Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Begin with a clear, direct answer about your childhood, then add one or two specific supporting details. Keep sentences concise (max 5). Use past tense when referring to childhood and linking words (e.g., "when I was young", "but now") for coherence. Avoid repeating present-tense activities when the question asks about the past.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks as a child. When I was young, I often visited a small playground near my home where I would play on the swings and climb the jungle gym. Nowadays I still visit parks, but as a child I remember it felt like an adventure.

Sugestão: Start with a direct yes/no and then give two specific activities using linking words like "for example" or "also." Vary vocabulary (e.g., "have a picnic", "take photos") and use natural phrasing. Keep responses concise and avoid repetition of phrases such as "there" multiple times.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. For example, I often go with friends to have a picnic and play frisbee, and we also take photographs of the scenery.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then explain reasons with specific details and linking words like "because" or "so". Use natural phrases (e.g., "different kinds of parks") and correct collocations ("feel less stressed" or "feel relaxed"). Avoid vague phrases such as "if I get a chance I don't miss that chance."

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they offer different kinds of outdoor spaces. For instance, a riverside park or a botanical garden would help me relax after work and provide more places to exercise.

Sugestão: Do not ask the examiner to answer; instead clarify the question if you didn't hear it by saying something like "Could you repeat that, please?" Then answer briefly with a specific park or type of park you want to visit and a reason. Keep it natural and relevant.

Exemplo: Could you repeat the question, please? (If repeated) Yes — I would like to visit the city botanical garden next year because I have read it has rare plant collections and peaceful walking paths.

× Well, I don't clearly remember when I was a child. I go to the park. If I talk about now, I usually go to the park with my friend and we do lot of activities there.

✓ Well, I don't clearly remember when I was a child. I go to the park. If I talk about now, I usually go to the park with my friends and we do a lot of activities there.

Errors: 'my friend' vs 'my friends' – original context implies repeated visits with more than one or unspecified friend, but singular could be okay; however consistency and naturalness favour plural 'friends' when saying 'we do a lot of activities'. 'do lot of activities' is missing the article 'a' before 'lot' and should be 'a lot of activities'. Suggestion: use 'a lot of' to quantify activities and use 'friends' if you mean more than one or 'my friend' consistently if singular. Ensure articles with 'lot' are included.

× Yes, as I only mentioned, I usually go to the park with my friend and we do lot of activities there and sometimes we carry a food and we eat there and we click some pictures there.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned, I usually go to the park with my friends and we do a lot of activities there. Sometimes we bring food, eat there, and take some pictures.

Errors: 'as I only mentioned' is awkward; 'as I mentioned' is correct. 'my friend' -> 'my friends' for naturalness or keep singular consistently. 'do lot of activities' missing 'a'. 'carry a food' incorrect article and verb choice — use 'bring food' (no article) or 'carry food' without 'a'. 'we click some pictures' uses 'click' informally; standard verb is 'take pictures'. Suggestions: use 'a lot of' for quantity, use 'bring' for carrying food to a place, and use 'take pictures' for photographing.

× Yes, if I get a chance I don't miss that chance to visit like more different types of park. I love to visit park because I feel so stress free while going back.

✓ Yes, if I get the chance I won't miss it; I would like to visit different types of parks. I love visiting parks because I feel stress-free on the way back.

Errors: 'if I get a chance I don't miss that chance' mixes tenses and is ungrammatical; use conditional/modal structures: 'if I get the chance I won't miss it' or 'I would not miss the chance'. 'visit like more different types of park' is wordy and incorrect — use 'visit different types of parks' or 'more different types' is redundant. 'I love to visit park' needs articles: 'visit parks' or 'visit the park'. 'feel so stress free while going back' should be 'feel stress-free on the way back' or 'feel very relaxed when I return'. Suggestions: use proper conditional/modal forms, pluralize 'parks', include articles, and hyphenate 'stress-free'.

× Sorry, can you please answer me?

✓ Sorry, could you repeat the question?

Error: The student asked the examiner to answer them, which is inappropriate and likely a misunderstanding. Grammatically, 'can you please answer me?' is unusual in this context. Better responses are 'Could you repeat the question?' or 'Sorry, could you ask that again?' Suggestions: use polite request forms with 'could' and be specific about what you need (repeat, clarify, or rephrase).