Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Begin with a clear, direct response that matches the tense (past). Avoid addressing the examiner as 'you' and give specific detail about what you liked. Use 1–3 supporting sentences with linking words. Focus on natural phrasing and correct grammar (e.g., 'I liked going to parks, especially botanical gardens because...').

Exemplo: I liked going to parks as a child, especially botanical gardens. I enjoyed looking at different plants and flowers because they were colorful and calm. Also, I liked feeding ducks sometimes, which made those visits memorable.

Sugestão: Give a concise topic sentence and then one or two clear supporting reasons. Fix grammar (use present tense) and replace unclear phrases ('attack me, attract me') with precise verbs ('interest me' or 'attract me'). Use linking words (for example, 'because' and 'also') and avoid repetition. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because the wildlife and plants interest me. In addition, I often exercise there — jogging or stretching — which helps me relax after a long day. For example, last week I walked for thirty minutes in a nearby park and felt much better afterwards.

Sugestão: Start with a direct opinion sentence and give specific reasons with linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so'). Correct grammar (use 'likes' → 'likes', 'many plant park' → 'many parks with plants', 'elder people' → 'older people'). Provide a concrete example of who benefits and how. Keep it natural and concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like more parks in the city because they improve air quality and provide free recreation. For example, older residents often gather there in the mornings to exercise and socialize, which supports both their health and community life.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly name a park you'd like to visit or a feature you want to see. Avoid vague or incorrect phrases ('high tick', 'cars fly on the sky'). Use specific vocabulary (e.g., 'observation tower', 'botanical conservatory', 'birdwatching area'). Give one short reason and an example of what you expect to see.

Exemplo: In the future, I would like to visit a park with an observation tower so I can see the city panorama. From the tower I hope to view busy streets, rivers and green spaces, and maybe spot birds flying above the skyline.

× You also like going to park, especially the plant park.

✓ You also liked going to parks, especially the botanical park.

The student used incorrect pronouns and article forms. 'You also like' should match past tense question 'Did you like' so use 'liked'. 'Going to park' needs an article or plural: 'going to parks' or 'going to the park'. 'Plant park' is unnatural; use 'botanical park' or 'plant park' with article. Suggestion: match tense with question and use appropriate articles and more natural vocabulary.

× Yes, I still like to go to the park because there are many interesting also attack me, attract me like the some animals in the park.

✓ Yes, I still like to go to the park because there are many interesting things that attract me, such as some animals in the park.

Tense and sentence structure were mixed and words misused. Keep present simple 'I still like'. 'Interesting also attack me, attract me' is ungrammatical; use 'interesting things that attract me'. 'the some animals' should be 'some animals' (no definite article with 'some'). Suggestion: use clear noun phrase 'interesting things' and relative clause 'that attract me'.

× Or I can do some exercise in the park and it can be can be relaxed when I was tired.

✓ Or I can do some exercise in the park and I can be relaxed when I am tired.

Mix of modal and tense errors. Use present modal 'can' + base verb 'be relaxed'. 'It can be can be relaxed' is redundant and incorrect. 'When I was tired' should be present 'when I am tired' to match 'can'. Suggestion: keep consistent tense and avoid repeating modals.

× Yes, because our government like the plant and we also have a many plant park and in my city there are many elder people so they will always have a a good time at the park.

✓ Yes, because our government likes plants and we also have many plant parks, and in my city there are many elderly people, so they always have a good time at the parks.

Multiple errors: subject-verb agreement 'government like' should be 'government likes' (third person singular). 'the plant' should be plural 'plants'. 'a many' is incorrect; use 'many' without 'a'. 'Plant park' should be plural 'plant parks' or 'botanical parks'. 'elder people' is nonstandard; use 'elderly people'. 'a a' duplicate article removed. Tense/modal 'they will always have' can be simplified to 'they always have' for general truth. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and correct quantifiers and adjective choice.

× For me, I think the more interesting part is like the a high tick, so I can see the many cars, uh, fly on the sky and see many, uh.

✓ For me, I think the most interesting place is something high, like a hill or observation deck, so I can see many cars, planes in the sky, and many other things.

This sentence has many vocabulary and structure problems. 'More interesting part' should be 'most interesting place' for comparison. 'Like the a high tick' is unintelligible; replace with plausible phrase 'something high, like a hill or observation deck'. 'See the many cars, uh, fly on the sky' should be 'see many cars and planes in the sky'. Suggestion: choose clear nouns and correct comparative/superlative forms and word order.