Parks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and directly answer, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and filler phrases. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood and a linking word (e.g., "because" or "so") to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because my family often spent weekends there. For example, we would have picnics under the trees and I enjoyed playing on the swings with my siblings.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons with linking words like "because" and "also." Cut fillers and unnecessary details (e.g., parking motorbike) unless they add meaning. Use present simple for habitual actions.

Exemplo: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks because my family often meets there to relax and talk. Also, I like walking on the paths for exercise, and visiting the park makes us feel happy and close to nature.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give clear, relevant reasons. Avoid contradicting statements (saying parks are beautiful but you have no time) without explanation. Use linking words like "because" or "however" and keep sentences short and grammatical.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve people's health and make neighborhoods more attractive. However, I rarely visit them myself because I am often busy with work and other commitments.

Sugestão: Give a definite yes/no, then specify which park and why. Avoid incorrect terms ("parking lots") and vague references ("University of America"). Use future forms and add one specific reason or detail to make your answer convincing.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit some famous parks in the United States, especially the national parks like Yellowstone. I want to see the geysers and wildlife there because I enjoy nature and photography.

× Yes, of course. I like going to parks as a child because I was happy when I went to the park with my family because we usually go there to spend our time and they usually go there to what can I say to take moment.

✓ Yes, of course. I liked going to parks as a child because I was happy when I went to the park with my family; we usually went there to spend time together and to relax.

The sentence mixes present tense 'I like' and 'we usually go' with past context 'as a child' and 'I was happy.' Use past tense 'liked' and 'went' to match the time frame. Also simplify awkward phrasing 'to what can I say to take moment' to 'to relax' for clarity. Suggestion: keep verbs consistent with the time reference and use concise expressions for purposes (e.g., 'to spend time together', 'to relax').

× Yes. I still like uh going to the park because uh we usually go there with my family to spend our time yes and uh sometimes we go there to park our uh motorbike and uh.

✓ Yes. I still like going to the park because we usually go there with my family to spend time, and sometimes we go there to park our motorbike.

This sentence largely uses present tense appropriately for current habits, but it contains filler words and repetition. Remove hesitations ('uh') and redundant phrases ('to spend our time yes and uh') and correct 'to park our motorbike' which is fine but should be joined cleanly. Suggestion: speak concisely and eliminate fillers to improve grammatical clarity.

× I sometimes drop my mom there yes.

✓ I sometimes drop my mom off there.

The verb phrase for leaving someone at a place is 'drop someone off', not 'drop someone there'. Use 'off' to indicate the action. Keep present tense 'sometimes drop' for habitual events. Suggestion: use common phrasal verbs correctly (drop off, pick up).

× We are feeling happy there.

✓ We feel happy there.

Present continuous 'are feeling' implies a temporary action happening now; for habitual or general state use simple present 'feel'. Here the student is describing a usual feeling when visiting parks, so 'We feel happy there' is more natural. Suggestion: use simple present to describe regular feelings or habits.

× Of course, I would like to see a more park in my country because there are very beautiful and I don't have time to to go there because I I usually watch American movies and I am very busy.

✓ Of course, I would like to see more parks in my country because they are very beautiful, but I don't have time to go there because I usually watch American movies and I am very busy.

'A more park' is ungrammatical: use 'more parks' (plural) when referring to an increased number. 'There are very beautiful' lacks a subject for the adjective; replace with 'they are very beautiful.' Remove duplicated words ('to to', 'I I'). Also join ideas with 'but' to show contrast. Suggestion: choose singular/plural correctly and ensure pronoun references agree with the noun.

× Yes, I don't have any time to go there.

✓ Yes, I don't have any time to go there.

This sentence is grammatically correct for expressing lack of free time in the present; no correction needed. Suggestion: none.

× Yes, uh, kind of because, umm, I would like to go to the United States of America to visit some uh, parking lots and uh, to stay there too.

✓ Yes, kind of, because I would like to go to the United States to visit some parks and stay there too.

'Parking lots' refers to car parking areas; the intended word is 'parks' (public recreational areas). The modal 'would like to' is correct. Remove hesitations. Suggestion: use the correct noun ('parks') and avoid filler words.

× Uh, especially I want to visit the, the park in, in the University of America.

✓ Especially, I want to visit the park at the American university.

Repeated 'the, the' and hesitations should be removed. 'University of America' is not a common proper name; use 'an American university' or 'the American university' depending on context. 'Park in the University' is better expressed as 'park at the university.' Suggestion: use standard institution naming ('an American university') and correct preposition ('at').

× Yes, it is still in my mind.

✓ Yes, it is still on my mind.

The idiom is 'on my mind' not 'in my mind' when referring to something you are thinking about or still planning. Use present tense 'is' correctly for ongoing thought. Suggestion: learn common idiomatic prepositions with nouns ('on my mind').