Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and grammatical: begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, and use correct verb forms. Add one brief reason to support your statement and use a linking word for coherence.

Exemplo: No, I did not enjoy going to parks as a child. Instead, I preferred visiting the zoo with my family because I loved seeing the animals and learning about them.

Sugestão: Correct grammar and sentence structure: start with a clear topic sentence, use correct subject-verb agreement, and reduce filler words. Add a concise supporting detail using a linking word.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy going to parks now. For example, my friends and I go every week to have a picnic and relax, which helps us unwind after a busy week.

Sugestão: Be precise with tenses and vocabulary. Begin with a clear opinion, use linking words, and provide a specific reason or result. Replace incorrect words (e.g., 'moulds') and correct past vs present verbs.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because there are few trees now. For example, many trees were cut down to make space for new buildings, so more parks would improve air quality and provide green spaces for residents.

Sugestão: Use natural phrasing, correct tense and grammar, and avoid fillers. Begin with a topic sentence, use a linking word to add detail, and give a specific reason why those parks appeal to you.

Exemplo: Yes, there are two parks I would like to visit in the future: Antoinette's and El Monteza. I want to go because they are known for their fresh air and peaceful atmosphere, which I think will help me relax.

× No, I didn't like to go to parks as a child, but uh, I was preferred to go to zoo with my family.

✓ No, I didn't like going to parks as a child, but I preferred to go to the zoo with my family.

The phrase 'didn't like to go' is acceptable but 'like going' is more natural here; however main issue matched to list is verb + -ing because 'going' should be used. 'Was preferred' is incorrect passive form; the correct active past simple is 'I preferred'. Also include the article 'the' before 'zoo'. Suggestion: use simple past 'preferred' and 'going' for habitual preference, and add 'the' before countable singular nouns such as 'zoo'.

× Yes, I like going to parks now because me and my friends going every week, uh, to the park, uh, doing picnic.

✓ Yes, I like going to parks now because my friends and I go every week to the park to have a picnic.

The original has multiple tense and pronoun problems. Use 'my friends and I' (correct pronoun order and subject form) instead of 'me and my friends'. The verb for habitual action should be simple present 'go', not 'going'. 'Doing picnic' is ungrammatical; use 'have a picnic'. Also place words in normal English order: 'go every week to the park'. Suggestion: use subject pronoun order 'my friends and I', present simple for habits, and set verbs correctly ('have a picnic').

× Yes, I like to see more parks in my city but sadly my city didn't have a lot of trees because engineers remove most of the trees to build buildings and moulds.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city, but sadly my city doesn't have a lot of trees because engineers have removed most of them to build buildings and malls.

Tense and verb forms are inconsistent. 'I like to see' is better as 'I would like to see' to express desire about the present/future. 'Didn't have' is past; for current state use 'doesn't have'. 'Remove' should be present perfect 'have removed' if referring to past actions affecting the present, or simple past 'removed' if strictly past; here present perfect fits. 'Moulds' is incorrect word choice; likely 'malls'. Also replace 'most of the trees' with 'most of them' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: match tense to present situation, use 'would like' for wishes, 'doesn't have' for current state and 'have removed' or 'removed' depending on intended meaning, and correct vocabulary.

× Yes, there are two parks I want to go to in the FUT future, uh such as Antoinette's and El Monteza because they have fresh air and making me relaxing.

✓ Yes, there are two parks I want to go to in the future, such as Antoinette and El Monteza, because they have fresh air and make me feel relaxed.

Remove redundant word 'FUT' and use 'in the future'. Park names likely don't need possessive 'Antoinette's' unless correct name; use 'Antoinette' if it's a park name. 'Making me relaxing' is incorrect: use 'make me feel relaxed' or 'are relaxing'. The structure 'there are two parks I want to go to' is correct 'there be' usage but needed fixes in following clause. Suggestion: simplify 'in the future', ensure proper noun forms, and use correct verb phrase 'make me feel relaxed' or 'are relaxing'.