Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, clarity and natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, use past tense consistently, and add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words if needed. For example, say you enjoyed parks as a child, mention who you went with and what you did there.

Exemplo: Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. I often went there with my parents, and we would have picnics and play on the swings, which made those visits very fun.

Sugestão: Make the answer natural and grammatically correct. Use present simple for general likes and explain reasons briefly with linking words. Replace unclear phrases ("enjoying my felt") with concrete activities and be specific about frequency.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, but because of work and time constraints I only visit them once in a blue moon. When I do go, I like to walk or relax on a bench to unwind.

Sugestão: Be direct and precise. Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give specific reasons and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid repetitive phrases and improve vocabulary (e.g., 'enhance the city's appearance' instead of 'give charm').

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they enhance the city's appearance and provide green spaces for people to relax and exercise.

Sugestão: Clarify the meaning and use correct conditional and future forms. Begin with a direct answer, then explain your plan or condition using a single conditional sentence. Keep it concise and specific about which park or what features you'd like to visit.

Exemplo: Not at the moment, but if a new park with good facilities were built in the city, I would definitely visit it to try the walking trails and playgrounds.

× Yes, I like to go. Yes, when I was at heart, I like to go park, especially with my parents.

✓ Yes, I liked going. When I was a child, I liked going to parks, especially with my parents.

The student mixes present and past tenses. The question asks about childhood, so past tense 'liked' is appropriate. 'When I was at heart' is incorrect idiom; 'when I was a child' is correct. 'Go park' needs the gerund 'going' or the infinitive with preposition 'to parks'; 'going to parks' is natural. Use plural 'parks' when speaking generally.

× Yes, I still like enjoying my felt in part, but due to some reason and time management I go to park once in a blue moon.

✓ Yes, I still enjoy going to parks, but because of various reasons and time management, I go to parks once in a blue moon.

Use 'enjoy' rather than 'like enjoying my felt in part' which is ungrammatical. The verb 'enjoy' takes a gerund: 'enjoy going'. Use plural 'parks' for general reference. Replace vague 'due to some reason' with 'because of various reasons'. Include commas for clarity.

× That is a really good question. I like to see more parks in my city because parks give charm and beauty to the city to city.

✓ That is a really good question. I would like to see more parks in my city because parks add charm and beauty to the city.

'I like to see' is odd for a preference about the future or desire; 'I would like to see' is more natural. 'Give charm and beauty to the city to city' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'add charm and beauty to the city.' Adjust verb 'give' to 'add' for collocation.

× No, there is no park yet. I want to go in the future but if a new parks were made in but if new park were made in the city, I would like to go.

✓ No, there are no parks yet. I want to visit in the future, and if a new park were built in the city, I would like to go.

Use plural 'parks' with 'there are' when referring to none existing. 'Want to go in the future' is vague; 'want to visit in the future' is clearer. Use conditional correctly: 'if a new park were built' (past subjunctive) or 'if a new park is built' (real possibility). Remove duplicated fragments and correct verb 'made' to 'built' for natural collocation.