Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify the main point with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and add one specific supporting detail. Use simple linking words if needed. Focus on correct tense (past) and singular/plural forms.

Exemplo: Yes. I loved going to parks as a child because my mother enjoyed nature and often took me there. For example, we would walk among the trees and she taught me the names of different plants, which made those visits both fun and educational.

Sugestão: Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, use correct adverb placement and verb forms, avoid filler words, and give one clear reason with a simple linking phrase (e.g., 'because' or 'so').

Exemplo: Not really. I don't go to parks often now because I am busy with work, and after work I usually drive straight home to rest. Therefore, I rarely find time to visit parks during the week.

Sugestão: Give a direct opinion first, then add a specific reason using linking words. Correct article use and reduce hesitation. Mention a concrete benefit or example to support your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like more parks in the city because tall buildings limit green space. For instance, additional parks would improve air quality and provide quiet places for people to relax and exercise.

Sugestão: Answer directly and concisely. If you don't have a specific park in mind, say so and add a brief explanation. Avoid vague phrases and repeated words; use correct sentence structure.

Exemplo: Not at the moment. I can't recall any particular parks recommended to me, although I am interested in visiting new parks in the future when I find recommendations or have more free time.

× I would say I don't lie.

✓ I would say I'm not lying.

The speaker intended to deny lying in the present continuous sense. 'I don't lie' is grammatically possible but unnatural here; 'I don't lie' (simple present) suggests a habitual statement. The likely intended meaning is 'I'm not lying' (present continuous) to assure truthfulness. Use the present continuous 'I'm not lying' to indicate currently not telling a lie.

× I often went to a parks when I was child

✓ I often went to parks when I was a child

'Parks' is plural and is correct without 'a'. 'A child' requires the article 'a'. Remove 'a' before 'parks' and add 'a' before 'child'. Use plural 'parks' for general visits and 'a child' for singular noun.

× my mother loved the nature of the park

✓ my mother loved the nature of the park

This sentence is acceptable but awkward. Better: 'my mother loved the park's nature' or 'my mother loved the natural beauty of the park.' The original uses 'the nature of the park' which is not wrong but less natural; prefer 'the natural beauty of the park' for clarity.

× my mother always teach me that looking looking through the natural of like example of the trees, plants more beneficial of.

✓ my mother always taught me that looking at nature, for example trees and plants, is more beneficial.

Multiple issues: verb tense 'teach' should be past 'taught' to match 'was a child'; duplicate 'looking'; incorrect preposition 'looking through' should be 'looking at' or 'looking at nature'; 'natural of like example of the trees, plants' is ungrammatical—use 'for example trees and plants'; need a verb 'is' before 'more beneficial'. Use past tense 'taught' and correct word order and prepositions.

× Do you still like going to parks now? Student: No one days I would say like I not often or not frequent, uh, frequently to go to the bar because I'm busy on my work and after work I used to driving my car back to my residence and take a break.

✓ These days I would say I don't often go to parks because I'm busy with work, and after work I usually drive home and take a break.

'No one days' is incorrect — use 'These days'. 'I not often or not frequent' is ungrammatical; use 'I don't often' or 'I rarely'. 'To go to the bar' should be 'go to parks' (context). 'I'm busy on my work' should be 'busy with work'. 'I used to driving' should be 'I usually drive' or 'I drive' for habitual present. Maintain present simple for habits.

× I will say yeah, because living in a city is always surrounded by the the tallest building which can't see the like the plants or the tree that can like they can provide the more oxygen.

✓ I would say yes, because living in a city is often surrounded by tall buildings, so you can't see many plants or trees that provide oxygen.

Use 'I would say' instead of 'I will say' for opinion. 'Is always surrounded by the the tallest building' has article and plurality errors; use 'is often surrounded by tall buildings.' 'Which can't see the like the plants' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'so you can't see many plants or trees.' Remove redundant words and correct word order.

× Are there any parks you want to go to in the future? Student: MMM, for now, I would say no because I've I can't remember the like I can't remember the people say at this at Instagram or Raynor that recommended the parks.

✓ For now, I would say no because I can't remember the names of the people on Instagram or Raynor who recommended parks.

Remove extraneous 'I've I'. Use 'I can't remember the names of the people' rather than 'the people say at this at Instagram'. Specify 'on Instagram' for correct preposition. 'Who recommended the parks' is correct relative clause placement. Clarify 'Raynor' if it is a proper name; keep as given.

× So but I have the interesting to see a lot of park like more redundant.

✓ But I am interested in seeing many parks in the future.

'I have the interesting' is incorrect; use 'I am interested'. 'a lot of park' should be 'many parks'. 'Like more redundant' is unclear and incorrect; rephrase to 'in the future' or 'more of them' depending on intended meaning. Use 'interested in' + gerund for preferences.