Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (past tense), avoid repetitions, and add one specific detail about activities or memories. Keep to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word if adding detail.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to the park when I was a child. It was only a kilometre from my home and very popular with families, so I often played on the swings and fed ducks there.

Sugestão: Answer directly but give a clear reason and a brief supporting detail. Correct grammar (use ‘interested in going’ or ‘not interested in parks’) and avoid filler words. Use a linking word like ‘because’ or ‘however’ to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Not really, because I prefer playing cricket now and usually spend my free time at the cricket ground instead of parks.

Sugestão: Respond clearly to the question and expand with a relevant reason. Avoid wandering into unrelated past memories unless they support why you want more parks. Use one or two concise sentences and a linking phrase like ‘because’ or ‘for example’.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in the city because they provide safe spaces for exercise and socialising; for example, I used to play cricket with friends in a local park and it was great for community life.

Sugestão: Give a direct, forward-looking answer and mention a specific park or type of park and an activity you plan to do. Fix tense and sentence structure, avoid mixing past habits with future intentions, and keep it to 2–3 clear sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit a large city park nearby that has sports facilities. In the future I plan to go there with friends and cousins to play volleyball and go for runs.

× When I was a kid, I was going to the park.

✓ When I was a kid, I used to go to the park.

The original uses past continuous 'was going' which can imply an action in progress at a specific time; 'used to go' correctly expresses a habitual past action. Use 'used to' for repeated past activities.

× This park is nearby my home within one or two kilometer.

✓ This park was near my home, within one or two kilometers.

Use 'near' rather than 'nearby' before a noun phrase and use past tense 'was' to match 'When I was a kid'. Also pluralize 'kilometer' to 'kilometers' for quantities greater than one and add a comma for clarity.

× It is was very popular park in my area.

✓ It was a very popular park in my area.

Remove the extra auxiliary 'is' and use past tense 'was' to match time frame. Include the article 'a' before 'very popular park'.

× No, I don't.

✓ No, I don't anymore.

The short response 'No, I don't' is grammatically acceptable, but adding 'anymore' clarifies change from past preference; ensure tense and meaning align with prior statement about childhood habits.

× I'm not interested to going go to the park because I have, uh, another interest in playing cricket.

✓ I'm not interested in going to the park because I have another interest in playing cricket.

After 'interested' use the preposition 'in' plus gerund: 'interested in going'. Remove the extra words 'to' and duplicate 'go'. Also omit filler 'uh' and place 'another interest in playing cricket' or simply 'I'm more interested in playing cricket.'

× Uh, I remember that in 2019 I was going to the park with my friends and play cricket and, uh, I really enjoyed it.

✓ I remember that in 2019 I went to the park with my friends to play cricket, and I really enjoyed it.

When referring to a specific past event ('in 2019'), use simple past 'went' not past continuous. Use 'to play cricket' to express purpose or use gerund 'playing' with appropriate structure. Remove filler words and add comma before conjunction.

× Yes, definitely in the future I'm I used to go to the park with my friends and with my cousins to enjoy volleyball and also are running in the park.

✓ Yes, definitely in the future I will go to the park with my friends and cousins to play volleyball and go running in the park.

The original mixes present, past habitual 'used to', and incorrect verbs. For future intentions use 'will' or 'plan to'. Use parallel verbs 'play volleyball' and 'go running'. Remove redundant 'with' and fix subject-verb structure.