağlaçlar kullanın (ör. "because", "so"). Spesifik istekler ekleyin: örneğin daha fazla yeşil alan, oyun alanları veya spor tesisleri istiyorsunuz gibi.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because we have very few green spaces. More parks with playgrounds and sports facilities would give families and young people better places to relax and exercise.

Sugestão: Kesin ve tutarlı olun. Eğer parklara gitmek istemiyorsanız kısa bir neden verin; ama eğer şartlı olarak gitmeyi düşünebileceğinizi belirtmek istiyorsanız bunu açıkça ifade edin. Gereksiz tekrar ve duraklamaları kaldırın. Örneğin, gelecekte özel bir park türünü ziyaret edebileceğinizi söyleyin (ör. botanik bahçesi).

Exemplo: Not really, I don't plan to visit many parks in the future because I generally find them boring. However, I might visit a special place like a botanical garden if there's an interesting exhibition.

× Yes, I, I like, I did like going to parks when I was a child and I going to with my cousin and with my sisters, yeah.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child, and I went with my cousin and my sisters.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses ('I like' and 'I did like') while the context is past. Use past simple 'liked' and 'went' for completed actions. Also fix verb form 'going to' to past 'went' and remove repeated fillers. Suggestion: choose past simple for childhood activities and use correct past forms of irregular verbs (go -> went).

× No, I don't. I don't like to parks now because it's it's very boring. I think always I going to our me and beach with my friends now, right now.

✓ No, I don't. I don't like parks now because they are very boring. I usually go to the beach with my friends now.

Incorrect preposition 'to parks' should be 'parks' without 'to' after 'like'. 'It's it's' is repetitive and 'it's' refers to plural 'parks', so use 'they are'. 'I think always I going' is ungrammatical; use 'I usually go' (correct present simple for habitual actions). Also correct word order and remove extraneous words. Suggestion: use 'like parks', 'they are', and 'I usually go' for habits.

× Yes, I would like, I would like to see more products in my city because, uh, we don't have, uh, we don't have uh, many park in my city. Uh, and I would like to more uh, parks in my city and a good park.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because we don't have many parks. I would like to have more good parks in my city.

The student said 'more products' instead of 'more parks' (wrong word). 'many park' is incorrect; use the plural 'many parks'. Also 'I would like to more parks' misses verb 'to have'. Suggestion: use the correct noun 'parks', pluralize after 'many', and include the verb 'have' when expressing desire for more parks.

× No, I, uh, I don't, I don't want to, uh, see, uh, I don't want to go, uh, parks, uh, in the future because I don't like parks. Maybe.

✓ No, I don't want to go to parks in the future because I don't like parks.

After 'go' you need the preposition 'to' before the noun: 'go to parks'. Remove filler words and repetitions. Suggestion: use 'go to parks' and keep sentence concise for clarity.