Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatical, complete the thought, avoid filler sounds, and give a short specific supporting detail. Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, then add one or two brief reasons using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "and"). Keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child because my parents often took me there to play on the swings and feed the ducks. I especially enjoyed picnics and meeting other children, so it was a happy place for me.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, remove fillers, and expand slightly with a linking word to explain why or how often you go. Use specific activities or feelings to make the answer more vivid.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I often meet my friends there for walks and my grandpa likes to sit and chat on the benches. We usually go on weekends to relax and get some fresh air.

Sugestão: Give a direct response and then explain why, using linking words. Be more precise about what you mean by a specific park type (e.g., family-friendly theme park) and mention benefits for the community to show reasoning.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks, especially a family-friendly theme park like Legoland, because it would attract visitors and provide fun activities for children. It could also boost local businesses and offer a safe place for families to spend weekends.

Sugestão: Use a more formal phrase than "wanna," give a reason or detail about what you want to do there, and use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it concise and specific.

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit Central Park in New York because I want to see its famous landscapes and try activities like boating on the lake. It seems like an iconic place for walking, people-watching, and photography.

× Yeah, I like going to parks when I was a child because I have, uh.

✓ Yeah, I liked going to parks when I was a child because I had, uh.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I like' with past time phrase 'when I was a child' causing a tense inconsistency. Use past tense 'liked' and 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use past tense verbs throughout statements about past habits or possessions (e.g., 'I liked going to parks when I was a child because I had...').

× Yeah, I do. Uh, I love going to parks now with my friends, with my grandpa.

✓ Yes, I do. I love going to parks now with my friends and with my grandpa.

The sentence uses present tense appropriately but is slightly informal and has punctuation/coordination issues. Change 'Yeah' to 'Yes' for formality and connect the two noun phrases with 'and' for standard coordination. Also no tense change is required since this refers to present habit. Suggestion: use 'and' to join items and keep present tense verbs for current habits.

× I would like see uh, like a Legoland park in my city.

✓ I would like to see, uh, a Legoland park in my city.

Missing the infinitival marker 'to' after 'would like' creates an incorrect verb phrase. Also remove redundant filler 'like' used twice. Use 'would like to see' + object for correct structure. Suggestion: always include 'to' after 'would like' when followed by a verb (e.g., 'I would like to visit the park').

× Yes, I wanna go to Central Park of New York.

✓ Yes, I want to go to Central Park in New York.

The contraction 'wanna' is informal and inappropriate for standard grammar; use 'want to'. Also preposition 'of' is not idiomatic for names of parks in locations; use 'in'. Use base verb 'want to' + infinitive 'go' for future intention. Suggestion: replace 'wanna' with 'want to' and use 'in' for location (e.g., 'I want to go to Central Park in New York').