Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one specific detail and a linking word. Avoid repetition and correct articles and verb forms.

Exemplo: Yes, I liked going to parks when I was a child. For example, I often played football with my friends and my family had picnics there on weekends, so those visits were always lively and fun.

Sugestão: Use present tense and connect ideas with a linking word. Give a specific reason and a brief example. Improve word forms (adjectives/adverbs) and articles.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because they help me feel refreshed and relaxed; for instance, I like to take a short walk among the trees after work to clear my mind.

Sugestão: Answer directly and correct grammar (use 'I think' or 'I would' and possessive/plural/singular forms). Add a specific reason and a linking phrase. Avoid filler words like 'Guess'.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because children need safe places to play and families can relax there; for example, a new playground would benefit local neighborhoods.

Sugestão: Be clear about time and use consistent verb tenses. State one or two specific parks or types of parks you want to visit and explain why with linking words. Correct grammar, articles, and word order.

Exemplo: Yes, in the future I want to visit larger botanical gardens or national parks while I study in Albert; these places would help me relax and enjoy the greenery, which is great for reducing stress.

× Yes, I would like to go park when I was child.

✓ Yes, I used to like going to the park when I was a child.

Original sentence mixes modal 'would like' (present desire) with a past-time reference 'when I was child' and omits articles and correct verb form. Use 'used to' or past simple to express habitual past action. Use 'going' (verb + -ing) after 'like' when describing activities, include the definite article 'the' before 'park' and add the article 'a' before 'child'. Suggestion: 'I used to like going to the park when I was a child.'

× I love to play with my friends and go on weekend with my family.

✓ I loved playing with my friends and going to the park on weekends with my family.

Sentence describes past habit so verb tense should be past. After 'love' or 'like' use gerund form for activities: 'playing' and 'going'. Include article 'the' before 'park' and plural 'weekends'. Use past 'loved' to match 'when I was a child'.

× Yes, I would like to go park because when I visit park I feel fresh and relax.

✓ Yes, I like going to the park because when I visit the park I feel refreshed and relaxed.

Question asks about present preference so use present simple 'like'. After 'like' for activities use gerund 'going'. Include definite article 'the' before 'park'. Use correct adjective forms: 'refreshed' and 'relaxed' rather than base verbs. 'Feel fresh' is less natural than 'feel refreshed'.

× Guess I would like to see more parks in my city because many children's love to play in park and I enjoy too.

✓ I would like to see more parks in my city because many children love to play in parks and I enjoy them too.

Remove informal 'Guess' and use 'I would like' for clarity. 'Children's' is incorrect possessive; use plural noun 'children'. Include plural 'parks' and use plural object pronoun 'them' to refer to parks. Also add article/number agreement and natural word order 'enjoy them too.'

× Yes, I would like to go many park in the future when I was when I will studying Albert and to get fresh mood where I can feel relax and peace with greenery.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit many parks in the future when I study at Albert, to refresh my mood and feel relaxed and peaceful among the greenery.

Sentence contains mixed tenses and missing articles. Use future intention 'would like' + base verb 'visit' and plural 'parks'. Replace incorrect 'when I was when I will studying' with 'when I study' or 'when I am studying' to indicate future study period. Use preposition 'at' before a place name (if Albert is a school). Use gerunds and adjectives correctly: 'to refresh my mood' and 'feel relaxed and peaceful'. Ensure parallel structure and correct word order.