Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise, grammatically correct and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect verb forms.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went there with my friends to play football and ride the seesaw, which was my favorite because it was exciting. We also had picnics on the grass, so parks were a fun part of my childhood.

Sugestão: Use correct tense and simpler sentences. Begin with a direct answer, then give a clear reason and a brief contrast using linking words (for example, 'because' and 'however'). Avoid repeating words.

Exemplo: Not really; I don't visit parks regularly because I am very busy with my studies and need to focus on my academic work. However, I prefer going to the gym now because it fits better into my schedule.

Sugestão: Answer directly and organize reasons with linking words like 'for example' or 'because'. Give specific benefits and finish the sentence. Keep sentences compact and grammatical.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide safe spaces for exercise and socializing. For example, people can walk in the mornings, children can play on equipment, and older adults can sit and chat, which helps build community.

Sugestão: Provide a clear direct answer, then one brief reason. Avoid unclear phrases and finish your thought. Use correct verb forms and singular/plural agreement.

Exemplo: Not really; I don't plan to visit any parks in the near future because I usually don't have time due to my study schedule. If I had more free time, I might visit a nearby park for a walk.

× Yes, I used to love to go parks in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I used to love going to parks in my childhood.

The verb pattern 'used to' is commonly followed by the base verb or a gerund when indicating habitual activities; 'love to go parks' is ungrammatical because 'go' requires a preposition 'to' plus the place or the gerund 'going' with 'to parks'. Using 'love going to parks' is natural and correct.

× Yes, I used to love to go parks in my childhood.

✓ Yes, I used to love going to parks in my childhood.

The phrase 'go parks' omits the preposition 'to'. The correct structure is 'go to parks' or use the gerund 'going to parks'. Also 'in my childhood' is acceptable but 'when I was a child' is more natural.

× This is my field activity to do and I enjoy over there with my old friends and play the many games like football and seesaw is one of my favorite game in the park and I enjoy a lot and make thank you.

✓ It was my favorite outdoor activity; I enjoyed going there with my old friends and playing many games like football, and the seesaw was one of my favorite activities in the park.

The original sentence is run-on and contains mixed tense and incorrect noun forms. Break into clear clauses, use past tense 'was' and 'enjoyed' for childhood, use the gerund 'playing', pluralize 'games' and use 'one of my favorite activities' to match count. Remove 'make thank you' which is ungrammatical.

× This is my field activity to do and I enjoy over there with my old friends and play the many games like football and seesaw is one of my favorite game in the park and I enjoy a lot and make thank you.

✓ It was my favorite outdoor activity; I enjoyed going there with my old friends and playing many games like football, and the seesaw was one of my favorite activities in the park.

The context refers to past habitual actions, so past tense verbs ('was', 'enjoyed', 'played') should be used rather than present tense. Adjust verbs to past tense for consistency.

× No, I not visit regularly to the parks because of my busy schedule and I have to study and I have academically I have to perform better.

✓ No, I do not visit parks regularly because of my busy schedule; I have to study and perform better academically.

The original omits the auxiliary 'do' for negation and misorders phrases. Use 'do not visit parks regularly'. Move 'academically' to modify 'perform' and remove repeated 'I have'.

× No, I not visit regularly to the parks because of my busy schedule and I have to study and I have academically I have to perform better.

✓ No, I do not visit parks regularly because of my busy schedule; I have to study and perform better academically.

'Visit regularly to the parks' wrongly includes the preposition 'to'. The correct collocation is 'visit parks' or 'visit the parks' depending on specificity.

× But I rather rather than going parks, I go to the gym which is conveniently easy and easy.

✓ But rather than going to parks, I go to the gym, which is more convenient.

Use 'going to parks' with preposition 'to'. Avoid repeating 'rather'. 'Gym... which is conveniently easy and easy' is awkward; use 'which is more convenient' to compare. Remove duplicate words.

× But I rather rather than going parks, I go to the gym which is conveniently easy and easy.

✓ But rather than going to parks, I go to the gym, which is more convenient.

'Going parks' needs 'to': 'going to parks'. Also 'conveniently easy and easy' is ungrammatical; use 'more convenient'.

× Of course, I would like to see the park in my city because it's a people can in morning, people can walk in the park, a young people and older people, they can interact with each other and they will get a kind of space for their fun activities and and if it, it can be also used as a.

✓ Of course, I would like to see more parks in my city because people can go there in the morning to walk; young and older people can interact with each other and have space for recreational activities.

Use 'see more parks' to match the question. Fix verb forms: 'people can go there in the morning', 'walk in the park' is fine but 'go there to walk' is clearer. Remove redundancy and unfinished clause; 'recreational activities' is a clear phrase.

× Of course, I would like to see the park in my city because it's a people can in morning, people can walk in the park, a young people and older people, they can interact with each other and they will get a kind of space for their fun activities and and if it, it can be also used as a.

✓ Of course, I would like to see more parks in my city because people can go there in the morning to walk; young and older people can interact with each other and enjoy space for recreational activities.

The original is fragmented and repetitive with misplaced phrases. Reorganize into coherent clauses, fix verb patterns ('can go', 'can interact') and use concise vocabulary.

× No, I don't want to visit any park in futures because I kind usually I don't have time for to visit park and it's.

✓ No, I don't want to visit any park in the future because I usually don't have time to visit the park.

Use singular 'future' not 'futures'. 'I kind usually' is incorrect ordering and unnecessary 'kind'. Use 'usually' before the verb and 'time to visit the park' without extra 'for'. Also finish the sentence to be complete.

× No, I don't want to visit any park in futures because I kind usually I don't have time for to visit park and it's.

✓ No, I don't want to visit any park in the future because I usually don't have time to visit the park.

Remove extra preposition 'for to'. Use 'time to visit' rather than 'time for to visit' and correct article use 'the park' or 'parks' depending on meaning.