Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, tense and add a brief supporting detail. Start with a clear topic sentence using past tense, then give one specific memory or reason using a linking word (e.g., because, and, so). Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks when I was a child because my family often had picnics there. I especially remember playing on the swings and feeding ducks in the pond.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and give a reason or contrast. Begin with a direct answer, then explain why using linking words (for example, because or although). Avoid unclear phrases like 'not going past'.

Exemplo: Not really, I don't visit parks much these days because I live in a busy area and have little free time. However, I sometimes go to a small green space near my office on weekends.

Sugestão: Expand with a specific reason and one example or benefit. Start with a direct answer, then explain why and give a concrete detail (e.g., health, community space, children's play areas). Use a linking word like because or for example.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide safe places for children to play. For example, a new park with playgrounds and walking paths would encourage families to spend more time outdoors.

Sugestão: Use formal language (avoid 'wanna'), give a specific park or type of park and explain why. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add a detail about when or what you expect to do there, using linking words like because or so.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the new riverside park next summer because it has cycling trails and a botanical garden. I plan to go there with friends to cycle and have a picnic.

× I like going to parks when I was child.

✓ I liked going to parks when I was a child.

This sentence mixes present tense 'I like' with a past time reference 'when I was child.' Use past tense 'liked' to match the past time. Also include the article 'a' before 'child.' Suggestion: use past tense for past habits and include necessary articles ('I liked going to parks when I was a child.').

× No, I'm not going past right now.

✓ No, I'm not going to parks right now.

The intended meaning is present continuous negative about current activity. 'I'm not going past' is incorrect: 'past' is wrong word and preposition. Use 'going to parks' and present continuous 'I'm not going to parks right now.' If you mean you don't go there currently as a habit, use 'I don't go to parks right now.'

× Yes, I wanna go parks in the future.

✓ Yes, I want to go to parks in the future.

'wanna' is informal/slang and should be 'want to' in standard English. Also the verb 'go' needs the preposition 'to' before the object 'parks.' Use 'want to go to parks' or specify 'want to visit parks.'