Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar (past tense and articles), make a clear topic sentence, and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting details with linking words. Aim for 3–4 concise sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks when I was a child. I often played games there with my friends and spent a long time running around and trying different swings. Also, I liked watching other children play because it was entertaining and helped me learn new games.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and subject-verb agreement, combine related ideas with linking words, and be specific about activities. Keep answers within 3–4 sentences and avoid fragmented clauses.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because I often take my daughter there. She likes playing energetic games and practices basketball on the court. It is nice because she gets exercise and I can relax while watching her.

Sugestão: Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., articles, 'more parks', 'near their houses'), and use linking words to explain reasons clearly. Provide one clear reason and a short consequence.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because having parks near people’s homes makes it easier for children to play outside. As a result, they get more exercise and develop healthier bodies and social skills.

Sugestão: Organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence naming the park, then give specific reasons using linking words. Avoid fillers and repetition; use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'water activities').

Exemplo: Yes, there is one park I would like to visit in the future: a park near Niagara Falls. I want to go because it offers many activities, such as playgrounds, sports courts and water attractions, so it would be fun for my family and exciting to explore.

× Yes, I like to went to the park when I was child I played lot of games in the park with my friend and I enjoy.

✓ Yes, I liked going to the park when I was a child. I played a lot of games in the park with my friends and I enjoyed it.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'like to went' mixes present 'like' with past 'went' — use past 'liked' and the gerund 'going' for habitual past actions. 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a'. 'played lot of games' needs the article 'a' before 'lot' and plural 'friends'. 'I enjoy' should be past 'I enjoyed it' to match the past timeframe. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for childhood memories and use correct articles and plural forms.

× I enjoy a lot of time in the park and watch others as well.

✓ I enjoyed spending a lot of time in the park and watching others as well.

The sentence mixes present tense 'enjoy' with past context. Use past 'enjoyed'. Also use the gerund 'spending' to express time spent and 'watching' after 'and' to parallel the structure. Suggestion: use consistent past tense and gerunds for activities.

× Yes, I'm going to the park now as well because I'm taking my daughter in the park.

✓ Yes, I still go to the park because I take my daughter there.

'I'm going to the park now as well' is awkward for habitual action; use simple present 'I still go' for routines. 'I'm taking my daughter in the park' uses wrong preposition; use 'to the park' or simply 'there'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and correct prepositions.

× She also play hard and she can basketball game in the park.

✓ She also plays actively and she can play basketball in the park.

'She also play' lacks third person singular 's' — should be 'plays'. 'play hard' is informal; 'plays actively' or 'plays hard' with correct verb form. 'she can basketball game' is ungrammatical: need verb 'play' and noun phrase 'play basketball'. Suggestion: add 's' for third person and include correct verb 'play' before 'basketball'.

× She enjoyed a lot here.

✓ She enjoys it a lot here.

Context seems present (taking daughter now), so use present 'enjoys'. If speaker meant past, keep past but sentence is awkward. Also include pronoun 'it' after 'enjoys' and 'a lot' after verb. Suggestion: match tense to context and include object pronoun.

× Yes, I like to see more parks in in my city because I think if there is a more parks near the house so children gonna spend a lot of time in the park so they can use energy and they can build a body as well.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because I think if there are more parks near houses, children will spend a lot of time in the park, so they can use up their energy and build their bodies as well.

Many errors: 'like to see' better as 'would like to see' for preference. Duplicate 'in'. 'if there is a more parks' — subject-verb agreement and article: use 'if there are more parks' (plural). 'near the house' -> 'near houses' or 'near their houses'. 'gonna' is informal and incorrect in writing; use 'will'. 'use energy' needs 'use up their energy'. 'build a body' should be 'build their bodies' or 'develop their bodies'. Suggestion: fix articles, plurality, verb forms, avoid slang, and clarify possessives.

× Yes, one park is in my list.

✓ Yes, there is one park on my list.

Use 'there is' construction to state existence and 'on my list' is the correct prepositional phrase. 'in my list' is incorrect. Suggestion: use 'there is' for existence and correct preposition 'on' with 'list'.

× It's uh, near the Niagara uh, I would like to visit over there because there is a lot of lot of things in to do in the park like so many games and water game also in the park, so I wanna go there in the future.

✓ It's near Niagara. I would like to visit because there are a lot of things to do in the park, such as many games and water attractions, so I want to go there in the future.

Multiple issues: 'near the Niagara' – usually say 'near Niagara' or 'near the Niagara Falls' if specific. 'there is a lot of lot of things in to do' has duplication and wrong order: use 'there are a lot of things to do' (plural agreement). 'water game' is unclear; 'water attractions' or 'water activities' is better. 'wanna' is informal; use 'want to'. Suggestion: remove filler words, fix subject-verb agreement with 'there are', correct infinitive order 'things to do', and use appropriate vocabulary.